医学考博英语破题技巧－－－写作部分

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英语作文的总体评分原则（内容与语言两个方面） ='||BxB  
记分标准如下： 5i-;bLm  
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13-15（20－17）分：内容切题，包括题中所列三方面的内容：清楚表达其内涵，文字连贯；句式有变化，句子结构和用词正确。文章长度符合要求。 Cspm\F  
　　10-12（16－13）分：内容切题，包括题中所列三方面的内容；比较清楚地表达其内涵；文字基本连贯；句式有一定变化，句子结构和用词无重大错误。文章长度符合要求。 ITY!=>S-  
　　7-9（12－9）分：内容切题，基本包括题中所列三方面的内容：基本清楚地表达其内涵；句子结构和用词有少量错误。文章长度符合要求。 ?-&D'  
　　4-6（8－5）分：内容基本功题，基本包含题中所列三方面的内容；语句可以理解，但有较多的句子结构和词错误。文章长度基本符合要求。 yacGJz^f=  
　　1-3（ 4－1）分：基本按要求写作，但只有少数句子可理解。 v?=VZ~`O(  
　　0分：文不切题，语句混乱、无法理解。 i1\ /\^  
因此，一篇好的作文应基本达到： T@.m ^|~  
　　1） 有较好的写作基础，文章流畅，遣词造句不当，文章结构完整，内容符合要求； V>j`   
　　2） 语法基本正确； ewPdhCK  
　　3） 句法基本准确，句子与句子段落之间过渡连贯； n\al}KG  
　　4） 有一定词汇量，字数符合要求； 9s6lt#?b  
　　5） 说理清楚，内容充实。 *(.^$Iq4  
6） 就小作文而言，还要做到格式与语域正确。 eZkz 1j~  
7） 书写干净整洁。如果书写较差，以致影响交际，分数会降低一个档次。 i4Cb&h^  
考生出现的问题 5kZ yiC*  
不会审题 ^`5Yxpz  
用汉语思维，逐字翻译。 mzR @P$:36  
用词搭配不当。 PY<V  
词汇量小，拼写困难。 z`7C)p:  
句子逻辑关系混乱。 K1nwv"  
Our English class often told stories. `3s-\>  
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不会应用关联词转承上下句子和段落。 WX"M_=lc-@  
People learn English to use it , Some learn it to study or work abroad . Others learn it to read books and magazines in English or have something to do with English-speaking foreigners.采用适当关联词，改进为:people learn English for practical purposes :some learn it to study or work abroad, while others learn it to read or communicate in English. ~H~4 fp b  
语法错误。 f#MN-1[67  
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　　ii. 被动与主动语态的误用，例如：interesting和interested; speaking和spoken 等； CU&,Kq@  
　　iii. 词类混淆，将动词或形容词误作名词用，将名词和动词误作形容词用等；例如：benefit和beneficial; difficult和difficulty; pleasure和pleased等。 \./2Qc,  
　　iv. 混淆可数名词与不可数名词，例如:help, practice 等。 X;RI7{fW%X  
　　v. 冠词、情态动词、介词、代词等方面的错误，例如：a English book, should did, must done等。 ] 6B!eB !  
有选择性的记住一些套话或短语：段落连接 _/\H3  
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