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2. 开头万能公式二:数字统计 B/:>{2cm
原理:要想更有说服力,就应该用实际的数字来说明。 lS>=y#i3Xv
原则上在议论文当中十不应该出现虚假数字的,可是在考试的时候哪管那三七二十一,但编无妨,只要我有东西写就万事大吉了。所以不妨试用下面的句型: H@K
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According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation. B6^w{eXN
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Honesty g%Th_= qy
根据最近的一项统计调查显示,大学生向老师请假的理由当中78%都是假的。 I67k M{V
Travel by Bike VGkW3Nt0
根据最近的一项统计调查显示,85%的人在近距离旅行的时候首选的交通工具是自行车。 =<Zwv\U
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根据最近的一项统计调查显示,在某个大学,学生的课余时间的70%都是在休闲娱乐。 S]Yu6FtWiO
Five-day Work Week Better than Six-day Work? ,APGPE}I[
根据最近的一项统计调查显示,98%的人同意每周五天工作日。 )< X=z
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结尾万能公式: 1o"y%*"
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1. 结尾万能公式一:如此结论 W0p#Y h:{_
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Obviously(此为过渡短语), we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others. :BC<+T=
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一、 长短句原则 ES2d9/]p-
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工作还得一张一驰呢,老让读者读长句,累死人!写一个短小精辟的句子,相反,却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末,也可以揭示主题: El8.D3
As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar. ;74DT
如此可见,长短句结合,抑扬顿挫,岂不爽哉?牢记! "}y3@ M^
强烈建议:在文章第一段(开头)用一长一短,且先长后短;在文章主体部分,要先用一个短句解释主要意思,然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式,定会让主体部分妙笔生辉!文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。 N
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国有其君,家有其主,文章也要有其主。否则会给人造成“群龙无首”之感!相信各位读过一些破烂文学,故意把主体隐藏在文章之内,结果造成我们稀里糊涂!不知所云!所以奉劝各位一定要写一个主题句,放在文章的开头(保险型)或者结尾,让读者一目了然,必会平安无事! ct4)faM
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5)to begin with, then, furthermore, finally(强烈推荐) Jhq5G"
6)to start with, next, in addition, finally(强烈推荐) dUVTQ18F
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9)on the one hand, on the other hand(适用于两点的情况) ,IX4Zo"a
10)for one thing, for another thing(适用于两点的情况) #mFAl|O
建议:不仅仅在写作中注意,平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚! W&q5cz
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四、 短语优先原则 $ax%K?MBD
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写作时,尤其是在考试时,如果使用短语,有两个好处:其一、用短语会使文章增加亮点,如果老师们看到你的文章太简单,看不到一个自己不认识的短语,必然会看你低一等。相反,如果发现亮点—精彩的短语,那么你的文章定会得高分了。其二、关键时刻思维短路,只有凑字数,怎么办?用短语是一个办法!比如: \\pyu]z
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原因很简单,写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西,不要空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用实词,少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。比如我们说一个很好的时候,不应该之说nice这样空洞的词,应该使用一些诸如generous, xB]
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但最好是前后的句子又先后关系或者并列关系。比如说: @z RB4d$
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Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm. UAO#$o(
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4)失衡句(头重脚轻,或者头轻脚重) F#wa)XH
有些人脑袋大,身体小,或者有些人脑袋小,身体大,虽然我们不希望长成这个样子,可如果真的是这样了,也就必然会吸引别人的注意力。文章中如果出现这样的句子,就更会让考官看到你的句子与众不同。其实就是主语从句,表语从句,宾语从句的变形。 E9hWn0 e
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When to go, Why he goes away… WG{/I/bJ_
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文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此,如果非要让你的文章更加精彩的话,那么我希望你引用一个个的排比句,一个个得对偶句,一个个的不定式,一个个地词,一个个的短语,如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势! xWm'E2
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