开头万能公式:
.c~;/@{ 1. 开头万能公式一:名人名言
Pme`UcE3H 有人问了,“我没有记住名言,怎么办?尤其是英语名言?”,很好办:编!
1 ht4LRFi 原理:我们看到的东西很多都是创造出来的,包括我们欣赏的文章也是,所以尽管编,但是一定要听起来很有道理呦!而且没准将来我们就是名人呢!对吧?
QLIm+)T 经典句型:
{kW!|h&' A proberb says, “ You are only young once.” (适用于已记住的名言)
hDVD@b It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever.
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m6'YFpf)V 更多经典句型:
OL=IUg" As everyone knows, No one can deny that…
qj/ 66ak 2. 开头万能公式二:数字统计
8]2S'mxE 原理:要想更有说服力,就应该用实际的数字来说明。
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O^sgUT1O According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college
F"a,[i,[W students wanted to further their study after their graduation.
h2uO+qEsu 看起来这个数字文邹邹的,其实都是编造出来的,下面随便几个题目我们都可以这样编造:
Q"QrbU Honesty
c;(}Ih(# 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,大学生向老师请假的理由当中78%都是假的。
e|Lh~sVq Travel by Bike
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根据最近的一项统计调查显示,85%的人在近距离旅行的时候首选的交通工具是自行车。
R,6?1Z:J Youth
q]'VVlP) 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,在某个大学,学生的课余时间的70%都是在休闲娱乐。
Yxi.A$g Five-day Work Week Better than Six-day Work?
:vV?Yv%P)n 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,98%的人同意每周五天工作日。
GAz;4pUZ 更多句型:
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o.y4&bC14; 结尾万能公式:
]9b*!n<z 1. 结尾万能公式一:如此结论
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说完了,毕竟要归纳一番,相信各位都有这样的经历,领导长篇大论,到最后终于冒出个“总而言之”之类的话,我们马上停止开小差,等待领导说结束语。也就是说,开头很好,也必然要有一个精彩的结尾,让读者眼前一亮,这样,你就可以拿高分了!比如下面的例子:
gqGl>=.m Obviously(此为过渡短语), we can draw the conclusion that good
Z(.p=Wg manners arise from politeness and respect for others.
W)j/[ 如果读者很难“显而见之”,但说无妨,就当读者的眼光太浅罢了!
3%k@,Vvt 更多过渡短语:
lD 9'^J to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus
C2DNyMu 更多句型:
njvmf*A?S Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find that…
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sT=>\ 2. 结尾万能公式二:如此建议
P +oCcYp 如果说“如此结论”是结尾最没用的废话,那么“如此建议”应该是最有价值的废话了,因为这里虽然也是废话,但是却用了一个很经典的虚拟语气的句型。拽!
X8?|5$Ey Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve
QeU>%qKT the problem.
X~n Kuo 这里的虚拟语气用得很经典,因为考官本来经常考这个句型,而如果我们自己写出来,你说考官会怎么想呢?
k6G23p[9 更多句型:
/AW6XyMD_ Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.
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:t9(T?2 写作的“七项基本原则”:一、 长 短 句原则
e|]g?! 工作还得一张一驰呢,老让读者读长句,累死人!写一个短小精辟的句子,相反,却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末,也可以揭示主题:
/T*{Mo{B As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is
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!tX14O~B- 如此可见,长短句结合,抑扬顿挫,岂不爽哉?牢记!
b!_l(2 强烈建议:在文章第一段(开头)用一长一短,且先长后短;在文章主体部分,要先用一个短句解释主要意思,然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式,定会让主体部分妙笔生辉!文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。二、
i~k?k.t8 主 题 句原则
y\)bxmC 国有其君,家有其主,文章也要有其主。否则会给人造成“群龙无首”之感!相信各位读过一些破烂文学,故意把主体隐藏在文章之内,结果造成我们稀里糊涂!不知所云!所以奉劝各位一定要写一个主题句,放在文章的开头(保险型)或者结尾,让读者一目了然,必会平安无事!
e`8z1r 特别提示:隐藏主体句可是要冒险的!
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zKgW9j<( prepared before the exam(主题句). Without sufficient preparation,
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I>G)wRpfR' 一 二 三原则
/rJvw 领导讲话总是第一部分、第一点、第二点、第三点、第二部分、第一点…
"ve?7&G7U 如此罗嗦。可毕竟还是条理清楚。考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否结构清楚,条理自然。破解方法很简单,只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了。
qF( ]Ce 1)first, second, third, last(不推荐,原因:俗)
kZF\V7k 2)firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally(不推荐,原因:俗)
{zmo7~= 3)the first, the second, the third, the last(不推荐,原因:俗)
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f~W.i] lastly(不推荐,原因:俗)
"ZT=[&2 5)to begin with, then, furthermore, finally(强烈推荐)
5p"*nkF 6)to start with, next, in addition, finally(强烈推荐)
ki}Uw# 7)first and foremost, besides, last but not least(强烈推荐)
8> O'_6Joj 8)most important of all, moreover, finally
~oSLWA9 9)on the one hand, on the other hand(适用于两点的情况)
w&f29#i;b 10)for one thing, for another thing(适用于两点的情况)
G++kUo< 建议:不仅仅在写作中注意,平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚!四、 短语优先原则
P`U5kNN 写作时,尤其是在考试时,如果使用短语,有两个好处:其一、用短语会使文章增加亮点,如果老师们看到你的文章太简单,看不到一个自己不认识的短语,必然会看你低一等。相反,如果发现亮点—精彩的短语,那么你的文章定会得高分了。其二、关键时刻思维短路,只有凑字数,怎么办?用短语是一个办法!比如:
:!{aey I cannot bear it.
MQ,$'Y5~H 可以用短语表达:I cannot put up with it.
\k;raQR4t* I want it.
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B%'Np7 这样字数明显增加,表达也更准确。五、 多实少虚原则
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原因很简单,写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西,不要空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用实词,少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。比如我们说一个很好的时候,不应该之说nice这样空洞的词,应该使用一些诸如generous,
j|+B| humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital
j7"E0Wc^o_ 之类的形象词。再比如:
TD\QX2m 走出房间,general的词是:walk out of the room
qJISB7F[%O 但是小偷走出房间应该说:slip out of the room
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d@#=cvW 小孩走出房间应该说:dance out of the room
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A3 j>R477A 1)加法(串联)
*?\2Ohp 都希望写下很长的句子,像个老外似的,可就是怕写错,怎么办,最保险的写长句的方法就是这些,可以在任何句子之间加and,
CGv(dE,G&] 但最好是前后的句子又先后关系或者并列关系。比如说:
{9C(\i + I enjor music and he is fond of playing guitar.
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sH+]lTSX6{ Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm.
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=YPWt>\a} besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover
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.z~wu%( 2)转折(拐弯抹角)
Txp~&a03 批评某人缺点的时候,我们总习惯先拐弯抹角说说他的优点,然后转入正题,再说缺点,这种方式虽然阴险了点,可毕竟还比较容易让人接受。所以呢,我们说话的时候,只要在要点之前先来点废话,注意二者之间用个专这次就够了。
?]paAP;4 The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition.
@?gH3Y_ The coat was thin, but it was warm.
cl)MI,/> 更多的短语:
#uey1I@"9 despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of,
fnB-?8K< despite, notwithstanding
's&Vg09D, 3)因果(so, so, so)
U][.ioc 昨天在街上我看到了一个女孩,然后我主动搭讪,然后我们去咖啡厅,然后我们认识了,然后我们成为了朋友…可见,讲故事的时候我们总要追求先后顺序,先什么,后什么,所以然后这个词就变得很常见了。其实这个词表示的是先后或因果关系!
egP3q5~ The snow began to fall, so we went home.
SkPv.H0Id 更多短语:
c~$ipX then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a
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L;BYPZR 4)失衡句(头重脚轻,或者头轻脚重)
J^t=.-a| 有些人脑袋大,身体小,或者有些人脑袋小,身体大,虽然我们不希望长成这个样子,可如果真的是这样了,也就必然会吸引别人的注意力。文章中如果出现这样的句子,就更会让考官看到你的句子与众不同。其实就是主语从句,表语从句,宾语从句的变形。
c/g(=F__[ 举例:This is what I can do.
[5m;L5 Whether he can go with us or not is not sure.
LO` (V 同样主语、宾语、表语可以改成如下的复杂成分:
Ylo@ When to go, Why he goes away…
Ex@#!fz{% 5)附加(多此一举)
lgnF\) 如果有了老婆,总会遇到这样的情况,当你再讲某个人的时候,她会插一句说,我昨天见过他;或者说,就是某某某,如果把老婆的话插入到我们的话里面,那就是定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语。
o'H$g% The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.
^2=Jv.2{| I don’t enjoy that book you are reading.
uO":\<1# Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going.
9k83wACry 其实很简单,同位语--要解释的东西删除后不影响整个句子的构成;定语从句—借用之前的关键词并且用其重新组成一个句子插入其中,但是whom
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7Y!^88,f. 文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此,如果非要让你的文章更加精彩的话,那么我希望你引用一个个的排比句,一个个得对偶句,一个个的不定式,一个个地词,一个个的短语,如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势!
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Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated
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$*2uI?87}: Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such
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KUly"B 要想写出如此气势恢宏的句子非用排比不可!七、 挑战极限原则
1p{\jCi,2 既然十挑战极限,必然是比较难的,但是并非不可攀!
<:%Iq13D 原理:在学生的文章中,很少发现诸如独立主格的句子,其实也很简单,只要花上5分钟的时间看看就可以领会,它就是分词的一种特殊形式,分词要求主语一致,而独立主格则不然。比如:
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'x!q*|zF2 如果您可一些出这样的句子,不得高分才怪!
KIuYWr7& 文章主体段落三大杀手锏:一、举实例
9MGA#a 思维短路,举实例!提出一个观点,举实例!提出一个方案,举实例!而且者也是我们揭示一个观点最好的方式,任何情况下,只要我们无法继续文章,不管三七二十一,尽管举例子!
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u`("x5sa every possible stimulative factor in making ads, such as
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nkG 6. ask an actor or actress to sit at a table and devour the
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57HMWlg 更多句型:
}uZhoA To take … as an example, One example is…, Another example is…,
|1t30_ /gS for example二、做比较
bggSYhJ?\# 方法:写完一个要点,比较与之相似的;又写完一个要点,再比较与之相反的;
Fl|u0SY 世界上没有同样的指纹,没有相同的树叶,文章亦同,只有通过比较,你才会发现二者的相同点(through
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R;,&CQUl in comparison, likewise, similarly, in the same manner
Oj<2_u 相反的比较:
D* Vr)J on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead,
(hmasy6hM nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with …,
i5-V$ Qh …三、换言之
}F@`A?k 没话说了,可以换一句话再说,让你的文章在多一些字,或者文邹邹地说,是让读者更充分的理解你的观点。
eo,m ^& 实际就是重复重复再重复!下面的句子实际上就三个字 I love you!
3`="4 I am enthusiastic about you. That is to say, I love you.
xu_Tocvop I am wild about you. In other words, I have fallen in love
;r`[6[AG with you.
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