开头万能公式:
PK[mf\G\ Bh3F4k2bg7 1. 开头万能公式一:名人名言
eY<<Hld 有人问了,“我没有记住名言,怎么办?尤其是英语名言?”,很好办:编!
Cyg2o<O@ 原理:我们看到的东西很多都是创造出来的,包括我们欣赏的文章也是,所以尽管编,但是一定要听起来很有道理呦!而且没准将来我们就是名人呢!对吧?
Np" p*O 经典句型:
VQ9A/DH/ A proberb says, “ You are only young once.” (适用于已记住的名言)
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k =! Q 2. 开头万能公式二:数字统计
b84l`J 原理:要想更有说服力,就应该用实际的数字来说明。
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981-[ga`Y According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college
N"70P/ students wanted to further their study after their graduation.
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}S> 4.8 Honesty
&K/?# 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,大学生向老师请假的理由当中78%都是假的。
KQ\K:# Travel by Bike
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P 9?cp{* Youth
m}"Hm(,6 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,在某个大学,学生的课余时间的70%都是在休闲娱乐。
f$lb.fy5 Five-day Work Week Better than Six-day Work?
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tV)CDA&Z c-+NWC 结尾万能公式:
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Eg 1. 结尾万能公式一:如此结论
<%)vl P#@ 说完了,毕竟要归纳一番,相信各位都有这样的经历,领导长篇大论,到最后终于冒出个“总而言之”之类的话,我们马上停止开小差,等待领导说结束语。也就是说,开头很好,也必然要有一个精彩的结尾,让读者眼前一亮,这样,你就可以拿高分了!比如下面的例子:
!5ps,+o Obviously(此为过渡短语), we can draw the conclusion that good
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(:l6R9'= 如果读者很难“显而见之”,但说无妨,就当读者的眼光太浅罢了!
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d/d)MoaJ*t 更多句型:
aXe&c^AR Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find that…
:c*"Dx'D 2. 结尾万能公式二:如此建议
rq%]CsRY5 如果说“如此结论”是结尾最没用的废话,那么“如此建议”应该是最有价值的废话了,因为这里虽然也是废话,但是却用了一个很经典的虚拟语气的句型。拽!
-@> {q/ Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve
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!ku}vTe 这里的虚拟语气用得很经典,因为考官本来经常考这个句型,而如果我们自己写出来,你说考官会怎么想呢?
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w'@gzK Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.
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+<bj}" 写作的“七项基本原则”:一、 长 短 句原则
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RC_Pj) As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is
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{it.F4. 如此可见,长短句结合,抑扬顿挫,岂不爽哉?牢记!
A]bb*a1 强烈建议:在文章第一段(开头)用一长一短,且先长后短;在文章主体部分,要先用一个短句解释主要意思,然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式,定会让主体部分妙笔生辉!文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。二、
vj?{={Y 主 题 句原则
+<E#_)}`D6 国有其君,家有其主,文章也要有其主。否则会给人造成“群龙无首”之感!相信各位读过一些破烂文学,故意把主体隐藏在文章之内,结果造成我们稀里糊涂!不知所云!所以奉劝各位一定要写一个主题句,放在文章的开头(保险型)或者结尾,让读者一目了然,必会平安无事!
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?_ H9>/:. prepared before the exam(主题句). Without sufficient preparation,
Jh+;+" you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.三、
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&) i 领导讲话总是第一部分、第一点、第二点、第三点、第二部分、第一点…
(;fJXgj. 如此罗嗦。可毕竟还是条理清楚。考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否结构清楚,条理自然。破解方法很简单,只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了。
Cmx<>7fN 1)first, second, third, last(不推荐,原因:俗)
o)I)I/v 2)firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally(不推荐,原因:俗)
l,|Llb 3)the first, the second, the third, the last(不推荐,原因:俗)
"%T~d[M 4)in the first place, in the second place, in the third place,
:hICe+2ca lastly(不推荐,原因:俗)
KS_+R@3Z 5)to begin with, then, furthermore, finally(强烈推荐)
$:u*)&"t| 6)to start with, next, in addition, finally(强烈推荐)
g1t6XVS$9 7)first and foremost, besides, last but not least(强烈推荐)
)WvKRp r 8)most important of all, moreover, finally
e=LrgRy+ 9)on the one hand, on the other hand(适用于两点的情况)
HxbzFu?h 10)for one thing, for another thing(适用于两点的情况)
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ZPo6p 建议:不仅仅在写作中注意,平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚!四、 短语优先原则
z$&B7? 写作时,尤其是在考试时,如果使用短语,有两个好处:其一、用短语会使文章增加亮点,如果老师们看到你的文章太简单,看不到一个自己不认识的短语,必然会看你低一等。相反,如果发现亮点—精彩的短语,那么你的文章定会得高分了。其二、关键时刻思维短路,只有凑字数,怎么办?用短语是一个办法!比如:
>33=0< I cannot bear it.
L;:|bVH 可以用短语表达:I cannot put up with it.
4j3q69TZR I want it.
bg~CV&]M 可以用短语表达:I am looking forward to it.
V_3oAu54s{ 这样字数明显增加,表达也更准确。五、 多实少虚原则
8cO?VH,nk 原因很简单,写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西,不要空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用实词,少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。比如我们说一个很好的时候,不应该之说nice这样空洞的词,应该使用一些诸如generous,
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{^oohW - 之类的形象词。再比如:
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+kWWx#L# *****走出房间应该说:sail out of the room
TqJ @l 小孩走出房间应该说:dance out of the room
!v2/sq$G 老人走出房间应该说:stagger out of the room
e\~nqKCb 所以多用实词,少用虚词,文章将会大放异彩!六、 多变句式原则
A^}# 1)加法(串联)
dg.1{6HM 都希望写下很长的句子,像个老外似的,可就是怕写错,怎么办,最保险的写长句的方法就是这些,可以在任何句子之间加and,
=?|$}vDO[ 但最好是前后的句子又先后关系或者并列关系。比如说:
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@Yt394gA%\ Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm.
zgFL/a< 其它的短语可以用:
MO0t besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover
5H Cw%n9 2)转折(拐弯抹角)
f5//?ek 批评某人缺点的时候,我们总习惯先拐弯抹角说说他的优点,然后转入正题,再说缺点,这种方式虽然阴险了点,可毕竟还比较容易让人接受。所以呢,我们说话的时候,只要在要点之前先来点废话,注意二者之间用个专这次就够了。
j f4<LmR The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition.
:PV3J0pB~ The coat was thin, but it was warm.
BqJ|l7+ 更多的短语:
ZeG4z({af despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of,
%KF I~Qk despite, notwithstanding
<IIz-6*V 3)因果(so, so, so)
2aTq?ZR|8A 昨天在街上我看到了一个女孩,然后我主动搭讪,然后我们去咖啡厅,然后我们认识了,然后我们成为了朋友…可见,讲故事的时候我们总要追求先后顺序,先什么,后什么,所以然后这个词就变得很常见了。其实这个词表示的是先后或因果关系!
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XRV~yBIS then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a
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!]?kvf-3e 有些人脑袋大,身体小,或者有些人脑袋小,身体大,虽然我们不希望长成这个样子,可如果真的是这样了,也就必然会吸引别人的注意力。文章中如果出现这样的句子,就更会让考官看到你的句子与众不同。其实就是主语从句,表语从句,宾语从句的变形。
%>/&&(BE 举例:This is what I can do.
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aAP86MHO 同样主语、宾语、表语可以改成如下的复杂成分:
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uo?R;fX26 5)附加(多此一举)
A;X3z-[[ 如果有了老婆,总会遇到这样的情况,当你再讲某个人的时候,她会插一句说,我昨天见过他;或者说,就是某某某,如果把老婆的话插入到我们的话里面,那就是定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语。
jHob{3 The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.
IJ5'n I don’t enjoy that book you are reading.
D?dS/agA Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going.
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'w1ll9O 6)排比(排山倒海句)
IR3+BDE)> 文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此,如果非要让你的文章更加精彩的话,那么我希望你引用一个个的排比句,一个个得对偶句,一个个的不定式,一个个地词,一个个的短语,如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势!
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?N9Z;_&^. to realize our potentials and to pay for our life. (气势恢宏)
'xG{q+jj' 要想写出如此气势恢宏的句子非用排比不可!七、 挑战极限原则
EqBTN07dZS 既然十挑战极限,必然是比较难的,但是并非不可攀!
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/ 原理:在学生的文章中,很少发现诸如独立主格的句子,其实也很简单,只要花上5分钟的时间看看就可以领会,它就是分词的一种特殊形式,分词要求主语一致,而独立主格则不然。比如:
Jw;G_dQ[ The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb
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6cjCn 文章主体段落三大杀手锏:一、举实例
(+xT5 2 ;*+H& 思维短路,举实例!提出一个观点,举实例!提出一个方案,举实例!而且者也是我们揭示一个观点最好的方式,任何情况下,只要我们无法继续文章,不管三七二十一,尽管举例子!
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9D,!] 更多句型:
+BhJske To take … as an example, One example is…, Another example is…,
<gFisc/#r for example二、做比较
Hj `\Fm*A 方法:写完一个要点,比较与之相似的;又写完一个要点,再比较与之相反的;
lu+KfKa 世界上没有同样的指纹,没有相同的树叶,文章亦同,只有通过比较,你才会发现二者的相同点(through
{:\LFB_ comparison)和不同点(through contrast)。下面是一些短语:
C7AD1rl 相似的比较:
f)Y~F/[$P in comparison, likewise, similarly, in the same manner
3 _!MVT 相反的比较:
P0sAq7" on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead,
c/j+aj0.v nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with …,
xTH3g^E …三、换言之
l&kZ6lZ 没话说了,可以换一句话再说,让你的文章在多一些字,或者文邹邹地说,是让读者更充分的理解你的观点。
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M} ri>o I am enthusiastic about you. That is to say, I love you.
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fz8 41 <Y I cannot bear it.
xoGrXt9& 可以用短语表达:I cannot put up with it.
[~G1Rz\h 因此可以这样说:I cannot bear it. That is to say, I cannot put up with
mb%U~Na it or I am fed up with it.
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