开头万能公式:
.wFU:y4r 2_olT_# 1. 开头万能公式一:名人名言
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4) 有人问了,“我没有记住名言,怎么办?尤其是英语名言?”,很好办:编!
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p6blD-v 经典句型:
E0bFx5e5fu A proberb says, “ You are only young once.” (适用于已记住的名言)
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.xv^G?GG 2. 开头万能公式二:数字统计
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HU3Vv<lz According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college
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v =bv@c Honesty
4O Zy&, 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,大学生向老师请假的理由当中78%都是假的。
9l=Fv6 Travel by Bike
9_`3IJ 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,85%的人在近距离旅行的时候首选的交通工具是自行车。
fsb=8>}63} Youth
pqd4iR Wv 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,在某个大学,学生的课余时间的70%都是在休闲娱乐。
B#H2RTc Five-day Work Week Better than Six-day Work?
r?XDvU 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,98%的人同意每周五天工作日。
I1J)#p%H. 更多句型:
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[EcV\. GfQ^@Tl 结尾万能公式:
"$%{}{#W0 yL4 -4 1. 结尾万能公式一:如此结论
8ST~$!z$ 说完了,毕竟要归纳一番,相信各位都有这样的经历,领导长篇大论,到最后终于冒出个“总而言之”之类的话,我们马上停止开小差,等待领导说结束语。也就是说,开头很好,也必然要有一个精彩的结尾,让读者眼前一亮,这样,你就可以拿高分了!比如下面的例子:
BfEx'C Obviously(此为过渡短语), we can draw the conclusion that good
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vzQyE0T/ 如果读者很难“显而见之”,但说无妨,就当读者的眼光太浅罢了!
G:){^Z? 更多过渡短语:
www.zlbbs.net CYMM*4# to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus
<y'qo8oqF 更多句型:
IFkvv1S` Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find that…
1pl2;! 2. 结尾万能公式二:如此建议
A1Ibx|K 如果说“如此结论”是结尾最没用的废话,那么“如此建议”应该是最有价值的废话了,因为这里虽然也是废话,但是却用了一个很经典的虚拟语气的句型。拽!
>dcqPNDg1^ Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve
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R\i]O 这里的虚拟语气用得很经典,因为考官本来经常考这个句型,而如果我们自己写出来,你说考官会怎么想呢?
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`mWQWx$V! Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be
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a'o}u,e5 写作的“七项基本原则”:一、 长 短 句原则
H{&a)!Ms @DUN;L 4 工作还得一张一驰呢,老让读者读长句,累死人!写一个短小精辟的句子,相反,却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末,也可以揭示主题:
@)S sKk| As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is
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wGZ>iLe: 如此可见,长短句结合,抑扬顿挫,岂不爽哉?牢记!
m[//_TFf] 强烈建议:在文章第一段(开头)用一长一短,且先长后短;在文章主体部分,要先用一个短句解释主要意思,然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式,定会让主体部分妙笔生辉!文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。二、
^/ULh,w!fP 主 题 句原则
I%.jc2kK 国有其君,家有其主,文章也要有其主。否则会给人造成“群龙无首”之感!相信各位读过一些破烂文学,故意把主体隐藏在文章之内,结果造成我们稀里糊涂!不知所云!所以奉劝各位一定要写一个主题句,放在文章的开头(保险型)或者结尾,让读者一目了然,必会平安无事!
~pDRF( 特别提示:隐藏主体句可是要冒险的!
`ja`#%^\u To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully
nEeQL~: prepared before the exam(主题句). Without sufficient preparation,
H'j_<R N you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.三、
HMl!?%% 一 二 三原则
QYODmeu 领导讲话总是第一部分、第一点、第二点、第三点、第二部分、第一点…
QE`:jxyad 如此罗嗦。可毕竟还是条理清楚。考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否结构清楚,条理自然。破解方法很简单,只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了。
;C7BoHB9 1)first, second, third, last(不推荐,原因:俗)
6:SK{RSURC 2)firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally(不推荐,原因:俗)
!HT> 3)the first, the second, the third, the last(不推荐,原因:俗)
Q 37V! 4)in the first place, in the second place, in the third place,
%M4XbSN| lastly(不推荐,原因:俗)
cQUH %7m 5)to begin with, then, furthermore, finally(强烈推荐)
J, (U<%n 6)to start with, next, in addition, finally(强烈推荐)
Wme1Uid 7)first and foremost, besides, last but not least(强烈推荐)
Azdz3/ 8)most important of all, moreover, finally
OXa5Jg}= 9)on the one hand, on the other hand(适用于两点的情况)
_7t|0aNo\ 10)for one thing, for another thing(适用于两点的情况)
`CTkx?e[ 建议:不仅仅在写作中注意,平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚!四、 短语优先原则
[E..VesrM 写作时,尤其是在考试时,如果使用短语,有两个好处:其一、用短语会使文章增加亮点,如果老师们看到你的文章太简单,看不到一个自己不认识的短语,必然会看你低一等。相反,如果发现亮点—精彩的短语,那么你的文章定会得高分了。其二、关键时刻思维短路,只有凑字数,怎么办?用短语是一个办法!比如:
X=*Yzz} I cannot bear it.
hr$VVbOho 可以用短语表达:I cannot put up with it.
3f7t% I want it.
6@ (k8<3 可以用短语表达:I am looking forward to it.
af`f*{Co3 这样字数明显增加,表达也更准确。五、 多实少虚原则
f"Vm'0r 原因很简单,写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西,不要空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用实词,少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。比如我们说一个很好的时候,不应该之说nice这样空洞的词,应该使用一些诸如generous,
X,C/x) humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital
]w&?k:y> 之类的形象词。再比如:
zwniS6R1 走出房间,general的词是:walk out of the room
EnsNO_"e| 但是小偷走出房间应该说:slip out of the room
$.x?in|_ *****走出房间应该说:sail out of the room
^|:{,d#Y 小孩走出房间应该说:dance out of the room
eA~_)-Z- 老人走出房间应该说:stagger out of the room
;?Y`e 所以多用实词,少用虚词,文章将会大放异彩!六、 多变句式原则
!_/8!95 1)加法(串联)
FclSuQWti 都希望写下很长的句子,像个老外似的,可就是怕写错,怎么办,最保险的写长句的方法就是这些,可以在任何句子之间加and,
D+vl%(g 但最好是前后的句子又先后关系或者并列关系。比如说:
dBD4ogo1 I enjor music and he is fond of playing guitar.
xhVq 如果是二者并列的,我们可以用一个超级句式:
zdpLAr Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm.
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JNA}EY^2I. besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover
r+W8m?oi 2)转折(拐弯抹角)
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gm%bxr@X~ despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of,
W;AWO0+ despite, notwithstanding
Z?j='/u>@ 3)因果(so, so, so)
D 5wR?O 昨天在街上我看到了一个女孩,然后我主动搭讪,然后我们去咖啡厅,然后我们认识了,然后我们成为了朋友…可见,讲故事的时候我们总要追求先后顺序,先什么,后什么,所以然后这个词就变得很常见了。其实这个词表示的是先后或因果关系!
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o B}G^t 4)失衡句(头重脚轻,或者头轻脚重)
vgbjvyfN 有些人脑袋大,身体小,或者有些人脑袋小,身体大,虽然我们不希望长成这个样子,可如果真的是这样了,也就必然会吸引别人的注意力。文章中如果出现这样的句子,就更会让考官看到你的句子与众不同。其实就是主语从句,表语从句,宾语从句的变形。
ZK_@.O+ ] 举例:This is what I can do.
e.Q K% Whether he can go with us or not is not sure.
Ru\Lr=9 同样主语、宾语、表语可以改成如下的复杂成分:
Pge }xKT When to go, Why he goes away…
b)`#^uxxJ 5)附加(多此一举)
R{y{ 如果有了老婆,总会遇到这样的情况,当你再讲某个人的时候,她会插一句说,我昨天见过他;或者说,就是某某某,如果把老婆的话插入到我们的话里面,那就是定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语。
$j2)_(<A%Q The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.
tJF~Xv2L! I don’t enjoy that book you are reading.
G?1V~6 Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going.
AT'$VCYC( 其实很简单,同位语--要解释的东西删除后不影响整个句子的构成;定语从句—借用之前的关键词并且用其重新组成一个句子插入其中,但是whom
w\;9&;; or that 关键词必须要紧跟在先行词之前。
?g#t3j>zoF 6)排比(排山倒海句)
&)}:Y!qiu 文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此,如果非要让你的文章更加精彩的话,那么我希望你引用一个个的排比句,一个个得对偶句,一个个的不定式,一个个地词,一个个的短语,如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势!
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6@*;Wk~ Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such
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g<tTZD\g We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge,
4J2F>m40 to realize our potentials and to pay for our life. (气势恢宏)
Wk#-LkI 要想写出如此气势恢宏的句子非用排比不可!七、 挑战极限原则
{%~Ec4r 既然十挑战极限,必然是比较难的,但是并非不可攀!
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O[Ch 原理:在学生的文章中,很少发现诸如独立主格的句子,其实也很简单,只要花上5分钟的时间看看就可以领会,它就是分词的一种特殊形式,分词要求主语一致,而独立主格则不然。比如:
.vF<3p| The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb
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y:zT1I@> Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about
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^`5Yxpz 文章主体段落三大杀手锏:一、举实例
PBnn,# uKzz/Y{ 思维短路,举实例!提出一个观点,举实例!提出一个方案,举实例!而且者也是我们揭示一个观点最好的方式,任何情况下,只要我们无法继续文章,不管三七二十一,尽管举例子!
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hRcJ):Wyb every possible stimulative factor in making ads, such as
l:/V%{sx sound, light, colours, cartoon films and human performance.
lhODNWi For instance, to advertise a certain food, advertisers will
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Q'M Ez seemingly delicious food while they fime him or her.
Gnq~1p5^ 更多句型:
L, GtIZkE To take … as an example, One example is…, Another example is…,
J0plQDe for example二、做比较
/YR$#&N2 方法:写完一个要点,比较与之相似的;又写完一个要点,再比较与之相反的;
SkUP9 世界上没有同样的指纹,没有相同的树叶,文章亦同,只有通过比较,你才会发现二者的相同点(through
{<BK@U comparison)和不同点(through contrast)。下面是一些短语:
h"S/D[ 相似的比较:
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tTamFL6 相反的比较:
~`fB\7M on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead,
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"VCr^' …三、换言之
["/x~\c'N 没话说了,可以换一句话再说,让你的文章在多一些字,或者文邹邹地说,是让读者更充分的理解你的观点。
:]jtV~E\ 实际就是重复重复再重复!下面的句子实际上就三个字 I love you!
c:T P7"vG I am enthusiastic about you. That is to say, I love you.
e/Y+S;a I am wild about you. In other words, I have fallen in love
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8A_(]Q 或者上面我们举过的例子:
[%Xfl7;Wh I cannot bear it.
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$Yc9><i 因此可以这样说:I cannot bear it. That is to say, I cannot put up with
v_h{_b8 it or I am fed up with it.
(#lS?+w) 更多短语:
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