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so much without having to do anything in turn. In addition, __2__ ,K30.E
life is always presenting new things to the child—things 497 l2}0
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comfortable. If he spends most of his time playing about in __7__ {FILt3f;
the way that he used to as a child, he will suffer hungry. __8__ x>A[~s"|N
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the laws of his parents, he may go to prison. If, therefore, __9__ q$ j
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4.第一个do改为 are。与前面的is相对应。 (>lH=&%zj
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5.that改为what。that引导的是定语从句,在本句中应该使用关系代词what,相当于the thing/ things that。 E9@Sc>e
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6.not改为no。固定搭配的副词短语“no longer” w2lO[o~x}
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7.comfortable改为comfortably。修饰动词live应为副词而不是形容词。 T;S6<J
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8.suffer改为go或become或be。或把hungry改为hunger。 s |o(~2j
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9.therefore改为however。此处的条件状语从句表示转折。 _C|j"f/}
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10.making 改为 make。