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K9 1. 开头万能公式一:名人名言
#nf%ojh 有人问了,“我没有记住名言,怎么办?尤其是英语名言?”,很好办:编!
,ORG"]_F 原理:我们看到的东西很多都是创造出来的,包括我们欣赏的文章也是,所以尽管编,但是一定要听起来很有道理呦!而且没准将来我们就是名人呢!对吧?
ND55`KT4 经典句型:
N4` 9TN7 A proberb says, “ You are only young once.” (适用于已记住的名言)
7ru9dg1? It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever.
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[>M*_1F 2. 开头万能公式二:数字统计
WP%{{zR$ 原理:要想更有说服力,就应该用实际的数字来说明。
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Z*vpQBbu 看起来这个数字文邹邹的,其实都是编造出来的,下面随便几个题目我们都可以这样编造:
32bkouq Honesty
gM;) 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,大学生向老师请假的理由当中78%都是假的。
FG;<`4mY Travel by Bike
bDh:!M 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,85%的人在近距离旅行的时候首选的交通工具是自行车。
Fyh?4!/. Youth
mSw?2ba 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,在某个大学,学生的课余时间的70%都是在休闲娱乐。
HV$9b~( Five-day Work Week Better than Six-day Work?
=UB*xm%! 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,98%的人同意每周五天工作日。
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V$-~%7@>;9 2Pem%HE~P 结尾万能公式:
)4'x7Qg/ 6<qwP?WN 1. 结尾万能公式一:如此结论
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Jq 说完了,毕竟要归纳一番,相信各位都有这样的经历,领导长篇大论,到最后终于冒出个“总而言之”之类的话,我们马上停止开小差,等待领导说结束语。也就是说,开头很好,也必然要有一个精彩的结尾,让读者眼前一亮,这样,你就可以拿高分了!比如下面的例子:
[yYH>~SuwZ Obviously(此为过渡短语), we can draw the conclusion that good
_Ra<|NVQh manners arise from politeness and respect for others.
]8xc?*i8 如果读者很难“显而见之”,但说无妨,就当读者的眼光太浅罢了!
##EB; Y 更多过渡短语:
www.zlbbs.net l}Q"Nb) to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus
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"W &:j:o 2. 结尾万能公式二:如此建议
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如果说“如此结论”是结尾最没用的废话,那么“如此建议”应该是最有价值的废话了,因为这里虽然也是废话,但是却用了一个很经典的虚拟语气的句型。拽!
Z{,GZT Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve
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QQg8+{> Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.
c-4m8Kg?L Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be
V>b2b5QAH, taken.
mQd4#LJ_ 写作的“七项基本原则”:一、 长 短 句原则
]^J+-c ,:#,}w_HyO 工作还得一张一驰呢,老让读者读长句,累死人!写一个短小精辟的句子,相反,却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末,也可以揭示主题:
>lD;0EN As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is
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nS_Ta satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite
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qP~WEcH`[ 如此可见,长短句结合,抑扬顿挫,岂不爽哉?牢记!
K0w<[CO 强烈建议:在文章第一段(开头)用一长一短,且先长后短;在文章主体部分,要先用一个短句解释主要意思,然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式,定会让主体部分妙笔生辉!文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。二、
A6Ghj{~ 主 题 句原则
9R9__w; 国有其君,家有其主,文章也要有其主。否则会给人造成“群龙无首”之感!相信各位读过一些破烂文学,故意把主体隐藏在文章之内,结果造成我们稀里糊涂!不知所云!所以奉劝各位一定要写一个主题句,放在文章的开头(保险型)或者结尾,让读者一目了然,必会平安无事!
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NH7`5mF$ To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully
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r55qmPhg 一 二 三原则
?b||Cr 领导讲话总是第一部分、第一点、第二点、第三点、第二部分、第一点…
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如此罗嗦。可毕竟还是条理清楚。考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否结构清楚,条理自然。破解方法很简单,只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了。
kOw=c Gt 1)first, second, third, last(不推荐,原因:俗)
z{ptm7 2)firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally(不推荐,原因:俗)
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JnfqXbE 4)in the first place, in the second place, in the third place,
QE|`&~sme lastly(不推荐,原因:俗)
aF!E x 5)to begin with, then, furthermore, finally(强烈推荐)
l , ..5 6)to start with, next, in addition, finally(强烈推荐)
{m[s<A( 7)first and foremost, besides, last but not least(强烈推荐)
Yc^%zxub 8)most important of all, moreover, finally
6?N4l ]l 9)on the one hand, on the other hand(适用于两点的情况)
$9K(F~/ 10)for one thing, for another thing(适用于两点的情况)
m`z7fi7u 建议:不仅仅在写作中注意,平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚!四、 短语优先原则
~W<CE_/]k 写作时,尤其是在考试时,如果使用短语,有两个好处:其一、用短语会使文章增加亮点,如果老师们看到你的文章太简单,看不到一个自己不认识的短语,必然会看你低一等。相反,如果发现亮点—精彩的短语,那么你的文章定会得高分了。其二、关键时刻思维短路,只有凑字数,怎么办?用短语是一个办法!比如:
o\Uu?.-< I cannot bear it.
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U~i 可以用短语表达:I cannot put up with it.
;j{7!GeKa I want it.
sYJL-2JX 可以用短语表达:I am looking forward to it.
<47k@Ym 这样字数明显增加,表达也更准确。五、 多实少虚原则
l<(cd, 原因很简单,写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西,不要空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用实词,少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。比如我们说一个很好的时候,不应该之说nice这样空洞的词,应该使用一些诸如generous,
B{C_hy-fw humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital
Zb(E:~h\ 之类的形象词。再比如:
q/NY72tj0 走出房间,general的词是:walk out of the room
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re^Hc(8M *****走出房间应该说:sail out of the room
v?%LQKO 小孩走出房间应该说:dance out of the room
"xe=N 老人走出房间应该说:stagger out of the room
+L0w;w T 所以多用实词,少用虚词,文章将会大放异彩!六、 多变句式原则
>O#grDXb 1)加法(串联)
oKA& An 都希望写下很长的句子,像个老外似的,可就是怕写错,怎么办,最保险的写长句的方法就是这些,可以在任何句子之间加and,
<_Eg?ePW# 但最好是前后的句子又先后关系或者并列关系。比如说:
j?6X1cM q I enjor music and he is fond of playing guitar.
er2cQS7R 如果是二者并列的,我们可以用一个超级句式:
TW7:q83{l Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm.
+pf5\#l? 其它的短语可以用:
#DFV=:|~ besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover
?<U{{C 2)转折(拐弯抹角)
5|I55CTx 批评某人缺点的时候,我们总习惯先拐弯抹角说说他的优点,然后转入正题,再说缺点,这种方式虽然阴险了点,可毕竟还比较容易让人接受。所以呢,我们说话的时候,只要在要点之前先来点废话,注意二者之间用个专这次就够了。
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,qQG;w,m 更多的短语:
Pm+tQ despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of,
kL>d"w despite, notwithstanding
^e Gue 3)因果(so, so, so)
>9H@|[C 昨天在街上我看到了一个女孩,然后我主动搭讪,然后我们去咖啡厅,然后我们认识了,然后我们成为了朋友…可见,讲故事的时候我们总要追求先后顺序,先什么,后什么,所以然后这个词就变得很常见了。其实这个词表示的是先后或因果关系!
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k5`OH8G 4)失衡句(头重脚轻,或者头轻脚重)
(:pq77 有些人脑袋大,身体小,或者有些人脑袋小,身体大,虽然我们不希望长成这个样子,可如果真的是这样了,也就必然会吸引别人的注意力。文章中如果出现这样的句子,就更会让考官看到你的句子与众不同。其实就是主语从句,表语从句,宾语从句的变形。
*\uM.m0$ 举例:This is what I can do.
EW<kI+0D Whether he can go with us or not is not sure.
V\]" }V)" 同样主语、宾语、表语可以改成如下的复杂成分:
$ ((6=39s When to go, Why he goes away…
@}-r&/# 5)附加(多此一举)
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nmU_N:Y The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.
6K`c/) I don’t enjoy that book you are reading.
8~lIe:F- Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going.
N6OMYP1 其实很简单,同位语--要解释的东西删除后不影响整个句子的构成;定语从句—借用之前的关键词并且用其重新组成一个句子插入其中,但是whom
l_tw<`Ep or that 关键词必须要紧跟在先行词之前。
l v&mp0V+ 6)排比(排山倒海句)
}A=y=+4j 文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此,如果非要让你的文章更加精彩的话,那么我希望你引用一个个的排比句,一个个得对偶句,一个个的不定式,一个个地词,一个个的短语,如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势!
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?~"bR% Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such
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u%/fx~t$ 要想写出如此气势恢宏的句子非用排比不可!七、 挑战极限原则
Migd(uw' 既然十挑战极限,必然是比较难的,但是并非不可攀!
RO;Bl:x4 原理:在学生的文章中,很少发现诸如独立主格的句子,其实也很简单,只要花上5分钟的时间看看就可以领会,它就是分词的一种特殊形式,分词要求主语一致,而独立主格则不然。比如:
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Z/x*Y#0@n 文章主体段落三大杀手锏:一、举实例
D(p\0V ?Xdak|?i 思维短路,举实例!提出一个观点,举实例!提出一个方案,举实例!而且者也是我们揭示一个观点最好的方式,任何情况下,只要我们无法继续文章,不管三七二十一,尽管举例子!
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dY?`f<* sound, light, colours, cartoon films and human performance.
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%ms'n To take … as an example, One example is…, Another example is…,
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Pe C7 世界上没有同样的指纹,没有相同的树叶,文章亦同,只有通过比较,你才会发现二者的相同点(through
D7Y)?Z5A; comparison)和不同点(through contrast)。下面是一些短语:
e%8|<g+n6 相似的比较:
Kvsh in comparison, likewise, similarly, in the same manner
eh1Q7~ 相反的比较:
E_KCNn-f on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead,
8Ll[ fJZA nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with …,
ZmOfEg|h\ …三、换言之
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BCe_@ 实际就是重复重复再重复!下面的句子实际上就三个字 I love you!
VG/3xR&y I am enthusiastic about you. That is to say, I love you.
e><5Pr) I am wild about you. In other words, I have fallen in love
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V\(:@0" I cannot bear it.
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qY\f'K}Q* 因此可以这样说:I cannot bear it. That is to say, I cannot put up with
L[5=h it or I am fed up with it.
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