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so much without having to do anything in turn. In addition, __2__ }I<r=?
life is always presenting new things to the child—things wjW>#DE
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seaside is a marvelous adventure. But a child has his pains: lR[[]Yn
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people do; he is continually being told not to do things, __4__ .&dW?HS
or being punished for that he has done wrong. __5__ "&*O7cs$pA
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comfortable. If he spends most of his time playing about in __7__ vw VeHjR
the way that he used to as a child, he will suffer hungry. __8__ U@21N3_@_
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the laws of his parents, he may go to prison. If, therefore, __9__
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he can have the great happiness of seeing himself making __10__ Hx[YHu
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1.what改为whatever。whatever引导让步状语从句,相当于no matter what,意思是“无论什么”,“不管什么”,whatever在从句中作宾语。 <,!8xp7,~
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2.turn改为return。短语in turn表示“轮流地; 挨个, 依次; 反过来”,而在这里是指孩子对父母的回报。 ;f,
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4.第一个do改为 are。与前面的is相对应。 d%+oCoeb
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5.that改为what。that引导的是定语从句,在本句中应该使用关系代词what,相当于the thing/ things that。 nE.w
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6.not改为no。固定搭配的副词短语“no longer” fz/Ee1T\
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7.comfortable改为comfortably。修饰动词live应为副词而不是形容词。 7#/->Y
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8.suffer改为go或become或be。或把hungry改为hunger。 {A!1s;
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9.therefore改为however。此处的条件状语从句表示转折。 SURbH;[
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10.making 改为 make。