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一篇文章通常可分为三个部分,即开头、正文和结尾。这三个部分安排是否得体,直接影响到文章的质量。 文章的开头一般来说应尽量做到开门见山,用简单明白的叙述引出文章的话题,使读者了解文章要谈论什么,一下于引起读者的兴趣。 !w9w{dtW=
作文常见的开头形式大致有以下几种: 8#MiM . f
1.开门见山,揭示主题 V=v7<I=
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文章一开头,,就交待清楚文章的主题是什么。如“How I Spent My Vacation”(我怎样度假)的开头是: I Spent my last vacation happily. h NCoX*icd
下面是题为"Honesty"(谈诚实)一文中的开头: Dqw?3 KB
Honesty is one of the best virtues.An honest man is always trusted and respected.On the contrary, one who tells lies is regarded as a "liar",and is looked upon by honest people. oHbG-p
2.交代人物、事情、时间或环境开头 -}Iw!p#O3
在文章的开头,先把人物、事件和环境交待清楚。例如"A Trip to Jinshan" (去金山旅游)的开头: 1/H9(2{L
The day before yesterday my class went on a bus trip to Jinshan. The bus ride there took three hours. The long trip made us very tired, but the sight of the beautiful sea refreshed us. @m=xCg.Z
3. 回忆性的开头 ?{O >&<~
用回忆的方法来开头。例如"A Trip to the Taishan Mountain"(泰山游)的开头是: 1[;~>t@C
I remember my first trip to the Taishan Mountain as if it were yesterday. 5fdB<& 9
4.概括性的开头 0Lo)Ni^"
即对要在文章中叙述的人或事先作一个概括性的介绍。如“The Happiness of Reading Books”(读书的快乐)的开头: 2yyJ19Iul
People often say that gold and silver are the most valuable things in the world. But I say that to read books is more valuable than anything else, because books give us knowledge and knowledge gives us power. dSkW[r9Z%l
5.介绍环境式的开头 f/Lyc=-]
即开头利用自然景物或自然环境引出要介绍的事物。如“An Accident”(一场事故)的开头是: FesXY856E
It was a rainy and windy morning. The sky was gloomy, the temperature was low, and the street was nearly empty. I was on my way back to school. Suddenly, a speeding car came round the corner. f;nO$h[Qb
6.交待写作目的的开头。 cq=ker zQ
在文章的一开头就交待写作目的,如通过文章要表扬谁,批评谁,或说明一个什么问题等。如 "Pollution Control" (控制污染)的开头: QD}'2{M!
In this article I shall draw your attention to the subject of pollution control. H7xyK
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文章的正文是由若干段落组成的,段落通常由几个或者更多的句子组成,有时候一个句子也能成段。 s5DEuu>g
文章的正文应以文章的开头为线索,具体地叙述、说明或论证文章的主题。文章不论长短,每个段落都必须为主题服务。像说明文和议论文这一类的文章,一个主题还常分成几个小主题,每个小主题要用一个段落处理,另起一段时,应是一层新的意思。每一段的开头,要放一个表示段落小主题的主题句,这样可使文章条理化,易于阅读,便于读者抓住主题。段内的所有句子应围绕主题句的意义加以阐述或论证,为中心思想服务。句子之间应衔结自然,有条不紊,而且还要合乎逻辑,段落中不能出现任何与主题无关的句子;英语写作比较重视主题句的作用,缺少它段落意义就会含糊不清。主题句也可放在段落的中间和末尾等部位,但对初学者来说,以放在段首为好。见下列这篇题为"How to Be a Good Student" (怎样做个好学生)的文章: z|o7k;raH
We students are the builders and masters of the country. It is important for us to know how to be a good student. e7(iMe
A good student, I think, should be diligent in his studies. The more he studies, the more he will increase his knowledge. Without enough knowledge, we cannot make great contributions to the modernization of our country. ?4kM5NtP
To take care of one's own body is another important thing for good student to do. Anyone, who hasn't got a strong body, can do nothing for his country, even if he has much knowledge. There was a man, who, when he was student, studied hard but neglected his health. No sooner did he come to serve the country than he died of poor health. From this we may see that to have a strong body is really very important for a student. ;w/|5 ;{A;
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of a noble and good character. It will greatly help one to be useful and his country heart and soul. When learned people go astray, they do more harm than good to society. We should draw lessons from this. .@3
这篇文章的第一段引出了文章的主题,第二、第三和第四段则是文章的正文,每—段的第一句即是段落的主题句,它们既支持了文章中心的观点和思想,同时又概括了全段的意思。在同一段落中,其余的句子都围绕主题句所表示的中心展开,同时句子间的衔结也很自然;各层的意思都很连贯。 0.9%m7.m
分段是文章组织上重要的一步,但如果写的题目范围很小,那就无须再将题目分成小的主题,并分入各个段落去阐述了。像一篇简短的评论;某一事情的简短记载,某一个想法的说明,对一个人物或一件事情的简要叙述或说明等,就可以只用一个段落来表现主题。 e-Xr^@M*Q
在记叙文中,段的结构有时可以很简单,不需要有主题句,叙事一气呵成,中途没有停顿。段与段之所以分开,只是为了起修辞作用,以便把某一细节置于显著的地位。 3q!hY
某些测试用的表达题,在题目中就已经说明只需要根据。所给的提示写一个段落,而不是一篇文章。对于这一类的写作试题,就可以予以简洁的处理,并不是非要扩充成一篇有头有尾的完整文章。 ^Lx(if
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下面这篇题为“Weekend Homework”(谈周末作业)的短文,就是用一个段落来论述问题和表达观点的。 \lJCBb+k
Usally Saturday night is the time for students to get back to their desks and do their weekend homework. Six school days are enough for the students who have many other interests. I think weekend homework should not be given. With homework arranged for Saturday night and the whole of Sunday, when can he find time to help around the house, play a game of football or see a good film, or just relax? In fact weekend homework is usually put off until Sunday night. As a result our homework is done very poorly and we achive no results. If there were no homework on weekends, students would go to school on Monday well rested, willing to work. Teachers, don't you agree? GI~JIXHTQ
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文章结尾的作用是概括全文内容,进一步强调或肯定文章的中心思想,使文章意义表达得更加深刻。 |#_ F
文章结尾的形式也是多种多样的,常见的有以下几种: m0I)_R#X[
1.首尾呼应,画龙点睛 &DX&*Xq2
在文章的结尾,把含义较深的话放在末尾,以点明主题,深化主题,起到画龙点睛的效果。如"I Cannot Forget Her" (我忘不了她)的结尾: Z?Cl5o&lb
After her death, I felt as if something were missing in my life. I was sad over her passing away, but I knew she would not have had any regrets at having given her life for the benefit of the people. ig Q,ZY1
2.重复主题句 H%L oI)w
结尾回到文章开头阐明的中心思想或主题句上,达到强调的效果。如“I Love My Home Town”(我爱家乡)的结尾: >9Yo:b:f
I love my home town, and I love its people. They too have changed. They are going all out to do more for the good of our motherland. 4O TuX!
3. 自然结尾 LFzL{rny!U
随着文章的结束,文章自然而然地结尾。如“Fishing”(钓鱼)的结尾: 5Iql%~_x
I caught as many as twenty fish in two hours, but my brother caught many more. Tired from fishing, we lay down on the river bank, bathing in the sun. We returned home very late. A#yZh\#
4.含蓄性的结尾 *{t]fds
用比喻或含蓄的手法不直接点明作者的看法,而是让读者自己去领会和思考。如“A Day of Harvesting”(收割的日子)的结尾: <|!?V"`3
Evening came before we realized it. We put down our sickles and looked at each other. Our clothes were wet with sweat, but on every face there was a smile. <}\!FuC
5.用反问结尾 3 #8bG(
虽然形式是问句,但意义却是肯定的,并具有特别的强调作用,引起读者深思。如 "Should We Learn to Do Housework?" (我们要不要学做家务?) 的结尾。 +N
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Everyone should learn to do housework. Don't you agree, boys and girls? :i?7RouO
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结尾表示对将来的展望,或期待读者投入行动。如“Let's Go in for Sports”(让我们参加体育运动)的结尾: %4=r .9
As we have said above, sports can be of great value. They not only make people live happily but also help people to learn virtues and do their work bettter. A sound mind is in a sound body. Let's go in for sports. 6njwrqo
文章的结尾没有一定的模式,可以根据表达主题的需要灵活创造。一般的习惯是,一些记叙文和描写文经常采用自然结尾的方法;但说理性和逻辑性较强的说明文和议论文则往往都有结束语,以便使文章首尾呼应,结构完整。 YB`;<+sY
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(1) 不同观点列举型(选择型) H% peE9>$
There is a widespread concern over the issue that __作文题目_____. But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person. A majority of people think that _ 观点一________. In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, ___原因一_______.Furthermore, in the second place, ___原因二_____. So it goes without saying that ___观点一_____. "^Ax}Jr
People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter. Some people hold the idea that ___观点二_______. In their point of view, on the one hand, ___原因一_______. On the other hand, ____原因二_____. Therefore, there is no doubt that ___观点二______. ?tA<:.<vtY
As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that __观点一或二______. It is not only because ________, but also because _________. The more _______, the more ________. >
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(2)利弊型的议论文 kBRy(?Mft&
Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over (the issue that)___作文题目______. In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in __题目议题_____. Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows. Firstly, ___优点一______. And secondly ___优点二_____. dcd9AW=
Just As a popular saying goes, "every coin has two sides", __讨论议题______ is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects. To begin with, ___缺点一______. In addition, ____缺点二______. B24,;2J
To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of __讨论议题____ into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time. In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the ____讨论议题___. pV^(8!+
(3) 答题性议论文 e5GJ:2sH
Currently, there is a widespread concern over (the issue that)__作文题目_______ .It is really an important concern to every one of us. As a result, we must spare no efforts to take some measures to solve this problem. DjMhI_Yu
As we know that there are many steps which can be taken to undo this problem. First of all, __途径一______. In addition, another way contributing to success of the solving problem is ___途径二_____. "PK`Ca@`v
Above all, to solve the problem of ___作文题目______, we should find a number of various ways. But as far as I am concerned, I would prefer to solve the problem in this way, that is to say, ____方法_____. l0v]+>1i:
(4) 谚语警句性议论文 \FL`b{!+ N
It is well know to us that the proverb: " ___谚语_______" has a profound significance and value not only in our job but also in our study. It means ____谚语的含义_______. The saying can be illustrated through a series of examples as follows. ( also theoretically ) 1v?|n8
A case in point is ___例子一______. Therefore, it is goes without saying that it is of great of importance to practice the proverb ____谚语_____. M[= #%U3*N
With the rapid development of science and technology in China, an increasing number of people come to realize that it is also of practical use to stick to the saying: ____谚语_____. The more we are aware of the significance of this famous saying, the more benefits we will get in our daily study and job. Pf,lZU?f
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As is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure/percentage in the table(graph/picture/pie/chart), ___作文题目的议题_____ has been on rise/ decrease (goesup/increases/drops/decreases),significantly/dramatically/steadily rising/decreasing from______ in _______ to ______ in _____. From the sharp/marked decline/ rise in the chart, it goes without saying that ________. ] 'B4O1
There are at least two good reasons accounting for ______. On the one hand, ________. On the other hand, _______ is due to the fact that ________. In addition, ________ is responsible for _______. Maybe there are some other reasons to show ________. But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing. Z8vR/
As far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that _______. I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded. $q%l)]+
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.../ I feel I am competent to meet the requirements you have listed. On the one hand, .... On the other hand, .... I am enclosing my resume for your kind consideration and reference. RHIGNzSz
I shall be much obliged if you will offer me a precious opportunity to an interview. I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience/ I am looking forward to your replies at your earliest convenience. 5ieF8F%
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1. 开头万能公式一:名人名言 z"PU`v
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原理:我们看到的东西很多都是创造出来的,包括我们欣赏的文章也是,所以尽管编,但是一定要听起来很有道理呦!而且没准将来我们就是名人呢!对吧? UVlXDebl
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2. 开头万能公式二:数字统计 {@*l ,[,5-
原理:要想更有说服力,就应该用实际的数字来说明。 .EXxNB]%Y&
原则上在议论文当中十不应该出现虚假数字的,可是在考试的时候哪管那三七二十一,但编无妨,只要我有东西写就万事大吉了。所以不妨试用下面的句型: BqG7Et
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看起来这个数字文邹邹的,其实都是编造出来的,下面随便几个题目我们都可以这样编造: z.6I6IfL\L
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根据最近的一项统计调查显示,大学生向老师请假的理由当中78%都是假的。 f)9{D[InM^
Travel by Bike RuBL_Vi
根据最近的一项统计调查显示,85%的人在近距离旅行的时候首选的交通工具是自行车。 &l;wb.%ijW
Youth 9|5>?'CqP
根据最近的一项统计调查显示,在某个大学,学生的课余时间的70%都是在休闲娱乐。 1yT\|2ARZ%
Five-day Work Week Better than Six-day Work? d.:.f_|
根据最近的一项统计调查显示,98%的人同意每周五天工作日。 3+tr_psH
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结尾万能公式: M7.
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1. 结尾万能公式一:如此结论 ^ygh[.e,
说完了,毕竟要归纳一番,相信各位都有这样的经历,领导长篇大论,到最后终于冒出个“总而言之”之类的话,我们马上停止开小差,等待领导说结束语。也就是说,开头很好,也必然要有一个精彩的结尾,让读者眼前一亮,这样,你就可以拿高分了!比如下面的例子: /}&@1
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manners arise from politeness and respect for others. v3Xt<I=4y
如果读者很难“显而见之”,但说无妨,就当读者的眼光太浅罢了! y1*z,"dx
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工作还得一张一驰呢,老让读者读长句,累死人!写一个短小精辟的句子,相反,却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末,也可以揭示主题: 3GUJlFj
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如此可见,长短句结合,抑扬顿挫,岂不爽哉?牢记! j_Z"=
强烈建议:在文章第一段(开头)用一长一短,且先长后短;在文章主体部分,要先用一个短句解释主要意思,然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式,定会让主体部分妙笔生辉!文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。二、 T.R
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国有其君,家有其主,文章也要有其主。否则会给人造成“群龙无首”之感!相信各位读过一些破烂文学,故意把主体隐藏在文章之内,结果造成我们稀里糊涂!不知所云!所以奉劝各位一定要写一个主题句,放在文章的开头(保险型)或者结尾,让读者一目了然,必会平安无事! p/GYfa
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一 二 三原则 )s';m$
领导讲话总是第一部分、第一点、第二点、第三点、第二部分、第一点… i'}Z>g5D
如此罗嗦。可毕竟还是条理清楚。考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否结构清楚,条理自然。破解方法很简单,只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了。 #Kp/AN5YC
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2)firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally(不推荐,原因:俗) ,'69RL?-Wg
3)the first, the second, the third, the last(不推荐,原因:俗) !ENb \'>J>
4)in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, .sk$ @Q
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10)for one thing, for another thing(适用于两点的情况) b6k'`vLA
建议:不仅仅在写作中注意,平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚!四、 短语优先原则 >/DyR+?>4
写作时,尤其是在考试时,如果使用短语,有两个好处:其一、用短语会使文章增加亮点,如果老师们看到你的文章太简单,看不到一个自己不认识的短语,必然会看你低一等。相反,如果发现亮点—精彩的短语,那么你的文章定会得高分了。其二、关键时刻思维短路,只有凑字数,怎么办?用短语是一个办法!比如: K8l|qe
I cannot bear it. )D:I@`*
可以用短语表达:I cannot put up with it. n0T'"i[
I want it. coxMsDs
可以用短语表达:I am looking forward to it. yBPaGZ{f
这样字数明显增加,表达也更准确。五、 多实少虚原则 [V5ebj:6w
原因很简单,写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西,不要空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用实词,少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。比如我们说一个很好的时候,不应该之说nice这样空洞的词,应该使用一些诸如generous, n~#%>C7
humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital @Ee'nP
之类的形象词。再比如: 0r?}LWjf
走出房间,general的词是:walk out of the room yB7=8 Pcx
但是小偷走出房间应该说:slip out of the room xsx
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*****走出房间应该说:sail out of the room R18jju>Zr
小孩走出房间应该说:dance out of the room L//Z\xr|
老人走出房间应该说:stagger out of the room ['MG/FKuv
所以多用实词,少用虚词,文章将会大放异彩!六、 多变句式原则 A3p@hQl
1)加法(串联) ag-\(i;K]
都希望写下很长的句子,像个老外似的,可就是怕写错,怎么办,最保险的写长句的方法就是这些,可以在任何句子之间加and, 9ZL3p!
但最好是前后的句子又先后关系或者并列关系。比如说: =8r%zLDw
I enjor music and he is fond of playing guitar. 3%]%c6
如果是二者并列的,我们可以用一个超级句式: S=>54!{`x
Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm. %&+j(?9
其它的短语可以用: *v[WJ"8@
besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover )v-sde\
2)转折(拐弯抹角) Lt+ Cm$3
批评某人缺点的时候,我们总习惯先拐弯抹角说说他的优点,然后转入正题,再说缺点,这种方式虽然阴险了点,可毕竟还比较容易让人接受。所以呢,我们说话的时候,只要在要点之前先来点废话,注意二者之间用个专这次就够了。 ~Cx07I_lf
The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition. .$/Su3]K/
The coat was thin, but it was warm. [2UjY^\;T
更多的短语: *.0}3
despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, .v36xX K(
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3)因果(so, so, so) %vvA'WG
昨天在街上我看到了一个女孩,然后我主动搭讪,然后我们去咖啡厅,然后我们认识了,然后我们成为了朋友…可见,讲故事的时候我们总要追求先后顺序,先什么,后什么,所以然后这个词就变得很常见了。其实这个词表示的是先后或因果关系! 2r2qZ#I}
The snow began to fall, so we went home. NDW6UFd>1
更多短语: kh/n|2
then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a RU3:[(7
result, for this reason, so that ,y}?Z8?63
4)失衡句(头重脚轻,或者头轻脚重) tCAh?nR
有些人脑袋大,身体小,或者有些人脑袋小,身体大,虽然我们不希望长成这个样子,可如果真的是这样了,也就必然会吸引别人的注意力。文章中如果出现这样的句子,就更会让考官看到你的句子与众不同。其实就是主语从句,表语从句,宾语从句的变形。 =EI>@Y"
举例:This is what I can do. *Ppb;
Whether he can go with us or not is not sure. dd#=_xe
同样主语、宾语、表语可以改成如下的复杂成分: ufE;rcYE
When to go, Why he goes away… eAh~`
5)附加(多此一举) +:3K?G-
如果有了老婆,总会遇到这样的情况,当你再讲某个人的时候,她会插一句说,我昨天见过他;或者说,就是某某某,如果把老婆的话插入到我们的话里面,那就是定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语。 tLXwszR0r
The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine. LeDty_
I don’t enjoy that book you are reading.
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Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going. ~0"(C#l9
其实很简单,同位语--要解释的东西删除后不影响整个句子的构成;定语从句—借用之前的关键词并且用其重新组成一个句子插入其中,但是whom kLa9'c0
or that 关键词必须要紧跟在先行词之前。 FES_:?.0
6)排比(排山倒海句) jnfktDV'
文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此,如果非要让你的文章更加精彩的话,那么我希望你引用一个个的排比句,一个个得对偶句,一个个的不定式,一个个地词,一个个的短语,如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势! ;i*<HNQ
Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated DPCB=2E
or simple, there is plenty in London for you. (jbHV.]P9
Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such @v^;,cu'8
as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean xE.K
tides. u~WBu|
We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, *->2$uWP
to realize our potentials and to pay for our life. (气势恢宏) hTZ&
要想写出如此气势恢宏的句子非用排比不可!七、 挑战极限原则 THC7e>P4
既然十挑战极限,必然是比较难的,但是并非不可攀! "M#A `b
原理:在学生的文章中,很少发现诸如独立主格的句子,其实也很简单,只要花上5分钟的时间看看就可以领会,它就是分词的一种特殊形式,分词要求主语一致,而独立主格则不然。比如: `@%hz%8Y
The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb O@*^2
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the Western Hills. DFDlp
Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about !C13E lf
three times that of China. MIa#\tJj
如果您可一些出这样的句子,不得高分才怪! zh8\
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文章主体段落三大杀手锏:一、举实例 mX8k4$z
思维短路,举实例!提出一个观点,举实例!提出一个方案,举实例!而且者也是我们揭示一个观点最好的方式,任何情况下,只要我们无法继续文章,不管三七二十一,尽管举例子! n~ w.\939@
In order to attract more customers, advertisers have adopted vmEbk/Vy
every possible stimulative factor in making ads, such as P/%5J3_,
sound, light, colours, cartoon films and human performance. vXA+o)*#/
For instance, to advertise a certain food, advertisers will lICpfcc(+
ask an actor or actress to sit at a table and devour the '" MT$MrT
seemingly delicious food while they fime him or her. Fpe>|
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To take … as an example, One example is…, Another example is…, f/"?(7F
for example二、做比较 }4$k-,1S
方法:写完一个要点,比较与之相似的;又写完一个要点,再比较与之相反的; Bs?B\k=
世界上没有同样的指纹,没有相同的树叶,文章亦同,只有通过比较,你才会发现二者的相同点(through 8d|/^U.w~V
comparison)和不同点(through contrast)。下面是一些短语: "~V|p3
相似的比较: :8(
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in comparison, likewise, similarly, in the same manner RaT.%:CRm
相反的比较: {Q?\%4>2
on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead, _8QHx;}
nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with …, _;zIH5 H
…三、换言之 ,a6Oi=+>/U
没话说了,可以换一句话再说,让你的文章在多一些字,或者文邹邹地说,是让读者更充分的理解你的观点。 9nGS"E l{
实际就是重复重复再重复!下面的句子实际上就三个字 I love you! `8x.Mv
I am enthusiastic about you. That is to say, I love you. ta;q{3fe
I am wild about you. In other words, I have fallen in love :o37 V!
with you. XEX-NE"]
或者上面我们举过的例子: {zNFp#z
I cannot bear it. Q[6<Y,}(pd
可以用短语表达:I cannot put up with it. zWA~0l.2
因此可以这样说:I cannot bear it. That is to say, I cannot put up with +.3,(l
it or I am fed up with it. BN]{o(EB
更多短语: rCH? R
in more difficult language, in simpler words, put it more 6+.8nx:9X
simply WHk rd8