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英语作文的总体评分原则(内容与语言两个方面)
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记分标准如下: V+'zuX
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13-15(20-17)分:内容切题,包括题中所列三方面的内容:清楚表达其内涵,文字连贯;句式有变化,句子结构和用词正确。文章长度符合要求。 rIv#YqT
10-12(16-13)分:内容切题,包括题中所列三方面的内容;比较清楚地表达其内涵;文字基本连贯;句式有一定变化,句子结构和用词无重大错误。文章长度符合要求。 9Z2a
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7-9(12-9)分:内容切题,基本包括题中所列三方面的内容:基本清楚地表达其内涵;句子结构和用词有少量错误。文章长度符合要求。 4tiCxf)
4-6(8-5)分:内容基本功题,基本包含题中所列三方面的内容;语句可以理解,但有较多的句子结构和词错误。文章长度基本符合要求。 !9C]Fs*`?
1-3( 4-1)分:基本按要求写作,但只有少数句子可理解。 v{SYz<(
0分:文不切题,语句混乱、无法理解。 U z)G Y
因此,一篇好的作文应基本达到: !M6Km(>
1) 有较好的写作基础,文章流畅,遣词造句不当,文章结构完整,内容符合要求; @MH/efW.
2) 语法基本正确; tpV61L
3) 句法基本准确,句子与句子段落之间过渡连贯; 0oyZlv*
4) 有一定词汇量,字数符合要求; oe_,q&e
5) 说理清楚,内容充实。 :$^sI"hO
6) 就小作文而言,还要做到格式与语域正确。 yrMakT =
7) 书写干净整洁。如果书写较差,以致影响交际,分数会降低一个档次。 lt l(SIi
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用汉语思维,逐字翻译。 s\
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词汇量小,拼写困难。 w`Z@|A
句子逻辑关系混乱。 X%M*d%n b
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不会应用关联词转承上下句子和段落。 aQfrDM<*XS
People learn English to use it , Some learn it to study or work abroad . Others learn it to read books and magazines in English or have something to do with English-speaking foreigners.采用适当关联词,改进为:people learn English for practical purposes :some learn it to study or work abroad, while others learn it to read or communicate in English. ~F]If \b
语法错误。 '"Dgov$q
i. 分不清及物与不及物动词,例如:rise和raise; hear和listen等 <+7-^o_
ii. 被动与主动语态的误用,例如:interesting和interested; speaking和spoken 等; OY#=s!]
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iii. 词类混淆,将动词或形容词误作名词用,将名词和动词误作形容词用等;例如:benefit和beneficial; difficult和difficulty; pleasure和pleased等。 ^sVB:?
iv. 混淆可数名词与不可数名词,例如:help, practice 等。 [hXU$Y>"0
v. 冠词、情态动词、介词、代词等方面的错误,例如:a English book, should did, must done等。 Kd,7x'h`E
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