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Eal*){"<,? L)X[$: 1. 开头万能公式一:名人名言
5F$~ZDu 有人问了,“我没有记住名言,怎么办?尤其是英语名言?”,很好办:编!
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vIcHDs 原理:我们看到的东西很多都是创造出来的,包括我们欣赏的文章也是,所以尽管编,但是一定要听起来很有道理呦!而且没准将来我们就是名人呢!对吧?
/Jf}~}JP 经典句型:
8 DPn5E#M1 A proberb says, “ You are only young once.” (适用于已记住的名言)
+'{d^-( ( It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever.
c0QKx= (适用于自编名言)
q!AcMd\ 更多经典句型:
hw2Sb,bY As everyone knows, No one can deny that…
:%>TM/E N 2. 开头万能公式二:数字统计
+*Zjo&pc 原理:要想更有说服力,就应该用实际的数字来说明。
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2:G/Oj h&] According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college
/~3kkM(Ty students wanted to further their study after their graduation.
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Q4Fzj0' 看起来这个数字文邹邹的,其实都是编造出来的,下面随便几个题目我们都可以这样编造:
mr>dZ) Honesty
vP'#x 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,大学生向老师请假的理由当中78%都是假的。
Y3O/`-9i Travel by Bike
Ud)2Mq1#M 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,85%的人在近距离旅行的时候首选的交通工具是自行车。
5Kl;(0B9 Youth
DLPg0>;jl 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,在某个大学,学生的课余时间的70%都是在休闲娱乐。
w+gPU1|(r Five-day Work Week Better than Six-day Work?
2]cU:j6G 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,98%的人同意每周五天工作日。
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说完了,毕竟要归纳一番,相信各位都有这样的经历,领导长篇大论,到最后终于冒出个“总而言之”之类的话,我们马上停止开小差,等待领导说结束语。也就是说,开头很好,也必然要有一个精彩的结尾,让读者眼前一亮,这样,你就可以拿高分了!比如下面的例子:
`5SQ4 Obviously(此为过渡短语), we can draw the conclusion that good
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t'[`"pp= 如果读者很难“显而见之”,但说无妨,就当读者的眼光太浅罢了!
aSIoq}c( 更多过渡短语:
cH6J:0>W to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus
H3+P;2{ 更多句型:
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kvQ3E0 Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find that…
K{0 gkORF 2. 结尾万能公式二:如此建议
*BKIA 如果说“如此结论”是结尾最没用的废话,那么“如此建议”应该是最有价值的废话了,因为这里虽然也是废话,但是却用了一个很经典的虚拟语气的句型。拽!
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hVh,\d&2t 更多句型:
as"@E>a Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.
mXI'=Vo!S Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be
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hbm#H7Y 写作的“七项基本原则”:一、长 短 句原则
zT ")!Df>' PV-B<Y 工作还得一张一驰呢,老让读者读长句,累死人!写一个短小精辟的句子,相反,却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末,也可以揭示主题:
w[#*f?at~ As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is
M:oZk&cs to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to
4xgfm.9I^ satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite
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o_&Qb^W 如此可见,长短句结合,抑扬顿挫,岂不爽哉?牢记!
,;n[_f 强烈建议:在文章第一段(开头)用一长一短,且先长后短;在文章主体部分,要先用一个短句解释主要意思,然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式,定会让主体部分妙笔生辉!文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。二、
V5p->X2# 主 题 句原则
vJe c+a 国有其君,家有其主,文章也要有其主。否则会给人造成“群龙无首”之感!相信各位读过一些破烂文学,故意把主体隐藏在文章之内,结果造成我们稀里糊涂!不知所云!所以奉劝各位一定要写一个主题句,放在文章的开头(保险型)或者结尾,让读者一目了然,必会平安无事!
Y)7\h:LIg 特别提示:隐藏主体句可是要冒险的!
Nb)Mh To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully
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bSa]={}L( you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.三、
y 7z)lBy\ 一 二 三原则
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1z_1Hl 1)first, second, third, last(不推荐,原因:俗)
(#+81 Dr 2)firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally(不推荐,原因:俗)
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_O&P!hI 4)in the first place, in the second place, in the third place,
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Uurpho_~ 5)to begin with, then, furthermore, finally(强烈推荐)
cCcJOhk|d 6)to start with, next, in addition, finally(强烈推荐)
@{ L|&Mk! 7)first and foremost, besides, last but not least(强烈推荐)
Nzb=h/; 8)most important of all, moreover, finally
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"S&zN 9)on the one hand, on the other hand(适用于两点的情况)
?O0,)hro 10)for one thing, for another thing(适用于两点的情况)
\mqrDaB 建议:不仅仅在写作中注意,平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚!四、短语优先原则
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写作时,尤其是在考试时,如果使用短语,有两个好处:其一、用短语会使文章增加亮点,如果老师们看到你的文章太简单,看不到一个自己不认识的短语,必然会看你低一等。相反,如果发现亮点—精彩的短语,那么你的文章定会得高分了。其二、关键时刻思维短路,只有凑字数,怎么办?用短语是一个办法!比如:
6t gq.XL^n I cannot bear it.
cL4Xh|NBp 可以用短语表达:I cannot put up with it.
df/7u}>9 I want it.
<3x:nH @ 可以用短语表达:I am looking forward to it.
dJ~Occ 1~r 这样字数明显增加,表达也更准确。五、多实少虚原则
uCgJF@ 原因很简单,写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西,不要空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用实词,少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。比如我们说一个很好的时候,不应该之说nice这样空洞的词,应该使用一些诸如generous,
Q1!+wC humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital
f]2;s#cu 之类的形象词。再比如:
WA5.qw 走出房间,general的词是:walk out of the room
Ym2Ac>I4 但是小偷走出房间应该说:slip out of the room
\)W Z D *****走出房间应该说:sail out of the room
67U6`9d 小孩走出房间应该说:dance out of the room
3!8 u 老人走出房间应该说:stagger out of the room
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}/jWa|)f 1)加法(串联)
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BY@l:y4 其它的短语可以用:
W*2P+H% besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover
EIF 2)转折(拐弯抹角)
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k&npC8oA The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition.
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s%G%s,d 更多的短语:
wJu9. despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of,
c7nbHJi despite, notwithstanding
>[Tt'.S!? 3)因果(so, so, so)
wM}AWmH 昨天在街上我看到了一个女孩,然后我主动搭讪,然后我们去咖啡厅,然后我们认识了,然后我们成为了朋友…可见,讲故事的时候我们总要追求先后顺序,先什么,后什么,所以然后这个词就变得很常见了。其实这个词表示的是先后或因果关系!
li0)<("/ The snow began to fall, so we went home.
Ql"~ z^L 更多短语:
H(Y 1%@ then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a
E@-5L9eJ\ result, for this reason, so that
#q5tG\gnM 4)失衡句(头重脚轻,或者头轻脚重)
Uy@:-NC)kn 有些人脑袋大,身体小,或者有些人脑袋小,身体大,虽然我们不希望长成这个样子,可如果真的是这样了,也就必然会吸引别人的注意力。文章中如果出现这样的句子,就更会让考官看到你的句子与众不同。其实就是主语从句,表语从句,宾语从句的变形。
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&AVX03P 同样主语、宾语、表语可以改成如下的复杂成分:
Iu^I?c[ When to go, Why he goes away…
h<qi[d4X 5)附加(多此一举)
5Ha(i [d 如果有了老婆,总会遇到这样的情况,当你再讲某个人的时候,她会插一句说,我昨天见过他;或者说,就是某某某,如果把老婆的话插入到我们的话里面,那就是定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语。
iDdR-T| The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.
kIRjoKf <F I don’t enjoy that book you are reading.
+W8kMuM! Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going.
`/<f([w 其实很简单,同位语--要解释的东西删除后不影响整个句子的构成;定语从句—借用之前的关键词并且用其重新组成一个句子插入其中,但是whom
@9l$jZ~x or that 关键词必须要紧跟在先行词之前。
R7c42L\QA 6)排比(排山倒海句)
;@O8y\@ 文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此,如果非要让你的文章更加精彩的话,那么我希望你引用一个个的排比句,一个个得对偶句,一个个的不定式,一个个地词,一个个的短语,如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势!
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[}4\CWM as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean
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TCi0]Y~a 要想写出如此气势恢宏的句子非用排比不可!七、挑战极限原则
Q8_5g$X\ 既然十挑战极限,必然是比较难的,但是并非不可攀!
#A:^XAU1Z@ 原理:在学生的文章中,很少发现诸如独立主格的句子,其实也很简单,只要花上5分钟的时间看看就可以领会,它就是分词的一种特殊形式,分词要求主语一致,而独立主格则不然。比如:
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^;$9>yi1 如果您可一些出这样的句子,不得高分才怪!
^ '_Fd 文章主体段落三大杀手锏:一、举实例
X>Z83qV5d! [a.(0YLr'w 思维短路,举实例!提出一个观点,举实例!提出一个方案,举实例!而且者也是我们揭示一个观点最好的方式,任何情况下,只要我们无法继续文章,不管三七二十一,尽管举例子!
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B)dd6R>8 every possible stimulative factor in making ads, such as
rLbFaLeQ sound, light, colours, cartoon films and human performance.
ES#q/yab5 For instance, to advertise a certain food, advertisers will
Y 2^y73&k ask an actor or actress to sit at a table and devour the
(~(FQ:L%U seemingly delicious food while they fime him or her.
89W8cJ$yW 更多句型:
iphdJZ/f To take … as an example, One example is…, Another example is…,
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/q!_f!<q4x 方法:写完一个要点,比较与之相似的;又写完一个要点,再比较与之相反的;
7e{w,.ny! 世界上没有同样的指纹,没有相同的树叶,文章亦同,只有通过比较,你才会发现二者的相同点(through
http://www.freekaobo.com/post.php?fid=67 r)<n)eXeD comparison)和不同点(through contrast)。下面是一些短语:
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Iapzh y2l in comparison, likewise, similarly, in the same manner
3 >^B%qg6 相反的比较:
$:?=A5ttuo on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead,
(e<p^TJ] nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with …,
W61:$y}8 …三、换言之
L)Da1<O 没话说了,可以换一句话再说,让你的文章在多一些字,或者文邹邹地说,是让读者更充分的理解你的观点。
jQ(%LYX$ 实际就是重复重复再重复!下面的句子实际上就三个字 I love you!
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