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so much without having to do anything in turn. In addition, __2__ 2cv!85
life is always presenting new things to the child—things aC$-riP,?'
that have lost their interesting for older people because __3__ ~V#MI@]V~
they are too well-known. A child finds pleasure in playing po Lzgd
in the rain, or in the snow.His first visit to the bogw /)1
seaside is a marvelous adventure. But a child has his pains: w=e_@^Fkx
He is not so free to do as he wishes as he thinks old u7PtGN0r%
people do; he is continually being told not to do things, __4__ pF0sXvWGG
or being punished for that he has done wrong. __5__ f3r\X
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comfortable. If he spends most of his time playing about in __7__ Bh` Y ?S
the way that he used to as a child, he will suffer hungry. __8__ 0`WjM2So
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the laws of his parents, he may go to prison. If, therefore, __9__ " a&|{bv
he works hard, keeps out of trouble and has good health, 4lM)ZDg
he can have the great happiness of seeing himself making __10__ : Xe,=M(l~
steady progress in his job and of building up for himself `(- nSQ
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1.what改为whatever。whatever引导让步状语从句，相当于no matter what，意思是“无论什么”，“不管什么”，whatever在从句中作宾语。 Tasmbo^mAF
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2.turn改为return。短语in turn表示“轮流地; 挨个, 依次; 反过来”，而在这里是指孩子对父母的回报。 W?>C$_p C
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3.interesting改为interest。在形容词性物主代词their的后面应跟名词性成分。 .8 GX8[t
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4.第一个do改为 are。与前面的is相对应。 m}-* B1
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5.that改为what。that引导的是定语从句，在本句中应该使用关系代词what，相当于the thing/ things that。 ^@V; `jsll
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6.not改为no。固定搭配的副词短语“no longer” 2iWS k6%R
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7.comfortable改为comfortably。修饰动词live应为副词而不是形容词。 k#g ` n3L
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8.suffer改为go或become或be。或把hungry改为hunger。 sk
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9.therefore改为however。此处的条件状语从句表示转折。 mEZHrr J
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10.making 改为 make。
