开头万能公式:
T0%TeFY Ws)X5C=A 1. 开头万能公式一:名人名言
y$o=\: 有人问了,“我没有记住名言,怎么办?尤其是英语名言?”,很好办:编!
}c ;um 原理:我们看到的东西很多都是创造出来的,包括我们欣赏的文章也是,所以尽管编,但是一定要听起来很有道理呦!而且没准将来我们就是名人呢!对吧?
**w~ 经典句型:
@H0%N53nE A proberb says, “ You are only young once.” (适用于已记住的名言)
:b*`hWnQ It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever.
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9Pk3}f)a 更多经典句型:
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A>%UYA 2. 开头万能公式二:数字统计
GY]6#>D#7 原理:要想更有说服力,就应该用实际的数字来说明。
<<5 :zlb 原则上在议论文当中十不应该出现虚假数字的,可是在考试的时候哪管那三七二十一,但编无妨,只要我有东西写就万事大吉了。所以不妨试用下面的句型:
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I@Z*Nu1L 看起来这个数字文邹邹的,其实都是编造出来的,下面随便几个题目我们都可以这样编造:
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0gD59N'C 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,大学生向老师请假的理由当中78%都是假的。
OMI!=Upz Travel by Bike
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s8Ry}{ 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,在某个大学,学生的课余时间的70%都是在休闲娱乐。
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eOPCYyN 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,98%的人同意每周五天工作日。
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]VG84bFm Ms'TC;&PS 1. 结尾万能公式一:如此结论
j)tCr Py 说完了,毕竟要归纳一番,相信各位都有这样的经历,领导长篇大论,到最后终于冒出个“总而言之”之类的话,我们马上停止开小差,等待领导说结束语。也就是说,开头很好,也必然要有一个精彩的结尾,让读者眼前一亮,这样,你就可以拿高分了!比如下面的例子:
>+jbMAYSq Obviously(此为过渡短语), we can draw the conclusion that good
7|M $W(P manners arise from politeness and respect for others.
"ex~LB 如果读者很难“显而见之”,但说无妨,就当读者的眼光太浅罢了!
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N~S[xS? to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus
9p\Hx#^ 更多句型:
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Q_]!an( 2. 结尾万能公式二:如此建议
&. =}g] 如果说“如此结论”是结尾最没用的废话,那么“如此建议”应该是最有价值的废话了,因为这里虽然也是废话,但是却用了一个很经典的虚拟语气的句型。拽!
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N5f0|U& 更多句型:
v(Bp1~PPZM Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.
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/nY).lSH 写作的“七项基本原则”:一、长 短 句原则
8yE%X!E YV1a3 工作还得一张一驰呢,老让读者读长句,累死人!写一个短小精辟的句子,相反,却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末,也可以揭示主题:
;-9zMbte: As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is
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2Ft8dfdm` 如此可见,长短句结合,抑扬顿挫,岂不爽哉?牢记!
CQBT:: 强烈建议:在文章第一段(开头)用一长一短,且先长后短;在文章主体部分,要先用一个短句解释主要意思,然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式,定会让主体部分妙笔生辉!文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。二、
tKG;k"wk 主 题 句原则
192 .W+H< 国有其君,家有其主,文章也要有其主。否则会给人造成“群龙无首”之感!相信各位读过一些破烂文学,故意把主体隐藏在文章之内,结果造成我们稀里糊涂!不知所云!所以奉劝各位一定要写一个主题句,放在文章的开头(保险型)或者结尾,让读者一目了然,必会平安无事!
)BF \!sTn 特别提示:隐藏主体句可是要冒险的!
g,n-s+ To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully
W$ JY M3! prepared before the exam(主题句). Without sufficient preparation,
ERfd7V<c> you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.三、
/FP ~jV!z 一 二 三原则
qPXANx<^ 领导讲话总是第一部分、第一点、第二点、第三点、第二部分、第一点…
2I]]WBW#: 如此罗嗦。可毕竟还是条理清楚。考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否结构清楚,条理自然。破解方法很简单,只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了。
:u>W&D 1)first, second, third, last(不推荐,原因:俗)
m\*&2Na 2)firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally(不推荐,原因:俗)
j<l#qho{h 3)the first, the second, the third, the last(不推荐,原因:俗)
hi ;WFyJTu 4)in the first place, in the second place, in the third place,
U;x1}eFT lastly(不推荐,原因:俗)
gB/;clCdX) 5)to begin with, then, furthermore, finally(强烈推荐)
xHEVR!&c4 6)to start with, next, in addition, finally(强烈推荐)
6-*~t8 7)first and foremost, besides, last but not least(强烈推荐)
PoYr:=S? 8)most important of all, moreover, finally
; @7 9)on the one hand, on the other hand(适用于两点的情况)
PU^[HC*K 10)for one thing, for another thing(适用于两点的情况)
n\Z^K 建议:不仅仅在写作中注意,平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚!四、短语优先原则
y0scL7/ 写作时,尤其是在考试时,如果使用短语,有两个好处:其一、用短语会使文章增加亮点,如果老师们看到你的文章太简单,看不到一个自己不认识的短语,必然会看你低一等。相反,如果发现亮点—精彩的短语,那么你的文章定会得高分了。其二、关键时刻思维短路,只有凑字数,怎么办?用短语是一个办法!比如:
/J1S@- I cannot bear it.
f*{M3"$E 可以用短语表达:I cannot put up with it.
X!U]`Qh I want it.
Jq#[uX 可以用短语表达:I am looking forward to it.
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:6 Uk) 之类的形象词。再比如:
c *.G]nRc 走出房间,general的词是:walk out of the room
xM% H~( 但是小偷走出房间应该说:slip out of the room
AiY|O S3R *****走出房间应该说:sail out of the room
i%xI9BO9 小孩走出房间应该说:dance out of the room
"(0oP9lZ 老人走出房间应该说:stagger out of the room
M]J[6EW 所以多用实词,少用虚词,文章将会大放异彩!六、多变句式原则
BD hLz 1)加法(串联)
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W 都希望写下很长的句子,像个老外似的,可就是怕写错,怎么办,最保险的写长句的方法就是这些,可以在任何句子之间加and,
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+*n]tlk I enjor music and he is fond of playing guitar.
$b4*/vMr 如果是二者并列的,我们可以用一个超级句式:
:[L{KFQU Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm.
]AFj&CteZ/ 其它的短语可以用:
vZ:G8K)o( besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover
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s5Pq$< 批评某人缺点的时候,我们总习惯先拐弯抹角说说他的优点,然后转入正题,再说缺点,这种方式虽然阴险了点,可毕竟还比较容易让人接受。所以呢,我们说话的时候,只要在要点之前先来点废话,注意二者之间用个专这次就够了。
g+igxC}2z The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition.
>+L7k^[,0 The coat was thin, but it was warm.
m[8IEKo 更多的短语:
P2O\!'aEh despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of,
_jW>dU^B despite, notwithstanding
B@d1xjp)'] 3)因果(so, so, so)
5;}2[3}[ 昨天在街上我看到了一个女孩,然后我主动搭讪,然后我们去咖啡厅,然后我们认识了,然后我们成为了朋友…可见,讲故事的时候我们总要追求先后顺序,先什么,后什么,所以然后这个词就变得很常见了。其实这个词表示的是先后或因果关系!
6Ux[,]GK The snow began to fall, so we went home.
1bd$XnU 更多短语:
CdZnD#F2 then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a
|ribWCv0 result, for this reason, so that
U4=]#=R~o 4)失衡句(头重脚轻,或者头轻脚重)
;r3}g"D@ 有些人脑袋大,身体小,或者有些人脑袋小,身体大,虽然我们不希望长成这个样子,可如果真的是这样了,也就必然会吸引别人的注意力。文章中如果出现这样的句子,就更会让考官看到你的句子与众不同。其实就是主语从句,表语从句,宾语从句的变形。
xF&6e&nv 举例:This is what I can do.
7vw;Egd@@- Whether he can go with us or not is not sure.
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36nyu_h:R When to go, Why he goes away…
>d#3|;RY 5)附加(多此一举)
axtb<5& 如果有了老婆,总会遇到这样的情况,当你再讲某个人的时候,她会插一句说,我昨天见过他;或者说,就是某某某,如果把老婆的话插入到我们的话里面,那就是定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语。
|88CBiu} The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.
Cpe#[mE I don’t enjoy that book you are reading.
w\Iqzpikr Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going.
"sD1T3!\)Q 其实很简单,同位语--要解释的东西删除后不影响整个句子的构成;定语从句—借用之前的关键词并且用其重新组成一个句子插入其中,但是whom
p=H3Q?HJ} or that 关键词必须要紧跟在先行词之前。
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BGN9,ii 文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此,如果非要让你的文章更加精彩的话,那么我希望你引用一个个的排比句,一个个得对偶句,一个个的不定式,一个个地词,一个个的短语,如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势!
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S"Kq^DN or simple, there is plenty in London for you.
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a_MFQf&KV as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean
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iy}xICt 既然十挑战极限,必然是比较难的,但是并非不可攀!
Kr]z]4.d@ 原理:在学生的文章中,很少发现诸如独立主格的句子,其实也很简单,只要花上5分钟的时间看看就可以领会,它就是分词的一种特殊形式,分词要求主语一致,而独立主格则不然。比如:
%A)538F The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb
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XhN{S]Wn three times that of China.
r**f,PDZ 如果您可一些出这样的句子,不得高分才怪!
VX!hv`E 文章主体段落三大杀手锏:一、举实例
8#l+{`$z #)]E8=} 思维短路,举实例!提出一个观点,举实例!提出一个方案,举实例!而且者也是我们揭示一个观点最好的方式,任何情况下,只要我们无法继续文章,不管三七二十一,尽管举例子!
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wDKELQ(yH every possible stimulative factor in making ads, such as
zN")elBi sound, light, colours, cartoon films and human performance.
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:j,}{)5= seemingly delicious food while they fime him or her.
o(fy d)t 更多句型:
O aaH$B To take … as an example, One example is…, Another example is…,
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for example二、做比较
;_N5>3C: 方法:写完一个要点,比较与之相似的;又写完一个要点,再比较与之相反的;
J@Yj\9U 世界上没有同样的指纹,没有相同的树叶,文章亦同,只有通过比较,你才会发现二者的相同点(through
http://www.freekaobo.com/post.php?fid=67 M*`hDdS comparison)和不同点(through contrast)。下面是一些短语:
#xp(B5 相似的比较:
]0-<> in comparison, likewise, similarly, in the same manner
Y0Rg Jn 相反的比较:
iRve) on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead,
0T9.M( nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with …,
|,sMST% …三、换言之
Y;_T=L 没话说了,可以换一句话再说,让你的文章在多一些字,或者文邹邹地说,是让读者更充分的理解你的观点。
vRr9%zx 实际就是重复重复再重复!下面的句子实际上就三个字 I love you!
$[z<oN_Q I am enthusiastic about you. That is to say, I love you.
$5A^'q I am wild about you. In other words, I have fallen in love
PeNF+5s/K with you.
R=$Ls6z 或者上面我们举过的例子:
h<NRE0- I cannot bear it.
#PFO]j!_b 可以用短语表达:I cannot put up with it.
l$M +.GB< 因此可以这样说:I cannot bear it. That is to say, I cannot put up with
!y*oF{RZ it or I am fed up with it.
BS2?!;,8 更多短语:
%5Rq1 $D in more difficult language, in simpler words, put it more
(>AFyh&3,X simply