开头万能公式:
4RPc&% 1. 开头万能公式一:名人名言
( (.b& 有人问了,“我没有记住名言,怎么办?尤其是英语名言?”,很好办:编!
S511}KPbm/ 原理:我们看到的东西很多都是创造出来的,包括我们欣赏的文章也是,所以尽管编,但是一定要听起来很有道理呦!而且没准将来我们就是名人呢!对吧?
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Pu|PIdu!08 A proberb says, “ You are only young once.” (适用于已记住的名言)
;iol 2 It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever. (适用于自编名言)
&@g~o0 更多经典句型:
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;kW+ 2. 开头万能公式二:数字统计
CcGE4BB 原理:要想更有说服力,就应该用实际的数字来说明。
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kGz0`8URu According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted
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XZh1/b^DMN 看起来这个数字文邹邹的,其实都是编造出来的,下面随便几个题目我们都可以这样编造:
9i6z p' Honesty
x9DG87P~+ 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,大学生向老师请假的理由当中78%都是假的。
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M0jC:*D`" 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,在某个大学,学生的课余时间的70%都是在休闲娱乐。
"YC5viX Five-day Work Week Better than Six-day Work?
W"{:|'/v 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,98%的人同意每周五天工作日。
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"c9T4=]&t A recent statistics shows that …
ES4[@RX 写作绝招
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s%bm1$} 1. 结尾万能公式一:如此结论
_?}[7K!~d 说完了,毕竟要归纳一番,相信各位都有这样的经历,领导长篇大论,到最后终于冒出个“总而言之”之类的话,我们马上停止开小差,等待领导说结束语。也就是说,开头很好,也必然要有一个精彩的结尾,让读者眼前一亮,这样,你就可以拿高分了!比如下面的例子:
BN_I#8r Obviously(此为过渡短语), we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from
qUSy0SQ/l politeness and respect for others.
&.v|yG]& 如果读者很难“显而见之”,但说无妨,就当读者的眼光太浅罢了!
! %~P[;. 更多过渡短语:
pdw;SIoC to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus
6_=t~9sY 更多句型:
P&snIJ Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find that…
JK%UaEut= 2. 结尾万能公式二:如此建议
a>o]garB+ 如果说“如此结论”是结尾最没用的废话,那么“如此建议”应该是最有价值的废话了,因为这里虽然也是废话,但是却用了一个很经典的虚拟语气的句型。拽!
^~7/hm: Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the
BJDSk#!J!{ problem.
+Oafo|% 这里的虚拟语气用得很经典,因为考官本来经常考这个句型,而如果我们自己写出来,你说考官会怎么想呢?
F97HFt6{ 更多句型:
IaHu$` v Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.
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olxnQYFo 一、 长 短 句原则
fo"%4rkL 工作还得一张一驰呢,老让读者读长句,累死人!写一个短小精辟的句子,相反,却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末,也可以揭示主题:
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th^&wp 如此可见,长短句结合,抑扬顿挫,岂不爽哉?牢记!
KBg5_+l 强烈建议:在文章第一段(开头)用一长一短,且先长后短;在文章主体部分,要先用一个短句解释主要意思,然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式,定会让主体部分妙笔生辉!文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。
BCI[jfd 7 二、 主 题 句原则
C@P*:L_ 国有其君,家有其主,文章也要有其主。否则会给人造成“群龙无首”之感!相信各位读过一些破烂文学,故意把主体隐藏在文章之内,结果造成我们稀里糊涂!不知所云!所以奉劝各位一定要写一个主题句,放在文章的开头(保险型)或者结尾,让读者一目了然,必会平安无事!
G6XDPr:} 特别提示:隐藏主体句可是要冒险的!
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^|lw~F before the exam(主题句). Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly
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w{"ro~9o 三、 一 二 三原则
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.L8g(F(=: 如此罗嗦。可毕竟还是条理清楚。考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否结构清楚,条理自然。破解方法很简单,只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了。
r!&}4lHYi 1)first, second, third, last(不推荐,原因:俗)
|0nt u+ 2)firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally(不推荐,原因:俗)
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uhvn1" 4)in the first place, in the second place, in the third place,
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gXvE^fE 5)to begin with, then, furthermore, finally(强烈推荐)
sEHA?UP$<F 6)to start with, next, in addition, finally(强烈推荐)
^D?{[LBc 7)first and foremost, besides, last but not least(强烈推荐)
(b"kN( 8)most important of all, moreover, finally
6^sH3=# 9)on the one hand, on the other hand(适用于两点的情况)
|lMc6C 10)for one thing, for another thing(适用于两点的情况)
Hn}m}A 建议:不仅仅在写作中注意,平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚!
>Q2kXwN 四、 短语优先原则
f/670Acv 写作时,尤其是在考试时,如果使用短语,有两个好处:其一、用短语会使文章增加亮点,如果老师们看到你的文章太简单,看不到一个自己不认识的短语,必然会看你低一等。相反,如果发现亮点—精彩的短语,那么你的文章定会得高分了。其二、关键时刻思维短路,只有凑字数,怎么办?用短语是一个办法!比如:
www.freekaobo.com OjurfVw I cannot bear it.
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l9naqb:iP 可以用短语表达:I am looking forward to it.
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p!t_y|SX 五、 多实少虚原则
R,`3 SW() 原因很简单,写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西,不要空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用实词,少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。比如我们说一个很好的时候,不应该之说nice这样空洞的词,应该使用一些诸如generous,
/Q2HN(Y humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital 之类的形象词。再比如:
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走出房间,general的词是:walk out of the room
\u*[mrX_B: 但是小偷走出房间应该说:slip out of the room
T U^s!Tj *****走出房间应该说:sail out of the room
5s:g(gy3BR 小孩走出房间应该说:dance out of the room
?nwg.&P 老人走出房间应该说:stagger out of the room
"4L_BJZ 所以多用实词,少用虚词,文章将会大放异彩!
wPvYnhr|G- 六、 多变句式原则
bO+e?&vQ% 1)加法(串联)
[6CWgQ%Ue 都希望写下很长的句子,像个老外似的,可就是怕写错,怎么办,最保险的写长句的方法就是这些,可以在任何句子之间加and,
3Qd%`k 但最好是前后的句子又先后关系或者并列关系。比如说:
I+rLKGZC I enjor music and he is fond of playing guitar.
#]J"j]L 如果是二者并列的,我们可以用一个超级句式:
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gT2k}5d}p 其它的短语可以用:
>NZJ-:t besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover
{-51rAyi 2)转折(拐弯抹角)
}CvhLjo 批评某人缺点的时候,我们总习惯先拐弯抹角说说他的优点,然后转入正题,再说缺点,这种方式虽然阴险了点,可毕竟还比较容易让人接受。所以呢,我们说话的时候,只要在要点之前先来点废话,注意二者之间用个专这次就够了。
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\J6&Z13Q The coat was thin, but it was warm.
0}q*s! 更多的短语:
DI=?{A despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite,
[fg-"-+:M notwithstanding
-*;JUSGh 3)因果(so, so, so)
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}^azj>p5 The snow began to fall, so we went home.
oG=4&SQ 更多短语:
yK0iW then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result, for this
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uE'Kk8 4)失衡句(头重脚轻,或者头轻脚重)
iu QMVtv 有些人脑袋大,身体小,或者有些人脑袋小,身体大,虽然我们不希望长成这个样子,可如果真的是这样了,也就必然会吸引别人的注意力。文章中如果出现这样的句子,就更会让考官看到你的句子与众不同。其实就是主语从句,表语从句,宾语从句的变形。
!BN@cc[% 举例:This is what I can do.
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Y``]66\Fp 同样主语、宾语、表语可以改成如下的复杂成分:
'6GW.; When to go, Why he goes away…
;+rcT;_^/ 5)附加(多此一举)
]\*_} 如果有了老婆,总会遇到这样的情况,当你再讲某个人的时候,她会插一句说,我昨天见过他;或者说,就是某某某,如果把老婆的话插入到我们的话里面,那就是定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语。
WT:ZT$W The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.
ITfz/d8 I don’t enjoy that book you are reading.
"X\6tl7a| Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going.
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sZ#U{LI that 关键词必须要紧跟在先行词之前。
y':65NMda 6)排比(排山倒海句)
F87c?Vh)K 文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此,如果非要让你的文章更加精彩的话,那么我希望你引用一个个的排比句,一个个得对偶句,一个个的不定式,一个个地词,一个个的短语,如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势!
TnJNs Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or simple,
gq050Bl) there is plenty in London for you.
F-GH?sfvi Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil,
(PSL[P coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean tides.
Cps'l We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, to realize
JwdvY] our potentials and to pay for our life. (气势恢宏)
tfVlIY< 要想写出如此气势恢宏的句子非用排比不可!
8B3C[? 七、 挑战极限原则
Jn"ya^~ 既然十挑战极限,必然是比较难的,但是并非不可攀!
EC7)M}H 原理:在学生的文章中,很少发现诸如独立主格的句子,其实也很简单,只要花上5分钟的时间看看就可以领会,它就是分词的一种特殊形式,分词要求主语一致,而独立主格则不然。比如:
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=jvL2ps< 如果您可一些出这样的句子,不得高分才怪!
@P<aTRy,f 写作绝招
iO 7s zi 文章主体段落三大杀手锏:
6yd?xeD 一、举实例
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7AQv4 possible stimulative factor in making ads, such as sound, light, colours,
fwv.^kx cartoon films and human performance. For instance, to advertise a certain
ko6[Ej:TBo food, advertisers will ask an actor or actress to sit at a table and
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p$a+?5'Q 更多句型:
p_CC KU To take … as an example, One example is…, Another example is…, for example
yZ,S$tSR 二、做比较
"89L^I 方法:写完一个要点,比较与之相似的;又写完一个要点,再比较与之相反的;
! l"*DR 世界上没有同样的指纹,没有相同的树叶,文章亦同,只有通过比较,你才会发现二者的相同点(through comparison)和不同点(through
g:Fo7*i contrast)。下面是一些短语:
s"x(i 相似的比较:
/@0 in comparison, likewise, similarly, in the same manner
}ni@]k#q< 相反的比较:
^_k`@SU on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead, nevertheless, in
R_b)2FU1y contrast, on the contrary, compared with …, …
tD> qHR 三、换言之
&;%,Axc 没话说了,可以换一句话再说,让你的文章在多一些字,或者文邹邹地说,是让读者更充分的理解你的观点。
_g6H&no[ 实际就是重复重复再重复!下面的句子实际上就三个字 I love you!
tD6ukK1x I am enthusiastic about you. That is to say, I love you.
PKYm{wO- I am wild about you. In other words, I have fallen in love with you.
O;m [ 或者上面我们举过的例子:
(VBO1 f I cannot bear it.
_vUId?9@+e 可以用短语表达:I cannot put up with it.
bRI `ZT0 因此可以这样说:I cannot bear it. That is to say, I cannot put up with it or I am
A#nSK#wS61 fed up with it.
:xC1Ka%~ 更多短语:
7mnZ,gpb in more difficult language, in simpler words, put it more simply