开头万能公式:
TX&Jt% 1. 开头万能公式一:名人名言
JYW)uJ 有人问了,“我没有记住名言,怎么办?尤其是英语名言?”,很好办:编!
+O*/"]h 原理:我们看到的东西很多都是创造出来的,包括我们欣赏的文章也是,所以尽管编,但是一定要听起来很有道理呦!而且没准将来我们就是名人呢!对吧?
3%(N[&LU 经典句型:
r}mbXvn A proberb says, “ You are only young once.” (适用于已记住的名言)
&i$ldR It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever. (适用于自编名言)
/Z@tv.f 更多经典句型:
RM!<8fXYD As everyone knows, No one can deny that…
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2. 开头万能公式二:数字统计
6y9t(m 原理:要想更有说服力,就应该用实际的数字来说明。
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>JC According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted
<7j87 to further their study after their graduation.
5sx1Zq7 看起来这个数字文邹邹的,其实都是编造出来的,下面随便几个题目我们都可以这样编造:
#]ypHVE Honesty
urMG*7i <c 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,大学生向老师请假的理由当中78%都是假的。
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A8oo@z68n> 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,85%的人在近距离旅行的时候首选的交通工具是自行车。
eFL=G% Youth
o'f?YZ$. 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,在某个大学,学生的课余时间的70%都是在休闲娱乐。
,u`YT%&L Five-day Work Week Better than Six-day Work?
}L# _\ 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,98%的人同意每周五天工作日。
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^w c"&;=c| 写作绝招
v,4pp@8rv 结尾万能公式:
V9dF1Hj 1. 结尾万能公式一:如此结论
fM^qQM[lG 说完了,毕竟要归纳一番,相信各位都有这样的经历,领导长篇大论,到最后终于冒出个“总而言之”之类的话,我们马上停止开小差,等待领导说结束语。也就是说,开头很好,也必然要有一个精彩的结尾,让读者眼前一亮,这样,你就可以拿高分了!比如下面的例子:
d[V;&U Obviously(此为过渡短语), we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from
Dm-zMCf}Q politeness and respect for others.
.QN>z-YA6: 如果读者很难“显而见之”,但说无妨,就当读者的眼光太浅罢了!
obNqsyc77R 更多过渡短语:
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qCqFy#Ms\ 更多句型:
-2 A(5B9Fq Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find that…
\3S8 62B7 2. 结尾万能公式二:如此建议
#R.-KUW: 如果说“如此结论”是结尾最没用的废话,那么“如此建议”应该是最有价值的废话了,因为这里虽然也是废话,但是却用了一个很经典的虚拟语气的句型。拽!
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v4.#;F.\m problem.
p~,]*y:XT 这里的虚拟语气用得很经典,因为考官本来经常考这个句型,而如果我们自己写出来,你说考官会怎么想呢?
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@qnD=mE Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.
L G1r]2 写作绝招
X7i/fm{l' 写作的“七项基本原则”:
@Q/-s9b 一、 长 短 句原则
qycI(5S, 工作还得一张一驰呢,老让读者读长句,累死人!写一个短小精辟的句子,相反,却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末,也可以揭示主题:
~tR~?b T As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is to meet the
qQsku;C?i primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need
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:E@3Vl#U 如此可见,长短句结合,抑扬顿挫,岂不爽哉?牢记!
uec!RKE 强烈建议:在文章第一段(开头)用一长一短,且先长后短;在文章主体部分,要先用一个短句解释主要意思,然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式,定会让主体部分妙笔生辉!文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。
7e#?e+5+A 二、 主 题 句原则
nCj2N,mT 国有其君,家有其主,文章也要有其主。否则会给人造成“群龙无首”之感!相信各位读过一些破烂文学,故意把主体隐藏在文章之内,结果造成我们稀里糊涂!不知所云!所以奉劝各位一定要写一个主题句,放在文章的开头(保险型)或者结尾,让读者一目了然,必会平安无事!
p-zXp K" 特别提示:隐藏主体句可是要冒险的!
|<.lW To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared
Ie`13 L2 before the exam(主题句). Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly
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j/nWb`#y 三、 一 二 三原则
S!G(a"<W 领导讲话总是第一部分、第一点、第二点、第三点、第二部分、第一点…
<p\6AnkMr 如此罗嗦。可毕竟还是条理清楚。考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否结构清楚,条理自然。破解方法很简单,只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了。
zOqn<Y@ 1)first, second, third, last(不推荐,原因:俗)
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Y))u&*RuT0 3)the first, the second, the third, the last(不推荐,原因:俗)
lq> +~zX{ 4)in the first place, in the second place, in the third place,
-sjd&)~S[ lastly(不推荐,原因:俗)
'iGzkf}j 5)to begin with, then, furthermore, finally(强烈推荐)
hDcEGU_ 6)to start with, next, in addition, finally(强烈推荐)
fD07VBS yl 7)first and foremost, besides, last but not least(强烈推荐)
_`_%Y(Xat 8)most important of all, moreover, finally
G-He" 4& $ 9)on the one hand, on the other hand(适用于两点的情况)
<X7FMNr[ 10)for one thing, for another thing(适用于两点的情况)
Sk:ws&D1u 建议:不仅仅在写作中注意,平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚!
`KK>~T_$J 四、 短语优先原则
E !a|Xp 写作时,尤其是在考试时,如果使用短语,有两个好处:其一、用短语会使文章增加亮点,如果老师们看到你的文章太简单,看不到一个自己不认识的短语,必然会看你低一等。相反,如果发现亮点—精彩的短语,那么你的文章定会得高分了。其二、关键时刻思维短路,只有凑字数,怎么办?用短语是一个办法!比如:
www.freekaobo.com _jNj-)RB_ I cannot bear it.
+AHUp) 可以用短语表达:I cannot put up with it.
}*ZHgf]~# I want it.
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可以用短语表达:I am looking forward to it.
:L1dyVA{ 这样字数明显增加,表达也更准确。
q&Gz ] 五、 多实少虚原则
&p}$J)q 原因很简单,写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西,不要空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用实词,少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。比如我们说一个很好的时候,不应该之说nice这样空洞的词,应该使用一些诸如generous,
Xy@7y[s] humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital 之类的形象词。再比如:
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j8fpj {hp 但是小偷走出房间应该说:slip out of the room
E/09hD Q *****走出房间应该说:sail out of the room
e?Ho a$k 小孩走出房间应该说:dance out of the room
_`I"0.B] 老人走出房间应该说:stagger out of the room
B7]C]=${m 所以多用实词,少用虚词,文章将会大放异彩!
e89Xb;;w 六、 多变句式原则
8S<@"v 1)加法(串联)
&CIVL#];e 都希望写下很长的句子,像个老外似的,可就是怕写错,怎么办,最保险的写长句的方法就是这些,可以在任何句子之间加and,
g*F '[Z." 但最好是前后的句子又先后关系或者并列关系。比如说:
a9T@$: I enjor music and he is fond of playing guitar.
Vg>( Y, 如果是二者并列的,我们可以用一个超级句式:
]miy/V }5 Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm.
[ e8x&{L-_ 其它的短语可以用:
Q\WC+,_% besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover
KMV=%o 2)转折(拐弯抹角)
n f.wCtf]. 批评某人缺点的时候,我们总习惯先拐弯抹角说说他的优点,然后转入正题,再说缺点,这种方式虽然阴险了点,可毕竟还比较容易让人接受。所以呢,我们说话的时候,只要在要点之前先来点废话,注意二者之间用个专这次就够了。
)6w}<W*1E The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition.
VL/|tL>E^ The coat was thin, but it was warm.
"F}'~HWZp 更多的短语:
H{AMZyV0/d despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite,
k $fGom notwithstanding
.!6>oL/iF 3)因果(so, so, so)
Kv rX{F= 昨天在街上我看到了一个女孩,然后我主动搭讪,然后我们去咖啡厅,然后我们认识了,然后我们成为了朋友…可见,讲故事的时候我们总要追求先后顺序,先什么,后什么,所以然后这个词就变得很常见了。其实这个词表示的是先后或因果关系!
hxf'5uc The snow began to fall, so we went home.
Kv@eI$t5 更多短语:
] )"u+ then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result, for this
)OLq_':^@ reason, so that
eVR5Xar 4)失衡句(头重脚轻,或者头轻脚重)
0}:2Q# 有些人脑袋大,身体小,或者有些人脑袋小,身体大,虽然我们不希望长成这个样子,可如果真的是这样了,也就必然会吸引别人的注意力。文章中如果出现这样的句子,就更会让考官看到你的句子与众不同。其实就是主语从句,表语从句,宾语从句的变形。
r,]#b[:.s| 举例:This is what I can do.
WnHUE Whether he can go with us or not is not sure.
`s]4AKBO 同样主语、宾语、表语可以改成如下的复杂成分:
9~0^PzTA When to go, Why he goes away…
j6,ZEm 5)附加(多此一举)
@<@SMK) 如果有了老婆,总会遇到这样的情况,当你再讲某个人的时候,她会插一句说,我昨天见过他;或者说,就是某某某,如果把老婆的话插入到我们的话里面,那就是定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语。
;@nFVy>U The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.
~aXqU#8 I don’t enjoy that book you are reading.
jDRe)bo4 Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going.
$2MAZGJV 其实很简单,同位语--要解释的东西删除后不影响整个句子的构成;定语从句—借用之前的关键词并且用其重新组成一个句子插入其中,但是whom or
`Ci4YDaz;k that 关键词必须要紧跟在先行词之前。
==H$zmK 6)排比(排山倒海句)
1mSaS4!"B 文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此,如果非要让你的文章更加精彩的话,那么我希望你引用一个个的排比句,一个个得对偶句,一个个的不定式,一个个地词,一个个的短语,如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势!
J RPSvP\ Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or simple,
o:Zd1"Z there is plenty in London for you.
7dX/bzUVz8 Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil,
f&hwi:t coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean tides.
?W0(|9 We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, to realize
FZH\Q~IUV our potentials and to pay for our life. (气势恢宏)
r,N[ )@ 要想写出如此气势恢宏的句子非用排比不可!
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S*"u/b; 既然十挑战极限,必然是比较难的,但是并非不可攀!
Q0{z).&\(e 原理:在学生的文章中,很少发现诸如独立主格的句子,其实也很简单,只要花上5分钟的时间看看就可以领会,它就是分词的一种特殊形式,分词要求主语一致,而独立主格则不然。比如:
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S*)o)34U 如果您可一些出这样的句子,不得高分才怪!
n~Szf 写作绝招
=f:(r'm?r. 文章主体段落三大杀手锏:
=!ac7i\F 一、举实例
{*/dD` 思维短路,举实例!提出一个观点,举实例!提出一个方案,举实例!而且者也是我们揭示一个观点最好的方式,任何情况下,只要我们无法继续文章,不管三七二十一,尽管举例子!
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j1$<] f possible stimulative factor in making ads, such as sound, light, colours,
idJh^YD cartoon films and human performance. For instance, to advertise a certain
IX?ZbtdX$` food, advertisers will ask an actor or actress to sit at a table and
sIm#_+Y devour the seemingly delicious food while they fime him or her.
K@@9:T$ 更多句型:
$`vkw(;t)1 To take … as an example, One example is…, Another example is…, for example
o&^NwgRCF 二、做比较
M^H90GN)X 方法:写完一个要点,比较与之相似的;又写完一个要点,再比较与之相反的;
00M`%c/ 世界上没有同样的指纹,没有相同的树叶,文章亦同,只有通过比较,你才会发现二者的相同点(through comparison)和不同点(through
8mgQu]> contrast)。下面是一些短语:
*`KrVu 6s 相似的比较:
}f}IA\8] in comparison, likewise, similarly, in the same manner
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a 相反的比较:
g8yN%)[ on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead, nevertheless, in
M\yHUS6N contrast, on the contrary, compared with …, …
k!doIMj 三、换言之
)!C7bTv 4 没话说了,可以换一句话再说,让你的文章在多一些字,或者文邹邹地说,是让读者更充分的理解你的观点。
O|UxFnB} 实际就是重复重复再重复!下面的句子实际上就三个字 I love you!
p`GWhI? I am enthusiastic about you. That is to say, I love you.
ZPF7m{S I am wild about you. In other words, I have fallen in love with you.
/{DaPqRa 或者上面我们举过的例子:
T_~KxQ I cannot bear it.
Za!w#j%h 可以用短语表达:I cannot put up with it.
Z}[xQ5 因此可以这样说:I cannot bear it. That is to say, I cannot put up with it or I am
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/Ri,>}n 更多短语:
|yAK@Hl' in more difficult language, in simpler words, put it more simply