开头万能公式:
v` r:=K 1. 开头万能公式一:名人名言
vKR[&K{Z| 有人问了,“我没有记住名言,怎么办?尤其是英语名言?”,很好办:编!
!Z6{9sKR=] 原理:我们看到的东西很多都是创造出来的,包括我们欣赏的文章也是,所以尽管编,但是一定要听起来很有道理呦!而且没准将来我们就是名人呢!对吧?
Ea=P2:3* 经典句型:
Bbp|!+KP{( A proberb says, “ You are only young once.” (适用于已记住的名言)
@%SQFu@FJ It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever.
6H|S;K+ (适用于自编名言)
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`$NP>%J- As everyone knows, No one can deny that…
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qZCy W 2. 开头万能公式二:数字统计
XX~,>Q}H= 原理:要想更有说服力,就应该用实际的数字来说明。
hv+zGID7 原则上在议论文当中十不应该出现虚假数字的,可是在考试的时候哪管那三七二十一,但编无妨,只要我有东西写就万事大吉了。所以不妨试用下面的句型:
%XTI-B/K According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college
3uMy]HUQ students wanted to further their study after their graduation.
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K|@G t%Y Honesty
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A 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,大学生向老师请假的理由当中78%都是假的。
\j.:3Xr Travel by Bike
-']56o_sQ/ 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,85%的人在近距离旅行的时候首选的交通工具是自行车。
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og' 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,在某个大学,学生的课余时间的70%都是在休闲娱乐。
?1".;foZ Five-day Work Week Better than Six-day Work?
B1Oq!k 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,98%的人同意每周五天工作日。
BORA(, 更多句型:
{: W$LWET A recent statistics shows that …
a: K[ y 结尾万能公式:
t>sE x: 1. 结尾万能公式一:如此结论
)CyS#j#= 说完了,毕竟要归纳一番,相信各位都有这样的经历,领导长篇大论,到最后终于冒出个“总而言之”之类的话,我们马上停止开小差,等待领导说结束语。也就是说,开头很好,也必然要有一个精彩的结尾,让读者眼前一亮,这样,你就可以拿高分了!比如下面的例子:
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1nOCQ\$l manners arise from politeness and respect for others.
j~QwV='S 如果读者很难“显而见之”,但说无妨,就当读者的眼光太浅罢了!
{ "E\Jcjl\ 更多过渡短语:
|D.ND%K& to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus
rN{ c7/| 更多句型:
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]cruF#`% 2. 结尾万能公式二:如此建议
*9i{,I@ 如果说“如此结论”是结尾最没用的废话,那么“如此建议”应该是最有价值的废话了,因为这里虽然也是废话,但是却用了一个很经典的虚拟语气的句型。拽!
]:\dPw`A Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve
8.~kK<)! the problem.
abEmRJTmW 这里的虚拟语气用得很经典,因为考官本来经常考这个句型,而如果我们自己写出来,你说考官会怎么想呢?
[trwBZ^D~ 更多句型:
,?XCyHSgWW Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.
'P}0FktP` Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be
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RX5dO% 写作的“七项基本原则”:一、 长 短 句原则
cs'{5!i] 工作还得一张一驰呢,老让读者读长句,累死人!写一个短小精辟的句子,相反,却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末,也可以揭示主题:
F}qc0 As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is
.GcKa024 to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to
:,I:usW" satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite
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kSh( u 如此可见,长短句结合,抑扬顿挫,岂不爽哉?牢记!
GM<-&s!Uj 强烈建议:在文章第一段(开头)用一长一短,且先长后短;在文章主体部分,要先用一个短句解释主要意思,然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式,定会让主体部分妙笔生辉!文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。二、
V$?SR44>nH 主 题 句原则
J)C/u{o 国有其君,家有其主,文章也要有其主。否则会给人造成“群龙无首”之感!相信各位读过一些破烂文学,故意把主体隐藏在文章之内,结果造成我们稀里糊涂!不知所云!所以奉劝各位一定要写一个主题句,放在文章的开头(保险型)或者结尾,让读者一目了然,必会平安无事!
r>U@3%0& 特别提示:隐藏主体句可是要冒险的!
i7>tU= To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully
>e"#'K0?\ prepared before the exam(主题句). Without sufficient preparation,
DDH:)=;z you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.三、
!GGkdg*-*9 一 二 三原则
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k)Qtfj}uij 1)first, second, third, last(不推荐,原因:俗)
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(ICd} 3)the first, the second, the third, the last(不推荐,原因:俗)
bbyg8;/ 4)in the first place, in the second place, in the third place,
"6?0h[uff lastly(不推荐,原因:俗)
Per1IcN 5)to begin with, then, furthermore, finally(强烈推荐)
%- 0t?/> 6)to start with, next, in addition, finally(强烈推荐)
/RC7"QzL 7)first and foremost, besides, last but not least(强烈推荐)
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~La>?:g <+ 9)on the one hand, on the other hand(适用于两点的情况)
6b \&~b@T 10)for one thing, for another thing(适用于两点的情况)
Gk /fBs 建议:不仅仅在写作中注意,平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚!四、 短语优先原则
~O&:C{9= 写作时,尤其是在考试时,如果使用短语,有两个好处:其一、用短语会使文章增加亮点,如果老师们看到你的文章太简单,看不到一个自己不认识的短语,必然会看你低一等。相反,如果发现亮点—精彩的短语,那么你的文章定会得高分了。其二、关键时刻思维短路,只有凑字数,怎么办?用短语是一个办法!比如:
pD#rnp>WWt I cannot bear it.
KNIn:K^/ 可以用短语表达:I cannot put up with it.
[ ~&/s:Vvo I want it.
C&rkvM8 可以用短语表达:I am looking forward to it.
}2<7%FL 这样字数明显增加,表达也更准确。五、 多实少虚原则
d,n 'n 原因很简单,写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西,不要空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用实词,少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。比如我们说一个很好的时候,不应该之说nice这样空洞的词,应该使用一些诸如generous,
Y\?"WGL)p humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital
wov\kV 之类的形象词。再比如:
D\NKC@(M 走出房间,general的词是:walk out of the room
EGF '"L 但是小偷走出房间应该说:slip out of the room
i5Yb`Z[Y *****走出房间应该说:sail out of the room
xRLT=.ir 小孩走出房间应该说:dance out of the room
FSW_<% 老人走出房间应该说:stagger out of the room
+Kbjzh3<wG 所以多用实词,少用虚词,文章将会大放异彩!六、 多变句式原则
f5VLw`m}.8 1)加法(串联)
R3&Iu=g 都希望写下很长的句子,像个老外似的,可就是怕写错,怎么办,最保险的写长句的方法就是这些,可以在任何句子之间加and,
!_'ur>iR 但最好是前后的句子又先后关系或者并列关系。比如说:
*VhL\IjN] I enjor music and he is fond of playing guitar.
"N bq#w\ 如果是二者并列的,我们可以用一个超级句式:
UIN<2F_ Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm.
>rKIG~P_ 其它的短语可以用:
pm0{R[:T7 besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover
:hk5 .[ 2)转折(拐弯抹角)
ZyPVy 批评某人缺点的时候,我们总习惯先拐弯抹角说说他的优点,然后转入正题,再说缺点,这种方式虽然阴险了点,可毕竟还比较容易让人接受。所以呢,我们说话的时候,只要在要点之前先来点废话,注意二者之间用个专这次就够了。
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W^LY'ypT The coat was thin, but it was warm.
""F5z,' 更多的短语:
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. 3)因果(so, so, so)
]e>w}L(gV 昨天在街上我看到了一个女孩,然后我主动搭讪,然后我们去咖啡厅,然后我们认识了,然后我们成为了朋友…可见,讲故事的时候我们总要追求先后顺序,先什么,后什么,所以然后这个词就变得很常见了。其实这个词表示的是先后或因果关系!
dkBIx$t The snow began to fall, so we went home.
H-*yh! 更多短语:
Yz"#^j}Kg then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a
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6J6BF% 4)失衡句(头重脚轻,或者头轻脚重)
j2.|ln"! 有些人脑袋大,身体小,或者有些人脑袋小,身体大,虽然我们不希望长成这个样子,可如果真的是这样了,也就必然会吸引别人的注意力。文章中如果出现这样的句子,就更会让考官看到你的句子与众不同。其实就是主语从句,表语从句,宾语从句的变形。
YPK(be_|I 举例:This is what I can do.
>xYpNtEs Whether he can go with us or not is not sure.
C>j@,G4 同样主语、宾语、表语可以改成如下的复杂成分:
u4F5h PO] When to go, Why he goes away…
>j(_[z|v3 5)附加(多此一举)
(\hx` Yh=> 如果有了老婆,总会遇到这样的情况,当你再讲某个人的时候,她会插一句说,我昨天见过他;或者说,就是某某某,如果把老婆的话插入到我们的话里面,那就是定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语。
0gy/:T The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.
?o4C; I don’t enjoy that book you are reading.
ukfQe }I Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going.
z.9U}F 其实很简单,同位语--要解释的东西删除后不影响整个句子的构成;定语从句—借用之前的关键词并且用其重新组成一个句子插入其中,但是whom
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3=`3 or that 关键词必须要紧跟在先行词之前。
.4M.y:F 6)排比(排山倒海句)
&5spTMw8 文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此,如果非要让你的文章更加精彩的话,那么我希望你引用一个个的排比句,一个个得对偶句,一个个的不定式,一个个地词,一个个的短语,如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势!
&<5zqsNJ\a Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated
QP^Cx= or simple, there is plenty in London for you.
ceh j; Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such
)oDHeU<& as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean
:W:K:lk tides.
}=UHbU.n~! We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge,
F2dHH^ to realize our potentials and to pay for our life. (气势恢宏)
#ASz;$P 要想写出如此气势恢宏的句子非用排比不可!七、 挑战极限原则
,o{9$H5{ 既然十挑战极限,必然是比较难的,但是并非不可攀!
C'+YQ]u 原理:在学生的文章中,很少发现诸如独立主格的句子,其实也很简单,只要花上5分钟的时间看看就可以领会,它就是分词的一种特殊形式,分词要求主语一致,而独立主格则不然。比如:
oMD>Ywc- The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb
f/NH:1)y the Western Hills.
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FQ2 思维短路,举实例!提出一个观点,举实例!提出一个方案,举实例!而且者也是我们揭示一个观点最好的方式,任何情况下,只要我们无法继续文章,不管三七二十一,尽管举例子!
_AYK435>N In order to attract more customers, advertisers have adopted
*@r/5pM2} every possible stimulative factor in making ads, such as
+L|?~p`V sound, light, colours, cartoon films and human performance.
=Z3 F1Cq? For instance, to advertise a certain food, advertisers will
SSg8}m5)Q ask an actor or actress to sit at a table and devour the
#$+*; seemingly delicious food while they fime him or her.
?|C2*?hZ+ 更多句型:
eRstD>r To take … as an example, One example is…, Another example is…,
He/8=$c% for example二、做比较
7qLpZ/ 方法:写完一个要点,比较与之相似的;又写完一个要点,再比较与之相反的;
%2/EaaR 世界上没有同样的指纹,没有相同的树叶,文章亦同,只有通过比较,你才会发现二者的相同点(through
6V:U(g comparison)和不同点(through contrast)。下面是一些短语:
'8.r-`l( 相似的比较:
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/P3 <"?#k 相反的比较:
kT66;Y[ on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead,
v0+BkfU+p nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with …,
\0I_< …三、换言之
Y>T-af49 没话说了,可以换一句话再说,让你的文章在多一些字,或者文邹邹地说,是让读者更充分的理解你的观点。
GPv1fearl 实际就是重复重复再重复!下面的句子实际上就三个字 I love you!
bMu+TgAT, I am enthusiastic about you. That is to say, I love you.
!r8`Yr n I am wild about you. In other words, I have fallen in love
TG?brgW with you.
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&|ex`nwc0 I cannot bear it.
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:$|HNeDO 因此可以这样说:I cannot bear it. That is to say, I cannot put up with
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?V.cOR`6 更多短语:
^Za-`8#`L in more difficult language, in simpler words, put it more
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