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improbable that he will ever again in his life be given * 7 o (
so much without having to do anything in turn. In addition, __2__ wGf SVA-q\
life is always presenting new things to the child—things !8O*)=RA
that have lost their interesting for older people because __3__ l ;SqjkN
they are too well-known. A child finds pleasure in playing <OEu 4,~:
in the rain, or in the snow.His first visit to the %A dE5HI-
seaside is a marvelous adventure. But a child has his pains: | ^i+Srh
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people do; he is continually being told not to do things, __4__ 5[Yzi> o[
or being punished for that he has done wrong. __5__ aD@sb o
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clothes, and his room, but has to work if he wants to live (JHL0Z/
comfortable. If he spends most of his time playing about in __7__ Bp`?inKBOd
the way that he used to as a child, he will suffer hungry. __8__ h$FpH\-
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the laws of his parents, he may go to prison. If, therefore, __9__ #s)Wzv%OX
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1.what改为whatever。whatever引导让步状语从句，相当于no matter what，意思是“无论什么”，“不管什么”，whatever在从句中作宾语。 (7G5y7wI"
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2.turn改为return。短语in turn表示“轮流地; 挨个, 依次; 反过来”，而在这里是指孩子对父母的回报。 Rdd[b?
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4.第一个do改为 are。与前面的is相对应。 G/Nb@pAy[
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5.that改为what。that引导的是定语从句，在本句中应该使用关系代词what，相当于the thing/ things that。 .olDmFQD
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6.not改为no。固定搭配的副词短语“no longer” ^b=9{.
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8.suffer改为go或become或be。或把hungry改为hunger。 YoV^Y&:9<
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9.therefore改为however。此处的条件状语从句表示转折。 TQyi -Dc
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10.making 改为 make。
