开头万能公式:
0'`>20Y 1. 开头万能公式一:名人名言
Z 9mY*}:U~ 有人问了,“我没有记住名言,怎么办?尤其是英语名言?”,很好办:编!
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OX 原理:我们看到的东西很多都是创造出来的,包括我们欣赏的文章也是,所以尽管编,但是一定要听起来很有道理呦!而且没准将来我们就是名人呢!对吧?
"tB"C6b 经典句型:
XeDiiI A proberb says, “ You are only young once.” (适用于已记住的名言)
\];0S4SBy It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever. (适用于自编名言)
"5u*C#T2$ 更多经典句型:
[ ps5; As everyone knows, No one can deny that…
= ;#?CAa: 2. 开头万能公式二:数字统计
+uKh]RP 原理:要想更有说服力,就应该用实际的数字来说明。
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^%V'l-}/ According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted
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9F)+p7VJq 看起来这个数字文邹邹的,其实都是编造出来的,下面随便几个题目我们都可以这样编造:
%719h>$ Honesty
ra=U, 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,大学生向老师请假的理由当中78%都是假的。
wl H6 Travel by Bike
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`"zXf -qeE Youth
&2[OH}4 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,在某个大学,学生的课余时间的70%都是在休闲娱乐。
m`gH5vQa Five-day Work Week Better than Six-day Work?
5xe}ljo 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,98%的人同意每周五天工作日。
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写作绝招
$q,2VH :Ip 结尾万能公式:
5H#f;L\k 1. 结尾万能公式一:如此结论
7p*PDoM6` 说完了,毕竟要归纳一番,相信各位都有这样的经历,领导长篇大论,到最后终于冒出个“总而言之”之类的话,我们马上停止开小差,等待领导说结束语。也就是说,开头很好,也必然要有一个精彩的结尾,让读者眼前一亮,这样,你就可以拿高分了!比如下面的例子:
5'wWj}0!% Obviously(此为过渡短语), we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from
!qk+>6~A, politeness and respect for others.
Y!s94#OaZ 如果读者很难“显而见之”,但说无妨,就当读者的眼光太浅罢了!
,Z*&QR 更多过渡短语:
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Q`-JRY- 更多句型:
x6Zhw9RV Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find that…
"=<T8M 2. 结尾万能公式二:如此建议
D*.U? 如果说“如此结论”是结尾最没用的废话,那么“如此建议”应该是最有价值的废话了,因为这里虽然也是废话,但是却用了一个很经典的虚拟语气的句型。拽!
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Ug(;\*yg 这里的虚拟语气用得很经典,因为考官本来经常考这个句型,而如果我们自己写出来,你说考官会怎么想呢?
Aiyx!Q6vT 更多句型:
yu3: Hv} Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.
!YX$4_I Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.
&h^E_]P 写作绝招
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X 写作的“七项基本原则”:
5B6twn~[ 一、 长 短 句原则
ybk~ m 工作还得一张一驰呢,老让读者读长句,累死人!写一个短小精辟的句子,相反,却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末,也可以揭示主题:
IBfLb(I As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is to meet the
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9O(vh(C of mind, they are in a way quite similar.
lGoP(ki 如此可见,长短句结合,抑扬顿挫,岂不爽哉?牢记!
uBpnfIe 强烈建议:在文章第一段(开头)用一长一短,且先长后短;在文章主体部分,要先用一个短句解释主要意思,然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式,定会让主体部分妙笔生辉!文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。
Vx'82CIC 二、 主 题 句原则
j'L/eps?S 国有其君,家有其主,文章也要有其主。否则会给人造成“群龙无首”之感!相信各位读过一些破烂文学,故意把主体隐藏在文章之内,结果造成我们稀里糊涂!不知所云!所以奉劝各位一定要写一个主题句,放在文章的开头(保险型)或者结尾,让读者一目了然,必会平安无事!
YA+jLy6ZL 特别提示:隐藏主体句可是要冒险的!
.M(')$\U To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared
/wAx#[c[ before the exam(主题句). Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly
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H){}28dX 三、 一 二 三原则
rF@njw@ 领导讲话总是第一部分、第一点、第二点、第三点、第二部分、第一点…
y5@#leM 如此罗嗦。可毕竟还是条理清楚。考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否结构清楚,条理自然。破解方法很简单,只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了。
{"v~1W) 1)first, second, third, last(不推荐,原因:俗)
da[=d*I. 2)firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally(不推荐,原因:俗)
:zA/~/Wo 3)the first, the second, the third, the last(不推荐,原因:俗)
yP<ngi^s= 4)in the first place, in the second place, in the third place,
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8NF93tqD6 5)to begin with, then, furthermore, finally(强烈推荐)
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6)to start with, next, in addition, finally(强烈推荐)
Fal##6B 7)first and foremost, besides, last but not least(强烈推荐)
,|}}Ml 8)most important of all, moreover, finally
+DsdzR`Gx, 9)on the one hand, on the other hand(适用于两点的情况)
~`Y!_ '(x 10)for one thing, for another thing(适用于两点的情况)
xF8U )j! 建议:不仅仅在写作中注意,平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚!
a^vTBJXo 四、 短语优先原则
nsA}A~(E 写作时,尤其是在考试时,如果使用短语,有两个好处:其一、用短语会使文章增加亮点,如果老师们看到你的文章太简单,看不到一个自己不认识的短语,必然会看你低一等。相反,如果发现亮点—精彩的短语,那么你的文章定会得高分了。其二、关键时刻思维短路,只有凑字数,怎么办?用短语是一个办法!比如:
www.freekaobo.com AT6o~u!WU I cannot bear it.
.#q]{j@Ot 可以用短语表达:I cannot put up with it.
aRV.;S I want it.
#}p@+rkg2 可以用短语表达:I am looking forward to it.
+,Ud 3iS 这样字数明显增加,表达也更准确。
Iwx~kvz\_( 五、 多实少虚原则
F G:t2ea 原因很简单,写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西,不要空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用实词,少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。比如我们说一个很好的时候,不应该之说nice这样空洞的词,应该使用一些诸如generous,
gf ?_tB0C humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital 之类的形象词。再比如:
=vs]Kmm 走出房间,general的词是:walk out of the room
^7Rc\ 但是小偷走出房间应该说:slip out of the room
5i@WBa *****走出房间应该说:sail out of the room
un F=";9H 小孩走出房间应该说:dance out of the room
v]GQb 老人走出房间应该说:stagger out of the room
f6,?Yex8B 所以多用实词,少用虚词,文章将会大放异彩!
F~$ay@g 六、 多变句式原则
Et! 6i7`] 1)加法(串联)
`N}aV Ns 都希望写下很长的句子,像个老外似的,可就是怕写错,怎么办,最保险的写长句的方法就是这些,可以在任何句子之间加and,
8w$q4fg0 但最好是前后的句子又先后关系或者并列关系。比如说:
7_Op(C4,nC I enjor music and he is fond of playing guitar.
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*!.anbo@?z Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm.
ri/CLq^D 其它的短语可以用:
@~QI3)=s besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover
~f:"Q(f+ 2)转折(拐弯抹角)
hLr\;Swyp 批评某人缺点的时候,我们总习惯先拐弯抹角说说他的优点,然后转入正题,再说缺点,这种方式虽然阴险了点,可毕竟还比较容易让人接受。所以呢,我们说话的时候,只要在要点之前先来点废话,注意二者之间用个专这次就够了。
_+9o'<#u( The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition.
FL{$9o\@ The coat was thin, but it was warm.
G ?Hx"3:? 更多的短语:
\ZtKaEXnx despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite,
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]1 jhy2j 3)因果(so, so, so)
aH_0EBRc 昨天在街上我看到了一个女孩,然后我主动搭讪,然后我们去咖啡厅,然后我们认识了,然后我们成为了朋友…可见,讲故事的时候我们总要追求先后顺序,先什么,后什么,所以然后这个词就变得很常见了。其实这个词表示的是先后或因果关系!
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UP7?9\ 更多短语:
M0$_x~ then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result, for this
xErAs}| reason, so that
>qVSepK3 4)失衡句(头重脚轻,或者头轻脚重)
qP$)V3l 有些人脑袋大,身体小,或者有些人脑袋小,身体大,虽然我们不希望长成这个样子,可如果真的是这样了,也就必然会吸引别人的注意力。文章中如果出现这样的句子,就更会让考官看到你的句子与众不同。其实就是主语从句,表语从句,宾语从句的变形。
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&3OV|ly] Whether he can go with us or not is not sure.
_SnD)k+TgJ 同样主语、宾语、表语可以改成如下的复杂成分:
ZfXgVTJ` When to go, Why he goes away…
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CFUn1^?0 如果有了老婆,总会遇到这样的情况,当你再讲某个人的时候,她会插一句说,我昨天见过他;或者说,就是某某某,如果把老婆的话插入到我们的话里面,那就是定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语。
nkzH}F=< The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.
<.2jQ#So I don’t enjoy that book you are reading.
M.HMnN# Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going.
A&A{Thz 其实很简单,同位语--要解释的东西删除后不影响整个句子的构成;定语从句—借用之前的关键词并且用其重新组成一个句子插入其中,但是whom or
D/afa8>LQH that 关键词必须要紧跟在先行词之前。
z8XWp[K 6)排比(排山倒海句)
<kk!ns I 文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此,如果非要让你的文章更加精彩的话,那么我希望你引用一个个的排比句,一个个得对偶句,一个个的不定式,一个个地词,一个个的短语,如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势!
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aU@1j;se@ there is plenty in London for you.
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Omi/sKFMi coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean tides.
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cvQAo| our potentials and to pay for our life. (气势恢宏)
K { FZ/ 要想写出如此气势恢宏的句子非用排比不可!
[$F*R@,& 七、 挑战极限原则
#h P>IU 既然十挑战极限,必然是比较难的,但是并非不可攀!
2C1NDrS;} 原理:在学生的文章中,很少发现诸如独立主格的句子,其实也很简单,只要花上5分钟的时间看看就可以领会,它就是分词的一种特殊形式,分词要求主语一致,而独立主格则不然。比如:
mlPvF%Ba The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the Western
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$}'(%\7" Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times
$ai;8)C6 that of China.
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kv6nVlI)B 写作绝招
i"=lxqWeaV 文章主体段落三大杀手锏:
}dHdy{$ 一、举实例
rL&Mq}7QK 思维短路,举实例!提出一个观点,举实例!提出一个方案,举实例!而且者也是我们揭示一个观点最好的方式,任何情况下,只要我们无法继续文章,不管三七二十一,尽管举例子!
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z{FFTb^B possible stimulative factor in making ads, such as sound, light, colours,
5KDCmw cartoon films and human performance. For instance, to advertise a certain
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"<{|ni} To take … as an example, One example is…, Another example is…, for example
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l^OflZC~ 方法:写完一个要点,比较与之相似的;又写完一个要点,再比较与之相反的;
_Gf-s51s 世界上没有同样的指纹,没有相同的树叶,文章亦同,只有通过比较,你才会发现二者的相同点(through comparison)和不同点(through
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><Zu+HX 相似的比较:
096Yd=3h in comparison, likewise, similarly, in the same manner
xb<|m2<)H 相反的比较:
"M!m-] on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead, nevertheless, in
%Zbm%YaW5 contrast, on the contrary, compared with …, …
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w/(c}%v}= 没话说了,可以换一句话再说,让你的文章在多一些字,或者文邹邹地说,是让读者更充分的理解你的观点。
J{-`&I'b 实际就是重复重复再重复!下面的句子实际上就三个字 I love you!
S2;^ I am enthusiastic about you. That is to say, I love you.
-egnMc67 I am wild about you. In other words, I have fallen in love with you.
R y#C#0 或者上面我们举过的例子:
Kx&"9g$ I cannot bear it.
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BWy-R6br 因此可以这样说:I cannot bear it. That is to say, I cannot put up with it or I am
kHylg{i{" fed up with it.
r A(A$VR 更多短语:
MTZCI} in more difficult language, in simpler words, put it more simply