Childhood is a time when there are few responsibilities ~_D.&-xUF
to make life difficult. If a child has good parents, he Fye>H6MU
is fed, looked after and loved, what he may do, It is __1__ cl%+m
improbable that he will ever again in his life be given IA@>'O
so much without having to do anything in turn. In addition, __2__ X@\W*
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life is always presenting new things to the child—things v4n< G-
that have lost their interesting for older people because __3__ r0XEB,}
they are too well-known. A child finds pleasure in playing gYB!KM *v
in the rain, or in the snow.His first visit to the
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seaside is a marvelous adventure. But a child has his pains: X/,)KTo7
He is not so free to do as he wishes as he thinks old aj1]ZT\
people do; he is continually being told not to do things, __4__ SeD}H=,@
or being punished for that he has done wrong. __5__ <e2l@@#oy
His life is therefore not longer perfectly happy. __6__ e7RgA1
When the young man starts to earn his own living, he VVas>/0qr
becomes free from the discipline of school and parents; |
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but at the same time he is forced to accept responsibilities.
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He can not longer expect others to pay for his food, his }5;4'l8
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comfortable. If he spends most of his time playing about in __7__ 51jgx,-|$
the way that he used to as a child, he will suffer hungry. __8__ "b} mVrFh
And if he breaks the laws of society as he used to break +OE!Uqnt
the laws of his parents, he may go to prison. If, therefore, __9__ yQK{ +w
he works hard, keeps out of trouble and has good health, VeYT[Us"
he can have the great happiness of seeing himself making __10__ 0gd`W{YP
steady progress in his job and of building up for himself v675C# l(
his own position in society. `q?3ux
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1.what改为whatever。whatever引导让步状语从句,相当于no matter what,意思是“无论什么”,“不管什么”,whatever在从句中作宾语。 @/z\p7e
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2.turn改为return。短语in turn表示“轮流地; 挨个, 依次; 反过来”,而在这里是指孩子对父母的回报。 XO+BZB`F
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3.interesting改为interest。在形容词性物主代词their的后面应跟名词性成分。 nip6|dN
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4.第一个do改为 are。与前面的is相对应。 u8Ys2KLpL
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5.that改为what。that引导的是定语从句,在本句中应该使用关系代词what,相当于the thing/ things that。 >y3FU1w5d
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6.not改为no。固定搭配的副词短语“no longer” [o)K1>>7
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7.comfortable改为comfortably。修饰动词live应为副词而不是形容词。 Cv**iW
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8.suffer改为go或become或be。或把hungry改为hunger。 u{sHuVl
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9.therefore改为however。此处的条件状语从句表示转折。 &6eo;8
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10.making 改为 make。