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一、长短句原则 TXlxnB
工作还得一张一驰呢,老让读者读长句,累死人!写一个短小精辟的句子,相反,却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末,也可以揭示主题: 8}0O @ wq
As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar. 4LBMhLy
如此可见,长短句结合,抑扬顿挫,岂不爽哉?牢记! oU.LYz_
强烈建议:在文章第一段(开头)用一长一短,且先长后短;在文章主体部分,要先用一个短句解释主要意思,然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式,定会让主体部分妙笔生辉!文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。 [|\JIr=of5
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二、主题句原则 *CH lg1
国有其君,家有其主,文章也要有其主。否则会给人造成“群龙无首”之感!相信各位读过一些破烂文学,故意把主体隐藏在文章之内,结果造成我们稀里糊涂!不知所云!所以奉劝各位一定要写一个主题句,放在文章的开头(保险型)或者结尾,让读者一目了然,必会平安无事! >|[74#}7
特别提示:隐藏主体句可是要冒险的! Z ?{;|Z5
To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam(主题句). Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly. p6yC1\U!o
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三、一二三原则 )&j4F)
领导讲话总是第一部分、第一点、第二点、第三点、第二部分、第一点… 如此罗嗦。可毕竟还是条理清楚。考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否结构清楚,条理自然。破解方法很简单,只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了。 5$e|
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1)first, second, third, last(不推荐,原因:俗) $Qv+*%c
2)firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally(不推荐,原因:俗) [kyF |3k~
3)the first, the second, the third, the last(不推荐,原因:俗) f3+@u2Pv
4)in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly(不推荐,原因:俗) )k.[Ve
5)to begin with, then, furthermore, finally(强烈推荐) GB(o)I#h
6)to start with, next, in addition, finally(强烈推荐) wPn#>\/L
7)first and foremost, besides, last but not least(强烈推荐) /hef3DV5I
8)most important of all, moreover, finally NY
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9)on the one hand, on the other hand(适用于两点的情况) T
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10)for one thing, for another thing(适用于两点的情况) _91g=pM
建议:不仅仅在写作中注意,平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚! T<|B1jA
四、短语优先原则 [lqwzW{(UN
写作时,尤其是在考试时,如果使用短语,有两个好处:其一、用短语会使文章增加亮点,如果老师们看到你的文章太简单,看不到一个自己不认识的短语,必然会看你低一等。相反,如果发现亮点—精彩的短语,那么你的文章定会得高分了。其二、关键时刻思维短路,只有凑字数,怎么办?用短语是一个办法!比如: ,OX(z=i_
I cannot bear it. gp:,DC?(
可以用短语表达:I cannot put up with it. ?q(7avS9
I want it. #ra~Yb-F
可以用短语表达:I am looking forward to it. vs/.'yD/C
这样字数明显增加,表达也更准确。 -v4kW0G
五、多实少虚原则 GNzkVy:u
原因很简单,写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西,不要空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用实词,少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。比如我们说一个很好的时候,不应该之说nice这样空洞的词,应该使用一些诸如generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital 之类的形象词。 3[E3]]OVa
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走出房间,general的词是:walk out of the room 9Xt5{\PJ
但是小偷走出房间应该说:slip out of the room ')w:`8Tl
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小孩走出房间应该说:dance out of the room \f6SA{vR|
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所以多用实词,少用虚词,文章将会大放异彩! 66*/"dBwm
六、多变句式原则 PpD ?TAlA
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都希望写下很长的句子,像个老外似的,可就是怕写错,怎么办,最保险的写长句的方法就是这些,可以在任何句子之间加and, 但最好是前后的句子又先后关系或者并列关系。比如说: %|$h<~
I enjor music and he is fond of playing guitar. n0_q-8r
如果是二者并列的,我们可以用一个超级句式: (+d7cln
Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm. ;Bk?,
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2)转折(拐弯抹角)
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批评某人缺点的时候,我们总习惯先拐弯抹角说说他的优点,然后转入正题,再说缺点,这种方式虽然阴险了点,可毕竟还比较容易让人接受。所以呢,我们说话的时候,只要在要点之前先来点废话,注意二者之间用个专这次就够了。 DT`TA#O
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The coat was thin, but it was warm. ~Rd,jfx
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despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, notwithstanding S)T]>Ash
3)因果(so, so, so) InnjZ>$
昨天在街上我看到了一个女孩,然后我主动搭讪,然后我们去咖啡厅,然后我们认识了,然后我们成为了朋友…可见,讲故事的时候我们总要追求先后顺序,先什么,后什么,所以然后这个词就变得很常见了。其实这个词表示的是先后或因果关系! YqhZndktX
The snow began to fall, so we went home. I8
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then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result, for this reason, so that !s
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4)失衡句(头重脚轻,或者头轻脚重) hK F*{,
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有些人脑袋大,身体小,或者有些人脑袋小,身体大,虽然我们不希望长成这个样子,可如果真的是这样了,也就必然会吸引别人的注意力。文章中如果出现这样的句子,就更会让考官看到你的句子与众不同。其实就是主语从句,表语从句,宾语从句的变形。 .{[+d3+,
举例:This is what I can do. P;_}nbB
Whether he can go with us or not is not sure. FCL7Tn
同样主语、宾语、表语可以改成如下的复杂成分: [=k$Q
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5)附加(多此一举) +XV7W=
如果有了老婆,总会遇到这样的情况,当你再讲某个人的时候,她会插一句说,我昨天见过他;或者说,就是某某某,如果把老婆的话插入到我们的话里面,那就是定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语。
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The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine. LpCJfQ
I don’t enjoy that book you are reading. N 4Kj)E@
Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going. g=*'kj7c3
其实很简单,同位语--要解释的东西删除后不影响整个句子的构成;定语从句—借用之前的关键词并且用其重新组成一个句子插入其中,但是whom or that 关键词必须要紧跟在先行词之前。 je_:hDr
6)排比(排山倒海句) jSi\/(E
文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此,如果非要让你的文章更加精彩的话,那么我希望你引用一个个的排比句,一个个得对偶句,一个个的不定式,一个个地词,一个个的短语,如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势! S7i,oP7
Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or simple, there is plenty in London for you. z~8`xn,
Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean tides. gY!+x=cx0
We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, to realize our potentials and to pay for our life. (气势恢宏) i7rO5<
要想写出如此气势恢宏的句子非用排比不可! \
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七、挑战极限原则 i'bviD
既然十挑战极限,必然是比较难的,但是并非不可攀! `Hlv*" w$
原理:在学生的文章中,很少发现诸如独立主格的句子,其实也很简单,只要花上5分钟的时间看看就可以领会,它就是分词的一种特殊形式,分词要求主语一致,而独立主格则不然。比如: 6:\0=k5
The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills. a -[:RJW
Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China. -/^a2_d[
如果您可一些出这样的句子,不得高分才怪! >)`yG'[
文章主体段落三大杀手锏: 6gr?#D -F
一、举实例 RaT.%:CRm
思维短路,举实例!提出一个观点,举实例!提出一个方案,举实例!而且者也是我们揭示一个观点最好的方式,任何情况下,只要我们无法继续文章,不管三七二十一,尽管举例子! O@9<7@h+Nl
In order to attract more customers, advertisers have adopted every possible stimulative factor in making ads, such as sound, light, colours, cartoon films and human performance. C!,|Wi2&
For instance, to advertise a certain food, advertisers will ask an actor or actress to sit at a table and devour the seemingly delicious food while they fime him or her. L0^rw|Z%'
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方法:写完一个要点,比较与之相似的;又写完一个要点,再比较与之相反的; GkU]>8E'"
世界上没有同样的指纹,没有相同的树叶,文章亦同,只有通过比较,你才会发现二者的相同点(through comparison)和不同点(through contrast)。下面是一些短语: QmiS/`AAv
相似的比较: NzBX2
in comparison, likewise, similarly, in the same manner mMt~4(5
相反的比较: PR+L6DT_
on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead, nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with …, … s[dq-pc"
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没话说了,可以换一句话再说,让你的文章在多一些字,或者文邹邹地说,是让读者更充分的理解你的观点。 7 'B9z/
实际就是重复重复再重复!下面的句子实际上就三个字 I love you! 1EmZ/@k/Y
I am enthusiastic about you. That is to say, I love you. Jf</83RZ
I am wild about you. In other words, I have fallen in love with you. w~a_FGYX
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可以用短语表达:I cannot put up with it. x2M{=MExE.
因此可以这样说:I cannot bear it. That is to say, I cannot put up with it or I am fed up with it. uP.[,V0@^
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in more difficult language, in simpler words, put it more simply