开头万能公式:
6]b"n'G 1. 开头万能公式一:名人名言
hU""YP~y 有人问了,“我没有记住名言,怎么办?尤其是英语名言?”,很好办:编!
!6'N-b1 原理:我们看到的东西很多都是创造出来的,包括我们欣赏的文章也是,所以尽管编,但是一定要听起来很有道理呦!而且没准将来我们就是名人呢!对吧?
'-%1ILK$3r 经典句型:
1z8"Gk6 A proberb says, “ You are only young once.” (适用于已记住的名言)
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i7.8H*z' 2. 开头万能公式二:数字统计
89LD:+p/ 原理:要想更有说服力,就应该用实际的数字来说明。
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8<C*D".T$ According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted
w.k9{f to further their study after their graduation.
FYYc+6n 看起来这个数字文邹邹的,其实都是编造出来的,下面随便几个题目我们都可以这样编造:
k\ #; Honesty
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K 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,大学生向老师请假的理由当中78%都是假的。
+-<G(^ Travel by Bike
g{yw&q[B= 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,85%的人在近距离旅行的时候首选的交通工具是自行车。
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M_ukG~/ 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,在某个大学,学生的课余时间的70%都是在休闲娱乐。
{1Ra|,; Five-day Work Week Better than Six-day Work?
5I2,za&e 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,98%的人同意每周五天工作日。
jU&m*0nL 更多句型:
,-AF8BP A recent statistics shows that …
c#N4XsG, 写作绝招
f(|k0$EIu 结尾万能公式:
:VT%d{Vp_ 1. 结尾万能公式一:如此结论
Hx gC*-A$/ 说完了,毕竟要归纳一番,相信各位都有这样的经历,领导长篇大论,到最后终于冒出个“总而言之”之类的话,我们马上停止开小差,等待领导说结束语。也就是说,开头很好,也必然要有一个精彩的结尾,让读者眼前一亮,这样,你就可以拿高分了!比如下面的例子:
:RnUNz Obviously(此为过渡短语), we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from
cz9J&Le> politeness and respect for others.
o`S``?`^)^ 如果读者很难“显而见之”,但说无妨,就当读者的眼光太浅罢了!
{ ^dq7! 更多过渡短语:
d~u=,@FK to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus
RTc@`m3 M 更多句型:
F\DiT|?} Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find that…
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hq ss), 2. 结尾万能公式二:如此建议
x2B8G;6u 如果说“如此结论”是结尾最没用的废话,那么“如此建议”应该是最有价值的废话了,因为这里虽然也是废话,但是却用了一个很经典的虚拟语气的句型。拽!
,m# Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the
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}%u#TwZ 这里的虚拟语气用得很经典,因为考官本来经常考这个句型,而如果我们自己写出来,你说考官会怎么想呢?
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Ok_}d&A Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.
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Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.
i{6&/TBnr 写作绝招
Jo {:]: 写作的“七项基本原则”:
kGV:=h 一、 长 短 句原则
"QnYT3[l" 工作还得一张一驰呢,老让读者读长句,累死人!写一个短小精辟的句子,相反,却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末,也可以揭示主题:
`D77CC]vU As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is to meet the
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WLl8oE<X 如此可见,长短句结合,抑扬顿挫,岂不爽哉?牢记!
d1cp=RbC 强烈建议:在文章第一段(开头)用一长一短,且先长后短;在文章主体部分,要先用一个短句解释主要意思,然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式,定会让主体部分妙笔生辉!文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。
2=_$&oT** 二、 主 题 句原则
vxmX5. 国有其君,家有其主,文章也要有其主。否则会给人造成“群龙无首”之感!相信各位读过一些破烂文学,故意把主体隐藏在文章之内,结果造成我们稀里糊涂!不知所云!所以奉劝各位一定要写一个主题句,放在文章的开头(保险型)或者结尾,让读者一目了然,必会平安无事!
^m#tWb)f 特别提示:隐藏主体句可是要冒险的!
=@!t/LR7kg To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared
hW#^H5? before the exam(主题句). Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly
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;2C 三、 一 二 三原则
C-y MWr 领导讲话总是第一部分、第一点、第二点、第三点、第二部分、第一点…
U823q-x 如此罗嗦。可毕竟还是条理清楚。考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否结构清楚,条理自然。破解方法很简单,只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了。
#s{^fUN6 1)first, second, third, last(不推荐,原因:俗)
D./{f8 2)firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally(不推荐,原因:俗)
hWy@?r. 3)the first, the second, the third, the last(不推荐,原因:俗)
*6?mZ*GYY 4)in the first place, in the second place, in the third place,
/9pxEidVAS lastly(不推荐,原因:俗)
{'M<dI$ 5)to begin with, then, furthermore, finally(强烈推荐)
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Y!L-5|G 7)first and foremost, besides, last but not least(强烈推荐)
E:K4k < 8)most important of all, moreover, finally
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9)on the one hand, on the other hand(适用于两点的情况)
tu}!:5xi 10)for one thing, for another thing(适用于两点的情况)
j,i9,oF6] 建议:不仅仅在写作中注意,平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚!
*:n7B\. 四、 短语优先原则
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www.freekaobo.com un 5r9 I cannot bear it.
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9295:Y| w1 I want it.
F-s{#V1= 可以用短语表达:I am looking forward to it.
7Y8~")f 这样字数明显增加,表达也更准确。
[`@M!G. 五、 多实少虚原则
':(AiD -} 原因很简单,写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西,不要空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用实词,少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。比如我们说一个很好的时候,不应该之说nice这样空洞的词,应该使用一些诸如generous,
Z+v,o1 humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital 之类的形象词。再比如:
r0}x:{$M 走出房间,general的词是:walk out of the room
a]r+np]vTy 但是小偷走出房间应该说:slip out of the room
Kzrd<h]`) *****走出房间应该说:sail out of the room
1O`V_d) 小孩走出房间应该说:dance out of the room
@*eY~ 老人走出房间应该说:stagger out of the room
x[58C + 所以多用实词,少用虚词,文章将会大放异彩!
~s+vJvWz 六、 多变句式原则
)9nW`d+ 1)加法(串联)
qj;i03 +@ 都希望写下很长的句子,像个老外似的,可就是怕写错,怎么办,最保险的写长句的方法就是这些,可以在任何句子之间加and,
b WNa6x 但最好是前后的句子又先后关系或者并列关系。比如说:
vcFR Td I enjor music and he is fond of playing guitar.
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S=,czs3N Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm.
x:Q\pZ 其它的短语可以用:
~6;I"0b5 besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover
*>a=ku:? 2)转折(拐弯抹角)
G[ U5R?/ 批评某人缺点的时候,我们总习惯先拐弯抹角说说他的优点,然后转入正题,再说缺点,这种方式虽然阴险了点,可毕竟还比较容易让人接受。所以呢,我们说话的时候,只要在要点之前先来点废话,注意二者之间用个专这次就够了。
!K( The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition.
n$C-^3c The coat was thin, but it was warm.
:k_&Zd j,B 更多的短语:
4*}&nmW despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite,
eE'P)^KV notwithstanding
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}]9 3)因果(so, so, so)
L(yUS)O 昨天在街上我看到了一个女孩,然后我主动搭讪,然后我们去咖啡厅,然后我们认识了,然后我们成为了朋友…可见,讲故事的时候我们总要追求先后顺序,先什么,后什么,所以然后这个词就变得很常见了。其实这个词表示的是先后或因果关系!
LG:k}z/T The snow began to fall, so we went home.
f,yl'2{ 更多短语:
|p/*OFC6 then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result, for this
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reason, so that
LVg#E*J 4)失衡句(头重脚轻,或者头轻脚重)
a[nSUlT& 有些人脑袋大,身体小,或者有些人脑袋小,身体大,虽然我们不希望长成这个样子,可如果真的是这样了,也就必然会吸引别人的注意力。文章中如果出现这样的句子,就更会让考官看到你的句子与众不同。其实就是主语从句,表语从句,宾语从句的变形。
znE1t%V 举例:This is what I can do.
5@5*}[M Whether he can go with us or not is not sure.
HVus\s\&y% 同样主语、宾语、表语可以改成如下的复杂成分:
y^ skE{ When to go, Why he goes away…
iQ" LIeD 5)附加(多此一举)
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OpaRQ= The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.
KfjWZ4{v I don’t enjoy that book you are reading.
;J|t-$Z Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going.
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eOb--@~8 that 关键词必须要紧跟在先行词之前。
~T;:Tg* 6)排比(排山倒海句)
fof}I:vO 文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此,如果非要让你的文章更加精彩的话,那么我希望你引用一个个的排比句,一个个得对偶句,一个个的不定式,一个个地词,一个个的短语,如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势!
!(q@sw( Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or simple,
7V5c`:" there is plenty in London for you.
zd%f5L(' Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil,
_OG9wi(Fpx coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean tides.
LN+x!#:e We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, to realize
/%;J1{O our potentials and to pay for our life. (气势恢宏)
wKi#5k2 要想写出如此气势恢宏的句子非用排比不可!
SWw!s&lP& 七、 挑战极限原则
jfK&CA 既然十挑战极限,必然是比较难的,但是并非不可攀!
iT&4;W=72~ 原理:在学生的文章中,很少发现诸如独立主格的句子,其实也很简单,只要花上5分钟的时间看看就可以领会,它就是分词的一种特殊形式,分词要求主语一致,而独立主格则不然。比如:
<B>qEa_I The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the Western
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3:xx:Jt 如果您可一些出这样的句子,不得高分才怪!
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3U^Vz9LW 文章主体段落三大杀手锏:
gOnZ# 一、举实例
`^/8dIya 思维短路,举实例!提出一个观点,举实例!提出一个方案,举实例!而且者也是我们揭示一个观点最好的方式,任何情况下,只要我们无法继续文章,不管三七二十一,尽管举例子!
Jvc<j:{^w In order to attract more customers, advertisers have adopted every
tW~kn9glZ possible stimulative factor in making ads, such as sound, light, colours,
{Y5@SIyE cartoon films and human performance. For instance, to advertise a certain
3PvxU|*F food, advertisers will ask an actor or actress to sit at a table and
I`oJOLV devour the seemingly delicious food while they fime him or her.
>"IG\//I 更多句型:
z&0[F`U To take … as an example, One example is…, Another example is…, for example
<_8bAO8\ 二、做比较
[*O>Lk 方法:写完一个要点,比较与之相似的;又写完一个要点,再比较与之相反的;
ch%zu%;f 世界上没有同样的指纹,没有相同的树叶,文章亦同,只有通过比较,你才会发现二者的相同点(through comparison)和不同点(through
d#+Nef5 contrast)。下面是一些短语:
FVkl#Qy~ 相似的比较:
L/Kb\\f in comparison, likewise, similarly, in the same manner
]#4kqj} 相反的比较:
4A"nm6 on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead, nevertheless, in
{,uSDIOj$ contrast, on the contrary, compared with …, …
l[_antokn 三、换言之
JtY$AP$ 没话说了,可以换一句话再说,让你的文章在多一些字,或者文邹邹地说,是让读者更充分的理解你的观点。
9mk@\Gqqm 实际就是重复重复再重复!下面的句子实际上就三个字 I love you!
evZP*N~G I am enthusiastic about you. That is to say, I love you.
l"[.Q>d I am wild about you. In other words, I have fallen in love with you.
4Ia'Yr 或者上面我们举过的例子:
3pML+Y|ij I cannot bear it.
Wn6m$ = 可以用短语表达:I cannot put up with it.
Y(`Bc8h 因此可以这样说:I cannot bear it. That is to say, I cannot put up with it or I am
+JG05h%' fed up with it.
$- ]G6r 更多短语:
Has}oe[ in more difficult language, in simpler words, put it more simply