作文备考：创造闪光点 作文亮一点！
0?k/vV4 作文是各类英语考试中得分率最低的题型之一。同学们在掌握了一定的作文模板，和基本的语法、词汇、句型用法之后，如果能在作文中创造一些词汇和句型的闪光点，必定会使你的作文如虎添翼！
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http://cet.hjenglish.com X=-pNwO 2、是否会使用插入语；
IS"UBJ6p 3、用词是否多样，准确，形象，尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词；
iugTXZ( 4、关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词；
j&ddpS(s 5、句型使用是否准确、地道。
G .1pg]P! 下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项：
&%rX RP 1. 适当用被动替换主动，这样能更客观的反映事实, 句子开头不要总是用we / I (比如写结尾时不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. ) 举个经典结尾2004年六月六级作文的最后一段：It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. By doing so，its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively. 沪江四六级
http://cet.hjenglish.com t[%9z6t 2. 善于使用插入语，比如说把副词、连接词等，作插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。
bc%7-% 如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。
Es1Yx\/: 比如说： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that …
db4Ol= 3. 一定要学会换词，换形象，具体的替换太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现good, bad , many, thing, think,
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PA people, opinion 等等)比如上面例子中，applicable替换proper, approaches替换ways, implement替换carry out, sharpen one’s competitive edge替换enhance one’s competitiveness(提高某物竞争力)
sJ25<2/ 下面举一篇南京工程学院某位同学写的优秀作文(14分)的例子，看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的。这位同学把老师上课讲的各类写作手法和精彩替换和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。
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7 6(&O I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that I indulged myself in googling an army of useful information I had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.
-fn["R] exceedingly 替换 very
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i e%ZX sth. exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替换 sb. be interested in sth.
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s9zdg"c' an army of 替换 a lot of
eLM_?9AZ!R The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!
e=QnGT*b5 The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一个精彩句型，用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情； Increasing popularity 替换 more and more popular
>?'cZTNk] Coincident with … 非常地道的句型，表达“与…一致”的意思，替换 With …
j 8Y Mod= Advancement 替换 development
\,oT(p4N%M Pour into ( flood into / swarm into )替换 enter into
ySL 31% Current ( currently )替换 now
+3!um Appeal to sb. 替换 sb. be interested in sth.
hT# [[md" Growing individuals 替换 more and more people
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<{JHFU`^ We can, freely, search 用了插入语的写作手法
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y/'2WO[ Additionally 替换 In addition / Besides
R4%!W~K Deliver 替换 send
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ke!)C[^7z There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, 这个句子有三个精彩之处，首先There is no denying that这个句型，还有however作为插入语， function in the disservice of 替换 do harm to
~ucOQVmz@ Emerging 替换 appearing ( fading 替换 disappearing ) Net citizen 网民，属于精彩用词
dyC: M ko= As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds. Computers do play a positive role in the development of people' lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We should, therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.
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-:h5Ky" A slice of 替换 a part of
MLG%+@\ Unfavorable 替换 bad
FAz shR Impacts 替换 effects / influences
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Kzb&aOw Fruits (而且fruits 用的非常形象， merits/ virtues) 替换 advantage ( defects 替换 disadvantage ) Facet 替换 aspect
hHm &u^xY 以下是27个经典的替换词，各位同学可以参考一下:
h7)^$Hd 1.individuals,characters, folks替换(people ,persons)
wm}6$ n?Za 2: positive, favorable, rosy (美好的)，promising
y+)][Wa0 (有希望的)，perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding, superior替换good
$6L gaz 3:dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill (有害的)替换bad
BuCU_/H 如果bad做表语，可以有be less impressive替换
YR@@:n'TP eg. An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms. When it approaches to graduation, as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive. 沪江四六级
http://cet.hjenglish.com >k,bHGj? 4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,a host of, many, if not most)替换many.
;]D@KxO$dJ 注：用many, if not most 一定要小心，many后一定要有词。
W/<]mm~95 Eg. Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that….同理 用most, if not all, 替换most.
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< N}UwB& 6:harbor the idea that, take the attitude that, hold the view that, it is widely shared that, it is universally acknowledged that)替think (因为是书面语，所以要加that)
e#(0af8A 7:affair ,business ,matter 替换thing
E ~<SEA 8: shared 代 common
d kHcG&) 9.reap huge fruits 替换get many benefits ) 沪
gbL99MZ@~ 10:for my part ,from my own perspective 替换 in my opinion
W$ O^IC 11: Increasing(ly), growing 替换more and more ( 注意没有growingly这种形式。所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing.修饰形容词，副词用increasingly.
H$>D_WeJ Eg. Sth has gained growing popularity. Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth.
= QHW>v 12..beneficial, rewarding替换helpful,
}{[H@uhjH 13.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser, 替换customer
yv =LT~ 14.exceedingly,extremely, intensely 替换very
?7 e|gpQ| 15.sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替换sb take interest in / sb. be interested in
X aW@CW 16.capture one's attention替换attract one's attention.沪
b#(S DNo6 17.facet,demension,sphere代aspect
c[}h( jkP 18.give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger 替换cause.
:~3sW< P R 19.desire 替换want.
"#z4 20.pour attention into 替换pay attention to
BQ{Gp 2N 21.bear in mind that 替换remember沪江四六级
http://cet.hjenglish.com _v{,vLH 22. enjoy, possess 替换have(注意process是过程的意思)
l~!Tnp\M 23. interaction替换communication沪江四六级
http://cet.hjenglish.com C(Ujx=G+3 24.frown on sth替换 be against , disagree with sth
s\_-` [B0 25.to name only a few, as an example替换 for example, for instance
- %*>z'|{ 25.bear in mind that 代替remember
)_"Cz".|9 26.to name only a few, as an example代替 for example
]|18tVXc 27. next to/virtually impossible,代替nearly impossible
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http://cet.hjenglish.com 1f M= >Z I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.
H$au02dpU The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!
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!;.i#c_u As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds. Computers do play a positive role in the development of people' lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.
