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英语作文的总体评分原则(内容与语言两个方面) _:0)uR LS
记分标准如下: b6LwKUl
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13-15(20-17)分:内容切题,包括题中所列三方面的内容:清楚表达其内涵,文字连贯;句式有变化,句子结构和用词正确。文章长度符合要求。 T VuDK
10-12(16-13)分:内容切题,包括题中所列三方面的内容;比较清楚地表达其内涵;文字基本连贯;句式有一定变化,句子结构和用词无重大错误。文章长度符合要求。 M.[A%_|P
7-9(12-9)分:内容切题,基本包括题中所列三方面的内容:基本清楚地表达其内涵;句子结构和用词有少量错误。文章长度符合要求。 G T3wJQ5N
4-6(8-5)分:内容基本功题,基本包含题中所列三方面的内容;语句可以理解,但有较多的句子结构和词错误。文章长度基本符合要求。 ](z?zDk
1-3( 4-1)分:基本按要求写作,但只有少数句子可理解。 FTA[O.tiG
0分:文不切题,语句混乱、无法理解。 5W(S~}
因此,一篇好的作文应基本达到: clcj5=:
1) 有较好的写作基础,文章流畅,遣词造句不当,文章结构完整,内容符合要求; Z6`oGFq
2) 语法基本正确; _kJ?mTk
3) 句法基本准确,句子与句子段落之间过渡连贯; xIrRFK9[Q
4) 有一定词汇量,字数符合要求; og! d
5) 说理清楚,内容充实。 dp&bcR)
6) 就小作文而言,还要做到格式与语域正确。 6z (eW]p
7) 书写干净整洁。如果书写较差,以致影响交际,分数会降低一个档次。 5 GwXZ;(G
考生出现的问题 ]{[8$|Mg
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用汉语思维,逐字翻译。 HfF4BQxm
用词搭配不当。 xyoh
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词汇量小,拼写困难。 Hko(@z
句子逻辑关系混乱。 .Fz5K&E=
Our English class often told stories. &|:T+LVv$+
应改为:We often told stories in our English class. dwQ*OxFl
不会应用关联词转承上下句子和段落。 'pUJlPGx
People learn English to use it , Some learn it to study or work abroad . Others learn it to read books and magazines in English or have something to do with English-speaking foreigners.采用适当关联词,改进为:people learn English for practical purposes :some learn it to study or work abroad, while others learn it to read or communicate in English. sF/X#GG-
语法错误。 8Jz/'
i. 分不清及物与不及物动词,例如:rise和raise; hear和listen等 4zF|}aiQ
ii. 被动与主动语态的误用,例如:interesting和interested; speaking和spoken 等; 0P5!fXs*
iii. 词类混淆,将动词或形容词误作名词用,将名词和动词误作形容词用等;例如:benefit和beneficial; difficult和difficulty; pleasure和pleased等。 `%2e?"OOJ
iv. 混淆可数名词与不可数名词,例如:help, practice 等。
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v. 冠词、情态动词、介词、代词等方面的错误,例如:a English book, should did, must done等。 ^jO$nPDd
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