开头万能公式:
gN]\#s@[ :4r*Jju<V 1. 开头万能公式一:名人名言
1I40N[PE) 有人问了,“我没有记住名言,怎么办?尤其是英语名言?”,很好办:编!
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`O 经典句型:
#K!"/,d@>J A proberb says, “ You are only young once.” (适用于已记住的名言)
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}hcY5E-n 2. 开头万能公式二:数字统计
2WE01D9O 原理:要想更有说服力,就应该用实际的数字来说明。
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m ^w{:\p According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college
8Y:x+v5 students wanted to further their study after their graduation.
(O&HCT| 看起来这个数字文邹邹的,其实都是编造出来的,下面随便几个题目我们都可以这样编造:
[GcW*v Honesty
yD@1H(yM 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,大学生向老师请假的理由当中78%都是假的。
JEF ;Q Travel by Bike
3rR1/\ 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,85%的人在近距离旅行的时候首选的交通工具是自行车。
Pc<0kQg Youth
nYe:$t3F= 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,在某个大学,学生的课余时间的70%都是在休闲娱乐。
p1W6 s0L Five-day Work Week Better than Six-day Work?
5Vai0Qfcu: 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,98%的人同意每周五天工作日。
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A4rkwM n~ 0MhE0H 结尾万能公式:
ae](=OQ ce; zn\ 1. 结尾万能公式一:如此结论
DO( 3hIj 说完了,毕竟要归纳一番,相信各位都有这样的经历,领导长篇大论,到最后终于冒出个“总而言之”之类的话,我们马上停止开小差,等待领导说结束语。也就是说,开头很好,也必然要有一个精彩的结尾,让读者眼前一亮,这样,你就可以拿高分了!比如下面的例子:
^;tB,7:*V Obviously(此为过渡短语), we can draw the conclusion that good
Sh?eb manners arise from politeness and respect for others.
JpxQS~VX 如果读者很难“显而见之”,但说无妨,就当读者的眼光太浅罢了!
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CM to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus
;>S|?M4GZ 更多句型:
z 7+>G/o Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find that…
}D.\2x(J 2. 结尾万能公式二:如此建议
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yvnDS"0< Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve
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GLX{EG9Z 这里的虚拟语气用得很经典,因为考官本来经常考这个句型,而如果我们自己写出来,你说考官会怎么想呢?
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<0 qhc$M Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.
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Ob}XeN(L3 写作的“七项基本原则”:一、 长 短 句原则
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L( <q>d@Foi 工作还得一张一驰呢,老让读者读长句,累死人!写一个短小精辟的句子,相反,却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末,也可以揭示主题:
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%QEyvl4 如此可见,长短句结合,抑扬顿挫,岂不爽哉?牢记!
o)]O 强烈建议:在文章第一段(开头)用一长一短,且先长后短;在文章主体部分,要先用一个短句解释主要意思,然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式,定会让主体部分妙笔生辉!文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。二、
l2}X\N&q 主 题 句原则
&U7h9o H 国有其君,家有其主,文章也要有其主。否则会给人造成“群龙无首”之感!相信各位读过一些破烂文学,故意把主体隐藏在文章之内,结果造成我们稀里糊涂!不知所云!所以奉劝各位一定要写一个主题句,放在文章的开头(保险型)或者结尾,让读者一目了然,必会平安无事!
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bN03}&I 领导讲话总是第一部分、第一点、第二点、第三点、第二部分、第一点…
A*A/30o|R 如此罗嗦。可毕竟还是条理清楚。考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否结构清楚,条理自然。破解方法很简单,只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了。
-A=3W3:C 1)first, second, third, last(不推荐,原因:俗)
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OP" _I!t 6)to start with, next, in addition, finally(强烈推荐)
yU4mS;GX 7)first and foremost, besides, last but not least(强烈推荐)
/BD'{tZ]Sl 8)most important of all, moreover, finally
DwZRx@ 9)on the one hand, on the other hand(适用于两点的情况)
:#35mBe}k 10)for one thing, for another thing(适用于两点的情况)
5]upfC6 建议:不仅仅在写作中注意,平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚!四、 短语优先原则
hayJgkZ' 写作时,尤其是在考试时,如果使用短语,有两个好处:其一、用短语会使文章增加亮点,如果老师们看到你的文章太简单,看不到一个自己不认识的短语,必然会看你低一等。相反,如果发现亮点—精彩的短语,那么你的文章定会得高分了。其二、关键时刻思维短路,只有凑字数,怎么办?用短语是一个办法!比如:
QB!_z4UJ_; I cannot bear it.
c@"FV,L> 可以用短语表达:I cannot put up with it.
<\O8D0.d I want it.
ViMl{3 可以用短语表达:I am looking forward to it.
]'M B3@T 这样字数明显增加,表达也更准确。五、 多实少虚原则
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| 原因很简单,写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西,不要空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用实词,少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。比如我们说一个很好的时候,不应该之说nice这样空洞的词,应该使用一些诸如generous,
wy#>Aq humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital
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i*m;kWu, 走出房间,general的词是:walk out of the room
T!B\ixt6 但是小偷走出房间应该说:slip out of the room
D4|Ajeo;1 *****走出房间应该说:sail out of the room
C.ji]P# 小孩走出房间应该说:dance out of the room
[fV"tf; 老人走出房间应该说:stagger out of the room
}r,xx{.u7 所以多用实词,少用虚词,文章将会大放异彩!六、 多变句式原则
W Zm8!Y 1)加法(串联)
<tZZ]Y] 都希望写下很长的句子,像个老外似的,可就是怕写错,怎么办,最保险的写长句的方法就是这些,可以在任何句子之间加and,
CEaAtAM 但最好是前后的句子又先后关系或者并列关系。比如说:
f!R7v|jP I enjor music and he is fond of playing guitar.
l9="ccM 如果是二者并列的,我们可以用一个超级句式:
GD]epr%V Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm.
'TH[Db'`I 其它的短语可以用:
Qg~w 3~ besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover
1zH?.- 2)转折(拐弯抹角)
:{iH(ae; 批评某人缺点的时候,我们总习惯先拐弯抹角说说他的优点,然后转入正题,再说缺点,这种方式虽然阴险了点,可毕竟还比较容易让人接受。所以呢,我们说话的时候,只要在要点之前先来点废话,注意二者之间用个专这次就够了。
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fW+"Kuw 更多的短语:
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8>#ZU]cG despite, notwithstanding
B=~y(Mb 3)因果(so, so, so)
LO)!Fj4| 昨天在街上我看到了一个女孩,然后我主动搭讪,然后我们去咖啡厅,然后我们认识了,然后我们成为了朋友…可见,讲故事的时候我们总要追求先后顺序,先什么,后什么,所以然后这个词就变得很常见了。其实这个词表示的是先后或因果关系!
5$'[R;r The snow began to fall, so we went home.
`4'=&c9 更多短语:
7<MEM NYX then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a
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JZ`h+fAt 4)失衡句(头重脚轻,或者头轻脚重)
}EkL[H! 有些人脑袋大,身体小,或者有些人脑袋小,身体大,虽然我们不希望长成这个样子,可如果真的是这样了,也就必然会吸引别人的注意力。文章中如果出现这样的句子,就更会让考官看到你的句子与众不同。其实就是主语从句,表语从句,宾语从句的变形。
g`S;xs 举例:This is what I can do.
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b3R(O| 同样主语、宾语、表语可以改成如下的复杂成分:
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TmLCmy! 5)附加(多此一举)
d wG!]j>:_ 如果有了老婆,总会遇到这样的情况,当你再讲某个人的时候,她会插一句说,我昨天见过他;或者说,就是某某某,如果把老婆的话插入到我们的话里面,那就是定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语。
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L +Uq4S^ or that 关键词必须要紧跟在先行词之前。
\zg R]| 6)排比(排山倒海句)
s.Z{mnD6 文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此,如果非要让你的文章更加精彩的话,那么我希望你引用一个个的排比句,一个个得对偶句,一个个的不定式,一个个地词,一个个的短语,如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势!
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N6-7RoA+ We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge,
t*H2;|zn_ to realize our potentials and to pay for our life. (气势恢宏)
8b]4uI< 要想写出如此气势恢宏的句子非用排比不可!七、 挑战极限原则
u3O@ccJ; 既然十挑战极限,必然是比较难的,但是并非不可攀!
)2Sh oFF 原理:在学生的文章中,很少发现诸如独立主格的句子,其实也很简单,只要花上5分钟的时间看看就可以领会,它就是分词的一种特殊形式,分词要求主语一致,而独立主格则不然。比如:
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6}N`YOJ. the Western Hills.
K 'l-6JY- Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about
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uCB9;+ Hjw 如果您可一些出这样的句子,不得高分才怪!
l3 F$5n 文章主体段落三大杀手锏:一、举实例
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&gr 8;O:0 思维短路,举实例!提出一个观点,举实例!提出一个方案,举实例!而且者也是我们揭示一个观点最好的方式,任何情况下,只要我们无法继续文章,不管三七二十一,尽管举例子!
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ynM~&]fk#k sound, light, colours, cartoon films and human performance.
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vFdI?(c- seemingly delicious food while they fime him or her.
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`B3-#!2X To take … as an example, One example is…, Another example is…,
GNv{Ij< for example二、做比较
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Wfd`v 世界上没有同样的指纹,没有相同的树叶,文章亦同,只有通过比较,你才会发现二者的相同点(through
#6|ve?`I comparison)和不同点(through contrast)。下面是一些短语:
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WZ6{9/%: on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead,
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QAxy?m,' …三、换言之
KH?6O%d 没话说了,可以换一句话再说,让你的文章在多一些字,或者文邹邹地说,是让读者更充分的理解你的观点。
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!5De?OXe I am enthusiastic about you. That is to say, I love you.
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:F"IOPfU5[ it or I am fed up with it.
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