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in the rain, or in the snow.His first visit to the {wvBs87
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people do; he is continually being told not to do things, __4__ t_w2J = 2
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comfortable. If he spends most of his time playing about in __7__ @]7s`?
the way that he used to as a child, he will suffer hungry. __8__ m{ f+ !
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the laws of his parents, he may go to prison. If, therefore, __9__ `t3w|%La }
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1.what改为whatever。whatever引导让步状语从句，相当于no matter what，意思是“无论什么”，“不管什么”，whatever在从句中作宾语。 XZT| ID_u"
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2.turn改为return。短语in turn表示“轮流地; 挨个, 依次; 反过来”，而在这里是指孩子对父母的回报。 ce:wF#Qs
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4.第一个do改为 are。与前面的is相对应。 oiOu169]
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5.that改为what。that引导的是定语从句，在本句中应该使用关系代词what，相当于the thing/ things that。 cZ3A~dTOR
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6.not改为no。固定搭配的副词短语“no longer” Ld
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10.making 改为 make。
