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医学考博英语破题技巧---写作部分

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英语作文的总体评分原则(内容与语言两个方面) _:0)uR LS  
记分标准如下: b6LwKUl  
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13-15(20-17)分:内容切题,包括题中所列三方面的内容:清楚表达其内涵,文字连贯;句式有变化,句子结构和用词正确。文章长度符合要求。 T VuDK  
  10-12(16-13)分:内容切题,包括题中所列三方面的内容;比较清楚地表达其内涵;文字基本连贯;句式有一定变化,句子结构和用词无重大错误。文章长度符合要求。 M.[A%_|P  
  7-9(12-9)分:内容切题,基本包括题中所列三方面的内容:基本清楚地表达其内涵;句子结构和用词有少量错误。文章长度符合要求。 G T3wJQ5N  
  4-6(8-5)分:内容基本功题,基本包含题中所列三方面的内容;语句可以理解,但有较多的句子结构和词错误。文章长度基本符合要求。 ](z?zDk  
  1-3( 4-1)分:基本按要求写作,但只有少数句子可理解。 FTA[O.tiG  
  0分:文不切题,语句混乱、无法理解。 5W(S~}  
因此,一篇好的作文应基本达到: clcj5=:  
  1) 有较好的写作基础,文章流畅,遣词造句不当,文章结构完整,内容符合要求; Z6`oGFq  
  2) 语法基本正确; _kJ?mTk  
  3) 句法基本准确,句子与句子段落之间过渡连贯; xIrRFK9[Q  
  4) 有一定词汇量,字数符合要求; og! d  
  5) 说理清楚,内容充实。 dp&bcR&#)  
6) 就小作文而言,还要做到格式与语域正确。 6z(eW]p  
7) 书写干净整洁。如果书写较差,以致影响交际,分数会降低一个档次。 5GwXZ;(G  
考生出现的问题 ]{[8$|Mg  
不会审题 E8:4Z$|c  
用汉语思维,逐字翻译。 HfF4BQxm  
用词搭配不当。 xyoh B#'W  
词汇量小,拼写困难。 Hko(@z  
句子逻辑关系混乱。 .Fz5K&E=  
Our English class often told stories. &|:T+LVv$+  
应改为:We often told stories in our English class. dwQ*OxFl  
不会应用关联词转承上下句子和段落。 'pUJlPGx  
People learn English to use it , Some learn it to study or work abroad . Others learn it to read books and magazines in English or have something to do with English-speaking foreigners.采用适当关联词,改进为:people learn English for practical purposes :some learn it to study or work abroad, while others learn it to read or communicate in English. sF/X#GG-  
语法错误。 8Jz/'  
  i. 分不清及物与不及物动词,例如:rise和raise; hear和listen等 4zF|}aiQ  
  ii. 被动与主动语态的误用,例如:interesting和interested; speaking和spoken 等; 0P5!fXs*  
  iii. 词类混淆,将动词或形容词误作名词用,将名词和动词误作形容词用等;例如:benefit和beneficial; difficult和difficulty; pleasure和pleased等。 `%2e?"OOJ  
  iv. 混淆可数名词与不可数名词,例如:help, practice 等。 . k6)  
  v. 冠词、情态动词、介词、代词等方面的错误,例如:a English book, should did, must done等。 ^jO$nPDd  
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18. Faced with…, quite a few people argue that…, but other people conceive differently. RmXC ^VQ  
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用于文章的结尾 cEkf9:_La  
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3. in conclusion… C@!C='b,  
4. on account of this we can find that… e[txJ*SuO  
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