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1.我们经常在公共场合见到各种不道德的行为，叙述你的一次相关经历。 n;dp%SD
2.这些不文明行为会有哪些影响。 ErMA$UkJ
3.我们应该怎样改善这种现象。 8>^O]5Wo`X
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这是一篇议论文，可以根据作文要求列出提纲：第一部分，列举不文明行为并叙述一次相关经历;第二部分，不文明行为的影响，一两个即可;第三部分，提出建议。 QXT *O
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To witness 1immoral behavior in public, one need only visit the Beijing subway. I still remember the first time I took the Beijing subway. It was an early morning. I was in a hurry to go to school. When I was trying to get a ticket, I found a lot of people waiting in front of me, but nobody was in the line. W [W}:@KZ
1Immoral behaviors in public 2initiate a series of problems. One of the most serious ones is that it may exert a negative impact on our 3sense of social responsibility. We will keep ignoring other people’s rights and feelings, and in turn, we too will be disrespected some day.
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The reform of1 this phenomenon is certainly not easy. With an eye on practical 2implementation and 3cost effectiveness , I propose that society make it clear in every way that people who fail to respect the ④common good will be seriously punished. Stricter policies for this should be made to correct this phenomenon as soon as possible. ?To r)>A'
We all expect “A World without Thieves". Everyone 1shares the huge responsibility of 2demonstrating his or her justice at the proper time. Personal responsibility is vital to build a harmonious socialist society. A =k{Rl{LA
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1 immoral behavior in public：重复名词词组，与第一段衔接 FHS6Mk26
2 initiate：意思是“产生，发动” X)|b_ 3Z
3sense of social responsibility：意思是“社会责任感” Q0_UBm^f
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3cost effectiveness：意为“成本效率” c?{&=,u2
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2demonstrate：意为“展现” `2y2Bk
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Should We still Cherish Chinese Traditional Virtues. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below: < 6[XE
1. 当今的年轻人越来越强调个性发展; #]'# \d#i
2. 发展个性是否意味着忽视中国的传统美德; wvum 7K{tI
3. 你的观点。 $UAmUQg)}_
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这是一篇议论文，题目比较大。主要讨论个性发展和传统美德之间的关系。根据提示，可分为三部分：年轻人的个性发展，可以适当举例;个性发展是否意味着忽视传统美德，可以笼统地讲，也可以具体地解释某一种美德;最后提出自己的观点。
