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1.what改为whatever。whatever引导让步状语从句，相当于no matter what，意思是“无论什么”，“不管什么”，whatever在从句中作宾语。 -JwwD6D
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2.turn改为return。短语in turn表示“轮流地; 挨个, 依次; 反过来”，而在这里是指孩子对父母的回报。 KXvBJA$
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3.interesting改为interest。在形容词性物主代词their的后面应跟名词性成分。
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4.第一个do改为 are。与前面的is相对应。 OHy BNJ
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5.that改为what。that引导的是定语从句，在本句中应该使用关系代词what，相当于the thing/ things that。 B kh1VAT
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6.not改为no。固定搭配的副词短语“no longer” H% ^j yGS
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7.comfortable改为comfortably。修饰动词live应为副词而不是形容词。 zM+eb| >cr
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8.suffer改为go或become或be。或把hungry改为hunger。 N&K`bmtD
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9.therefore改为however。此处的条件状语从句表示转折。 R}J}Q b
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10.making 改为 make。
