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英语作文的总体评分原则(内容与语言两个方面) /quc}"__
记分标准如下: O6a<`]F
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13-15(20-17)分:内容切题,包括题中所列三方面的内容:清楚表达其内涵,文字连贯;句式有变化,句子结构和用词正确。文章长度符合要求。
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10-12(16-13)分:内容切题,包括题中所列三方面的内容;比较清楚地表达其内涵;文字基本连贯;句式有一定变化,句子结构和用词无重大错误。文章长度符合要求。 I%X6T@P
7-9(12-9)分:内容切题,基本包括题中所列三方面的内容:基本清楚地表达其内涵;句子结构和用词有少量错误。文章长度符合要求。 sn$9Shgh
4-6(8-5)分:内容基本功题,基本包含题中所列三方面的内容;语句可以理解,但有较多的句子结构和词错误。文章长度基本符合要求。 sRL`dEl4l
1-3( 4-1)分:基本按要求写作,但只有少数句子可理解。 9gEwh<
0分:文不切题,语句混乱、无法理解。 a
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因此,一篇好的作文应基本达到: g:D>.lKd
1) 有较好的写作基础,文章流畅,遣词造句不当,文章结构完整,内容符合要求; e~[/i\
2) 语法基本正确; 1;r|g)VM
3) 句法基本准确,句子与句子段落之间过渡连贯; u#;7<.D
4) 有一定词汇量,字数符合要求; _j/<{vS y
5) 说理清楚,内容充实。 #Z`q+@@]A
6) 就小作文而言,还要做到格式与语域正确。 G"U9E5O
7) 书写干净整洁。如果书写较差,以致影响交际,分数会降低一个档次。 K'Tm_"[u
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用汉语思维,逐字翻译。 QP^Cx=
用词搭配不当。 zH4D 8@[7O
词汇量小,拼写困难。 6?mibvK
句子逻辑关系混乱。 B^Nf #XN(
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不会应用关联词转承上下句子和段落。 ^ft>@=K(|
People learn English to use it , Some learn it to study or work abroad . Others learn it to read books and magazines in English or have something to do with English-speaking foreigners.采用适当关联词,改进为:people learn English for practical purposes :some learn it to study or work abroad, while others learn it to read or communicate in English. 5uNJx5g
语法错误。 S)k*?dQ##R
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ii. 被动与主动语态的误用,例如:interesting和interested; speaking和spoken 等;
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iii. 词类混淆,将动词或形容词误作名词用,将名词和动词误作形容词用等;例如:benefit和beneficial; difficult和difficulty; pleasure和pleased等。 ?WUA`/[z
iv. 混淆可数名词与不可数名词,例如:help, practice 等。 _ Yx]_Y9I
v. 冠词、情态动词、介词、代词等方面的错误,例如:a English book, should did, must done等。 -p&" y3<p
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