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As far as I am concerned, my favor goes to ______________. {,3>"
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2、普遍正现象 &atuK*W>
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It is widely acknowledged/ discussed that 1|RANy
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People differ in their attitude towards something. *#E
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In view of such serious situation, something is more important than ever before. V@Rrn <l
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A negatively impact B
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Although A contributes greatly to B, it may inevitably have negative impacts. 0/!dUWdKH
On the other hand, the contribution of A cannot be ignored. q8s0AN'@t'
As a popular saying goes, “everything has tow sides.”