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2. 开头万能公式二:数字统计 C]X:@^Hy
原理:要想更有说服力,就应该用实际的数字来说明。 96NZrT
原则上在议论文当中十不应该出现虚假数字的,可是在考试的时候哪管那三七二十一,但编无妨,只要我有东西写就万事大吉了。所以不妨试用下面的句型: S%NS7$`a
According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation. E$u9Jbe
看起来这个数字文邹邹的,其实都是编造出来的,下面随便几个题目我们都可以这样编造: *8Q
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根据最近的一项统计调查显示,大学生向老师请假的理由当中78%都是假的。 7g* "AEk
Travel by Bike |*G$ilu
根据最近的一项统计调查显示,85%的人在近距离旅行的时候首选的交通工具是自行车。 WFGcR9mN?
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根据最近的一项统计调查显示,在某个大学,学生的课余时间的70%都是在休闲娱乐。 S.: m$s
Five-day Work Week Better than Six-day Work? 1v<,nABuJ6
根据最近的一项统计调查显示,98%的人同意每周五天工作日。 &Zxo\[lP
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结尾万能公式: fXL&?~fS
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1. 结尾万能公式一:如此结论 %^
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Obviously(此为过渡短语), we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others. x4_xl
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如果读者很难“显而见之”,但说无妨,就当读者的眼光太浅罢了! zeC@!,l H
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2. 结尾万能公式二:如此建议 UY ^dFbJ
如果说“如此结论”是结尾最没用的废话,那么“如此建议”应该是最有价值的废话了,因为这里虽然也是废话,但是却用了一个很经典的虚拟语气的句型。拽! 7Gos-_s
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一、 长短句原则 D*nNu]|j
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工作还得一张一驰呢,老让读者读长句,累死人!写一个短小精辟的句子,相反,却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末,也可以揭示主题: u%s@B1j
As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar. O(_a6s+m
如此可见,长短句结合,抑扬顿挫,岂不爽哉?牢记! (V06cb*42[
强烈建议:在文章第一段(开头)用一长一短,且先长后短;在文章主体部分,要先用一个短句解释主要意思,然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式,定会让主体部分妙笔生辉!文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。 l%f&vOcd
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国有其君,家有其主,文章也要有其主。否则会给人造成“群龙无首”之感!相信各位读过一些破烂文学,故意把主体隐藏在文章之内,结果造成我们稀里糊涂!不知所云!所以奉劝各位一定要写一个主题句,放在文章的开头(保险型)或者结尾,让读者一目了然,必会平安无事! |
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7)first and foremost, besides, last but not least(强烈推荐) X9S`#N
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9)on the one hand, on the other hand(适用于两点的情况) M];?W
10)for one thing, for another thing(适用于两点的情况) CC~:z/4,N
建议:不仅仅在写作中注意,平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚! oR1HJ2>Z1
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四、 短语优先原则 )<+t#5"
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I cannot bear it. o]jPG
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可以用短语表达:I am looking forward to it. ih[!v"bv
这样字数明显增加,表达也更准确。 ;iq58.
五、 多实少虚原则 .IkQo`_s:
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原因很简单,写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西,不要空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用实词,少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。比如我们说一个很好的时候,不应该之说nice这样空洞的词,应该使用一些诸如generous, ]aDU* tk
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走出房间,general的词是:walk out of the room WW&agr
但是小偷走出房间应该说:slip out of the room ^fq^s T.$
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六、 多变句式原则 %={[e`,
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都希望写下很长的句子,像个老外似的,可就是怕写错,怎么办,最保险的写长句的方法就是这些,可以在任何句子之间加and, }1}L&M@
但最好是前后的句子又先后关系或者并列关系。比如说: h|Ah\P?o
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批评某人缺点的时候,我们总习惯先拐弯抹角说说他的优点,然后转入正题,再说缺点,这种方式虽然阴险了点,可毕竟还比较容易让人接受。所以呢,我们说话的时候,只要在要点之前先来点废话,注意二者之间用个专这次就够了。 N/V~>UJ0{*
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4)失衡句(头重脚轻,或者头轻脚重) <.knM
有些人脑袋大,身体小,或者有些人脑袋小,身体大,虽然我们不希望长成这个样子,可如果真的是这样了,也就必然会吸引别人的注意力。文章中如果出现这样的句子,就更会让考官看到你的句子与众不同。其实就是主语从句,表语从句,宾语从句的变形。 $VNj0i. Pr
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5)附加(多此一举) zXZXp~7)
如果有了老婆,总会遇到这样的情况,当你再讲某个人的时候,她会插一句说,我昨天见过他;或者说,就是某某某,如果把老婆的话插入到我们的话里面,那就是定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语。 Rc2JgV
The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine. iPCDxDLN3V
I don’t enjoy that book you are reading. EN/r{Cm$B
Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going. yB5JvD ?
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文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此,如果非要让你的文章更加精彩的话,那么我希望你引用一个个的排比句,一个个得对偶句,一个个的不定式,一个个地词,一个个的短语,如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势! B*OBXN>'P
Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or simple, there is plenty in London for you. z2U^z*n{
Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean tides. :-tMH02c
We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, to realize our potentials and to pay for our life. (气势恢宏) Px?zih!6
要想写出如此气势恢宏的句子非用排比不可! -LU%z'
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文章主体段落三大杀手锏: q,T4-
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