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Fruit should be eaten or not?
In this article, the author discusses the function of fruit and the reason that(改成用why来引导表示原因的定语从句)&nbsp; Vitamins could not instead of（用动词词组，take place of…来代替，注意语法结构的完整）&nbsp; fruit. Fruit are benefit（用形 ..]]></description>
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&nbsp; Love is the noblest（可以不用写题目，以免出现错误）
&nbsp; As far as I know, there is noting（注意拼写错误nothing） can be more nobler （注意nobler本身就是比较级形式，所以前面不用more了，much可以修饰比较级，但是more不可以）than love （这句话是有语法错误的，整个句子结构是there be ..]]></description>
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What a vividly picture it is! As is shown above, we can see clearly that the purpose of the painter is describe（Is to describe…） &quot;LOVE&quot;（Love没有必要大写）.Love is the most cherished thing in our interpersonal act （这个表达有错误，可以直接改成love should be mo ..]]></description>
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As is shown in the picture, a lamp is shining in a dark place. There is a note above it, saying: （英语中没有冒号，用逗号代替，这里可以变成that,引导宾语从句） love is a lamp,（变成句号，后面注意大写） the darker the place is, the brighter （这里应该用副词，修饰的是动词shine,所以应该 ..]]></description>
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Love is a light（这个标题可以不用的，而且还有错误。Light是不可数名词）
&nbsp; In the world love is everywhere. When we are born from our own mother who take pains to bring us up. （这只是一个时间状语从句，不能用句号结尾的，不是一句完整的话。可以改成mother takes great pain to bring  ..]]></description>
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