Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Immoral Behavior in Public. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below: o#D.9K(
1.我们经常在公共场合见到各种不道德的行为，叙述你的一次相关经历。 Qh`:<KI
2.这些不文明行为会有哪些影响。 "A[ b
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3.我们应该怎样改善这种现象。 -F1-
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这是一篇议论文，可以根据作文要求列出提纲：第一部分，列举不文明行为并叙述一次相关经历;第二部分，不文明行为的影响，一两个即可;第三部分，提出建议。 %*W<vu>H
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To witness 1immoral behavior in public, one need only visit the Beijing subway. I still remember the first time I took the Beijing subway. It was an early morning. I was in a hurry to go to school. When I was trying to get a ticket, I found a lot of people waiting in front of me, but nobody was in the line. G>z,#Xt
1Immoral behaviors in public 2initiate a series of problems. One of the most serious ones is that it may exert a negative impact on our 3sense of social responsibility. We will keep ignoring other people’s rights and feelings, and in turn, we too will be disrespected some day. Q@QFV~
The reform of1 this phenomenon is certainly not easy. With an eye on practical 2implementation and 3cost effectiveness , I propose that society make it clear in every way that people who fail to respect the ④common good will be seriously punished. Stricter policies for this should be made to correct this phenomenon as soon as possible. )=^w3y
We all expect “A World without Thieves". Everyone 1shares the huge responsibility of 2demonstrating his or her justice at the proper time. Personal responsibility is vital to build a harmonious socialist society. %y<]Yzv.
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作文要求第一点，相关经历 %2l7Hmp4H
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1 immoral behavior in public：直接点题 %0-wpuHc(]
◇第二段思路点评： Hs (D/&6%
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1 immoral behavior in public：重复名词词组，与第一段衔接 |m
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2 initiate：意思是“产生，发动” pa<q ZZ
3sense of social responsibility：意思是“社会责任感” d&(_|xq#
◇第三段思路点评： KMK `F{
如何改善这些现象 2 eP ;[o
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1 this phenomenon：指代前文“immoral behavior in public”，与上文衔接，且避免重复 0$vj!-Mb^j
2implementation：意为“执行，实施” 0GXO&rCG
3cost effectiveness：意为“成本效率” 3f76kl(&
④ common good：意为“公益” *r,b=8|
◇第四段思路点评： 8c xai8
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1share a huge responsibility: 意为“承担重大责任” PX,rWkOce
2demonstrate：意为“展现” =y]$0nh
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Should We still Cherish Chinese Traditional Virtues. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below: NCS!:d:Ry
1. 当今的年轻人越来越强调个性发展; =U-r*sGLN
2. 发展个性是否意味着忽视中国的传统美德; _YHu96H;
3. 你的观点。 u5E]t9~Pq
●审题概述● Q9?t[ir
这是一篇议论文，题目比较大。主要讨论个性发展和传统美德之间的关系。根据提示，可分为三部分：年轻人的个性发展，可以适当举例;个性发展是否意味着忽视传统美德，可以笼统地讲，也可以具体地解释某一种美德;最后提出自己的观点。
