开头万能公式:
(#8B 3%)@c P:? 1. 开头万能公式一:名人名言
RoNE7|gF: 有人问了,“我没有记住名言,怎么办?尤其是英语名言?”,很好办:编!
Vllxv6/_ 原理:我们看到的东西很多都是创造出来的,包括我们欣赏的文章也是,所以尽管编,但是一定要听起来很有道理呦!而且没准将来我们就是名人呢!对吧?
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/}9)ZYMx A proberb says, “ You are only young once.” (适用于已记住的名言)
zI4d|P It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever.
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\>x1#Vr>#V 2. 开头万能公式二:数字统计
_|T{2LvwT 原理:要想更有说服力,就应该用实际的数字来说明。
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mZO-^ct4 According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college
?TJ4L/"(k6 students wanted to further their study after their graduation.
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-[}Aka,f! Honesty
4U~'Oa@p 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,大学生向老师请假的理由当中78%都是假的。
yzZzaYv "/ Travel by Bike
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HJBGxyw Youth
5h |aX 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,在某个大学,学生的课余时间的70%都是在休闲娱乐。
TO.STK` Five-day Work Week Better than Six-day Work?
|?nYs>K 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,98%的人同意每周五天工作日。
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结尾万能公式:
;K~=? k m(o`; 1. 结尾万能公式一:如此结论
;Yv{)@'Bc 说完了,毕竟要归纳一番,相信各位都有这样的经历,领导长篇大论,到最后终于冒出个“总而言之”之类的话,我们马上停止开小差,等待领导说结束语。也就是说,开头很好,也必然要有一个精彩的结尾,让读者眼前一亮,这样,你就可以拿高分了!比如下面的例子:
JdLPIfI^ Obviously(此为过渡短语), we can draw the conclusion that good
_`gkYu3R+ manners arise from politeness and respect for others.
@3$ I 如果读者很难“显而见之”,但说无妨,就当读者的眼光太浅罢了!
*rbgDaQ 更多过渡短语:
www.zlbbs.net _>n)HG to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus
l0;u$ 更多句型:
wEwRW Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find that…
wVFa51a)yy 2. 结尾万能公式二:如此建议
tQRbNY#}Z 如果说“如此结论”是结尾最没用的废话,那么“如此建议”应该是最有价值的废话了,因为这里虽然也是废话,但是却用了一个很经典的虚拟语气的句型。拽!
M$.bC0}T Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve
po\jhfn the problem.
w=<E) 这里的虚拟语气用得很经典,因为考官本来经常考这个句型,而如果我们自己写出来,你说考官会怎么想呢?
(+;D~iN` k 更多句型:
j`q>YPp Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.
,9}JPv4Z Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be
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p`rjWpH 写作的“七项基本原则”:一、 长 短 句原则
/4OQx0Xmm XR9kxTuk 工作还得一张一驰呢,老让读者读长句,累死人!写一个短小精辟的句子,相反,却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末,也可以揭示主题:
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pbDr:kBL satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite
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2;*G!rE&*` 如此可见,长短句结合,抑扬顿挫,岂不爽哉?牢记!
f4*(rX 强烈建议:在文章第一段(开头)用一长一短,且先长后短;在文章主体部分,要先用一个短句解释主要意思,然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式,定会让主体部分妙笔生辉!文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。二、
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,r~^<m 国有其君,家有其主,文章也要有其主。否则会给人造成“群龙无首”之感!相信各位读过一些破烂文学,故意把主体隐藏在文章之内,结果造成我们稀里糊涂!不知所云!所以奉劝各位一定要写一个主题句,放在文章的开头(保险型)或者结尾,让读者一目了然,必会平安无事!
?lgE9I] 特别提示:隐藏主体句可是要冒险的!
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,1B4FAR& prepared before the exam(主题句). Without sufficient preparation,
x=a#|]ngG you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.三、
l{.PyU5) 一 二 三原则
yK"\~t[@X: 领导讲话总是第一部分、第一点、第二点、第三点、第二部分、第一点…
qGR1$\] 如此罗嗦。可毕竟还是条理清楚。考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否结构清楚,条理自然。破解方法很简单,只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了。
FZ<6 kk4 1)first, second, third, last(不推荐,原因:俗)
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eYoc(bG(+ 3)the first, the second, the third, the last(不推荐,原因:俗)
"QS(4yw?jg 4)in the first place, in the second place, in the third place,
|x1Ttr, lastly(不推荐,原因:俗)
~H?v L c;> 5)to begin with, then, furthermore, finally(强烈推荐)
{wt9/IlG1 6)to start with, next, in addition, finally(强烈推荐)
dc~vQDNw[X 7)first and foremost, besides, last but not least(强烈推荐)
Pq35w#`! 8)most important of all, moreover, finally
S/y(1.wh 9)on the one hand, on the other hand(适用于两点的情况)
K*'AjT9wX+ 10)for one thing, for another thing(适用于两点的情况)
s2QgR37s> 建议:不仅仅在写作中注意,平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚!四、 短语优先原则
? N]bFW"t| 写作时,尤其是在考试时,如果使用短语,有两个好处:其一、用短语会使文章增加亮点,如果老师们看到你的文章太简单,看不到一个自己不认识的短语,必然会看你低一等。相反,如果发现亮点—精彩的短语,那么你的文章定会得高分了。其二、关键时刻思维短路,只有凑字数,怎么办?用短语是一个办法!比如:
Ktzn)7- I cannot bear it.
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#z.\pd I want it.
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>.C$2bW<L 这样字数明显增加,表达也更准确。五、 多实少虚原则
GpO@1 C/ 原因很简单,写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西,不要空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用实词,少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。比如我们说一个很好的时候,不应该之说nice这样空洞的词,应该使用一些诸如generous,
_h=h43'3 humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital
=yqg,w&Q 之类的形象词。再比如:
p>pAU$k{O 走出房间,general的词是:walk out of the room
U'5p;j)_ 但是小偷走出房间应该说:slip out of the room
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@N>rOA 小孩走出房间应该说:dance out of the room
98<^!mwF 老人走出房间应该说:stagger out of the room
+&_n[; 所以多用实词,少用虚词,文章将会大放异彩!六、 多变句式原则
QiRx2Z*\ 1)加法(串联)
r[j@@[)" 都希望写下很长的句子,像个老外似的,可就是怕写错,怎么办,最保险的写长句的方法就是这些,可以在任何句子之间加and,
+{)V%"{u: 但最好是前后的句子又先后关系或者并列关系。比如说:
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.J5or 其它的短语可以用:
4HXNu, T' besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover
: NH'>' 2)转折(拐弯抹角)
)MM(HS 批评某人缺点的时候,我们总习惯先拐弯抹角说说他的优点,然后转入正题,再说缺点,这种方式虽然阴险了点,可毕竟还比较容易让人接受。所以呢,我们说话的时候,只要在要点之前先来点废话,注意二者之间用个专这次就够了。
wYHyVY2tj2 The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition.
6XVJ/qZ The coat was thin, but it was warm.
)[t3-' 更多的短语:
(%M:=zm despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of,
}T=\hM despite, notwithstanding
IifH=%2Y 3)因果(so, so, so)
T5 BoOVgO 昨天在街上我看到了一个女孩,然后我主动搭讪,然后我们去咖啡厅,然后我们认识了,然后我们成为了朋友…可见,讲故事的时候我们总要追求先后顺序,先什么,后什么,所以然后这个词就变得很常见了。其实这个词表示的是先后或因果关系!
P(zquKm The snow began to fall, so we went home.
cC,gd\}M 更多短语:
e=Kr>~q= then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a
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n ZS*"O#L 4)失衡句(头重脚轻,或者头轻脚重)
EmcwX4| 有些人脑袋大,身体小,或者有些人脑袋小,身体大,虽然我们不希望长成这个样子,可如果真的是这样了,也就必然会吸引别人的注意力。文章中如果出现这样的句子,就更会让考官看到你的句子与众不同。其实就是主语从句,表语从句,宾语从句的变形。
RveMz$Yy 举例:This is what I can do.
;|K(6) Whether he can go with us or not is not sure.
VoUAFEcs 同样主语、宾语、表语可以改成如下的复杂成分:
Tq >?.bq9 When to go, Why he goes away…
4\8k~# 5)附加(多此一举)
"[]72PC 如果有了老婆,总会遇到这样的情况,当你再讲某个人的时候,她会插一句说,我昨天见过他;或者说,就是某某某,如果把老婆的话插入到我们的话里面,那就是定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语。
;,LlOR The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.
+f?xVW<h I don’t enjoy that book you are reading.
q|ZQsFZ Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going.
C[(Exe 其实很简单,同位语--要解释的东西删除后不影响整个句子的构成;定语从句—借用之前的关键词并且用其重新组成一个句子插入其中,但是whom
BhJ~ jV" or that 关键词必须要紧跟在先行词之前。
='r4zz 6)排比(排山倒海句)
)c<5:c 文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此,如果非要让你的文章更加精彩的话,那么我希望你引用一个个的排比句,一个个得对偶句,一个个的不定式,一个个地词,一个个的短语,如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势!
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rru `%~'O Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such
<%rG*vzi as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean
$PNIuC?= tides.
Lpdp'9>I We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge,
/ZKO\q to realize our potentials and to pay for our life. (气势恢宏)
P/FO, S-V 要想写出如此气势恢宏的句子非用排比不可!七、 挑战极限原则
8[;U|SR" 既然十挑战极限,必然是比较难的,但是并非不可攀!
~3 z10IG 原理:在学生的文章中,很少发现诸如独立主格的句子,其实也很简单,只要花上5分钟的时间看看就可以领会,它就是分词的一种特殊形式,分词要求主语一致,而独立主格则不然。比如:
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%k3a34P@ Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about
z|SLH<~ three times that of China.
1]v.Qu< 如果您可一些出这样的句子,不得高分才怪!
hQgi--Msw' 文章主体段落三大杀手锏:一、举实例
g=:C/>g _,;c2 思维短路,举实例!提出一个观点,举实例!提出一个方案,举实例!而且者也是我们揭示一个观点最好的方式,任何情况下,只要我们无法继续文章,不管三七二十一,尽管举例子!
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MqI!i> sound, light, colours, cartoon films and human performance.
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W!z=AL{ To take … as an example, One example is…, Another example is…,
Zl.}J,0F for example二、做比较
/W/ =OPe 方法:写完一个要点,比较与之相似的;又写完一个要点,再比较与之相反的;
@QMMtfeLj 世界上没有同样的指纹,没有相同的树叶,文章亦同,只有通过比较,你才会发现二者的相同点(through
5o2;26c comparison)和不同点(through contrast)。下面是一些短语:
Y9 ,KOs 相似的比较:
}}l04kN_ in comparison, likewise, similarly, in the same manner
0AFjO) 相反的比较:
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pNI=HHx nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with …,
Je+z\eT!5< …三、换言之
o|AV2FM) 没话说了,可以换一句话再说,让你的文章在多一些字,或者文邹邹地说,是让读者更充分的理解你的观点。
V\WqA8 实际就是重复重复再重复!下面的句子实际上就三个字 I love you!
W)?B{\ I am enthusiastic about you. That is to say, I love you.
3xh~xE I am wild about you. In other words, I have fallen in love
/e6\F7 with you.
Y+syc dq 或者上面我们举过的例子:
zVYX#- nv I cannot bear it.
InMF$pw 可以用短语表达:I cannot put up with it.
tD.md_E 因此可以这样说:I cannot bear it. That is to say, I cannot put up with
,D3?N2mB it or I am fed up with it.
)&<BQIv9/ 更多短语:
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