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is fed, looked after and loved, what he may do, It is __1__ |v:oLgUdH
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so much without having to do anything in turn. In addition, __2__ e Fh7#~m
life is always presenting new things to the child—things kmUL^vF
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in the rain, or in the snow.His first visit to the #x qiGK
seaside is a marvelous adventure. But a child has his pains: {J1iheuS}
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people do; he is continually being told not to do things, __4__ ,,SV@y;
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comfortable. If he spends most of his time playing about in __7__ B0U(B\~Y
the way that he used to as a child, he will suffer hungry. __8__ l?QA;9_R'
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the laws of his parents, he may go to prison. If, therefore, __9__ G
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1.what改为whatever。whatever引导让步状语从句，相当于no matter what，意思是“无论什么”，“不管什么”，whatever在从句中作宾语。 L2 +cVR
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2.turn改为return。短语in turn表示“轮流地; 挨个, 依次; 反过来”，而在这里是指孩子对父母的回报。 `LNh amp
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3.interesting改为interest。在形容词性物主代词their的后面应跟名词性成分。 F)KR8 (
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4.第一个do改为 are。与前面的is相对应。 (8aj`> y
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5.that改为what。that引导的是定语从句，在本句中应该使用关系代词what，相当于the thing/ things that。 H<[~V0=
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6.not改为no。固定搭配的副词短语“no longer” 04jvrde8-O
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7.comfortable改为comfortably。修饰动词live应为副词而不是形容词。 5L:-Xr{
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8.suffer改为go或become或be。或把hungry改为hunger。 }^iqhUvT F
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9.therefore改为however。此处的条件状语从句表示转折。 JLn v O
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10.making 改为 make。
